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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 6

Tanvi talking to razia
TANVI:hello..suno vo gudiya mil gayi par vo asad ko mila aur unko pata chal gaya ki vo khoon apne kiya..vo saboot ko jaldi court mei denge.

RAZIA:Kya KYA KEHERAHI HO TUM...TUMNE ROKNE KI KOSHISH NAHI KIYA?

TANVI:Kiya par mujhse pehele vo gudiya asad aur zoya ko mil gaya...sub tumhare wajah se hua,kidnap karne ke baad sher ke paas hi chod diya tha tumne zoya ko!

RAZIA:Theek hai theek hai...abb vo gudiya leke tum bhag jao samjhi na? abhi nahi 1 baje jab sub so jayenge na tab!

TANVI:mei gudiya leke aapko de dungi par yaha se kahi nahi jaungi...kyunki i love asad.Mei asad humesha khush rahenge...kala rahengi humari sath bechari..najma ka nigah ho jayega aur zoya vo toh yaha pe mehemaan hai jaldi chali jaayegi vaise bhi asad zyada din usse yaha rehene nahi dega kyunki vo usse nafrat karta hai..hahaa

RAZIA:jo karna hai karo par vo saboot mitha do aur haan iss bare mei kisi ko nahi pata lagna chaliye!

Zoya was behind the door listening to everything...she started crying and was running when she was again close to someone

ASAD:Zoya kya hua...tum roo kyun rahe hai..kisine kuch kaha batao

ZOYA:STAY AWAY FROM ME MR KHAN...DHUR RAHIYE MUJHSE!
she said that was crying and left to her room..and slept

ASAD:Inhe kya hua...kya inhone mujhe abhi tak maaf nahi kiya?

Zoya wokeup in the mid night she was not at all sleepy so she came out and she saw tanveer with the doll...

ZOYA:TANVI!tum uss doll ke sath kya kar rahi ho..vo do mujhe

TANVI:App dur rahiye zoya...app beech mei mat padiye apke liye theek nahi hoga..
zoya chased tanvi then they were near the dinning table

TANVI:Hum keherahe apko dur rahiye.."then she saw the knife in the fruit basket so she took that and warned zoya..

ZOYA:mei inn sub se darne wali nahi hun..MR KHAN MR KHAN PHUPI NAJMA MR KHAN

ASAD:Kya hua zoya?

When tanvi saw asad coming she took the knife and snabbed zoya!

ASAD:ZOYYYAAA!!!

tanvi saw asad comming so she ran away...and asad didn't care..

DILSHAD NAJMA:ZOYA!

ASAD:NAJMA JALDI CALL THE AMBULANCE...ZOYA ZOYA DON'T CLOSE UR EYES...ZOooyya please kuch nahi hoga..KuuCCHH NAHI HOGA OKK ok ok shh its okkk
zoya took her hand and kept it on asad's cheeks..she wanted to tell something but couldn't

ASAD:Its ok tumhe kaha kuch hone wala hai baad mei batao but dont close ur eyess
Zoya's hands which were on asad's cheeks slowing started loosing grip and her hands felll on the ground...

ASAD:ZOYYYAAA! Yeh ambulance.. so he lifted her carefully took her to the car and said Najma jaldi beto ammi please jaldi and they left!

ASAD(in the car):zoyyya please mujhse baat karo...shayari bhi chalenge but please dont be like this...zoya opened her eyes a little
zoya smiled..which made asad cry...no zoya jo tum soch rahi ho vaisa kuch nahi hogaa...tumhe mujhe aur hazaaar shayari sunani hai okk
the car was going in 100 speed asad just didn.t care of whatever came infront of him!

They reached the hospital!
DOCTOR DOCTOR

JUNIOR DOCTOR:O god inhe kya hua... knife?yeh murder case hai so we have to wait tilll the police come uske baad ho kuch kar sakte hai!

ASAD:HAVE U LOST YOUR MIND...APPKO PATA HAI KI AAP KYA KEHERAHE HAI AUR KIISE I AM ASAD ASAD AHEMAD KHAN! FAST

JUNIOR DOC:SORRY U NEED TO WAIT..

SENIOR DOC:usse leke aao...fast!

ASAD:Thanks doctor...doc gave a smile and ran

NAJMA:Bhaijaan...she was crying a lot

ASAD:kuch nahi hoga usse najma hai na ammi!

part 7 aaj hi hazir hoga...and its gonna be the last part...and please iss baar silent readers comment keejiye please😭 it makes me happy 😊
Edited by cyndu_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
I loved all the parts! Keep up the good work:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: saina01

I loved all the parts! Keep up the good work:)


ekk aur part baki hai please read that too..i'll be happy and later do comment 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Upppdateee pleaaaseee!!! cliff hangerss -___-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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abhi abhi abhi update karo naa please :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

abhi abhi abhi update karo naa please :*


mei likh rahi hun kuch der aur pleasee 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soumya02

The best1 i hv evr read.


omg really...thanks a lot 😃and next part jaldi aaraha hai padlo please 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice part
i hope zoya ko kuch nahi hoga
that tanvi uski himmat kaise hui yeh sab karne ki
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Great Job.
I was just thinking about how a scene with Tanveer stabbing Zoya would be, and you wrote it. :)
Can't wait to read the next part. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Part 7 fast please :P you write beautifully :)

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