OS: ZAMEEN ASMAAN (updated)sunday treat page 12

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WHEN NAJMAA AND ZOYA CAME BACK FROM THE SHOPPING...ZOYA TRIED AGAIN TO GAIN MR KHAN'S ATTENTION,BUT FAILED! LATER ASAD WAS GOING TO HIS ROOM SO SHE THOUGH OF GOING TO NAJMA'S ROOM TO SEE ALL THE THINGS THEY SHOPPED!
JUST THEN THEY HEARD TANVI SHOUT.
ASAD CAME RUNNING AND ZOYA WHO WAS THERE ITSELF HELPED TANVI,BY THAT TIME ASAD CAME.

ASAD:ZOYA ARE U FINE,KYA HUA TUMHE ZYADA CHOT NAHI LAGI NA.

ZOYA:MR KHAN MEI NAHI APKI FRIEND GIR GAYI THI,VO BHI USKI SO CALLED TAZIAB KE WAJAH SE

ASAD:TANU R U OK...MISS FAROOQUI WHAT DO MEAN?

ZOYA:TAZIAB KE NAAM PAR ITNA LONG SALWAAR PEHENA THA INHONE AUR KYA HOGA INKE PAUN PE ATHAKAR YEH GIR GAYI..

ASAD:AGAR APKO TAZIAB KA KOI FARAK NAHI HAI TOH DUSRO PE COMMENT MAR KARIYEGA..

ZOYA:HAAWW MR KHAN!

ASAD:TAZIAB SIKHANE KE LIYE AMMI KI ZARURAT HAI..APP JAISE BETI PAKAR APKI AMMI KO LAGA HOGA KI BAS ABB MUJHE AUR NAHI JEENA.

ZOYA:MR KHAN STOP IT.MERE PAAS YAHA ISSI GHAR MEI PHUPI HAI NAJMA HAI.

ASAD:IF YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN "THEY R NOT UR FAMILY" "U R JUST A GUEST IN HERE".

ZOYA FELT LIKE SHE LOST EVERYTHING! THE HOPE SHE HAD AND THE HAPPINESS!

NAJMA:CHALIYE TAANVI MEI APKO APKE CAMRE TAK CHOD AATI HUN!

WHEN NAJMA AND TANVI LEFT ASAD CAME TO KNOW WHAT HE HAD JUST TOLD!

LATER WHEN THEY WENT TO THERE ROOMS,HE EXACTLY KNEW WHERE ZOYA IS SO HE WENT OUT AND FOUND ZOYA SITTING ON THE BENCH.

ASAD:MISS FAROOQUI AAP JO HUMESHA UPPER STARS KO DEKHTI HAI NA TOH AJJ KYA HUA APP AAJ NEECHE ZAMEEN KO DEKH RAHI HAI.(HE THOUGHT OF BEHAVING NORMAL)

ZOYA:MR KHAN APKO PATA MEI KHUSHI KE MAARE USS ASMAAN TAK POUNCH CHUKI THI,MUJHE LAGA MUJHE FAMILY MIL GAYA PHUPI MERI AMMI JAISI NAJMA MERI BEHAN JAISI AUR AAP ..PAR APNE EKK SEC MEI MERE KHUSHION PE PAANI PHERDIYA..AUR MUJHE APNA SAHI AUKAD ZAMEEN DIKHA HI DIYA,THANKS A LOT MR KHAN.

ASAD:ZO..MISS FAROOQUI APP (HE WAS STOPPED BY ZOYA)

ZOYA:GOOD NIGHT MR KHAN.

ASAD:MISS FAROOQUI COFFEE LAYA THA MEI AAPKE LIYE... (ZOYA TURNED TO SEE ASAD)

BUT WHEN ZOYA WAS ABOUT TO TAKE THE COFFEE TANVI CAME.

TANVI:KOI NAHI ASAD HUM HAI NA ZOYA KO JAANA HAI NA HUM APPKE SATH COFFEE PEEYENGE.

ZOYA'S SMILE DISAPERED ONCE AGAIN AND SHE SMILED AT TANVI AND RAN BACK TO HER ROOM. WHEN MADE ASAD MORE SAD.

TANVI:DEEJIYE ASAD.

ASAD KEPT THE COFFEE ON THE BENCH IN ANGER AND SAID GOOD NIGHT AND LEFT!


HOW WAS IT..PLEASE DO TELL I REALLY DONNA ANYTHING ABOUT WRITING OS 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice one.

pls don write all the words in CAPS as its mean shouting on internet and IF doesn't allow so
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Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

wow nice one.

pls don write all the words in CAPS as its mean shouting on internet and IF doesn't allow so



I'll see to it...anyways Thanks a lot 😊
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Originally posted by: cyndu_



I'll see to it...anyways Thanks a lot 😊

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I love ur ending! :D

Please tell me you are going to continue- please PM me when u do!
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cont sun... Really nyc...!



Thannks a lot..i will surely continue 😃
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Originally posted by: fee-fee

I love ur ending! :D

Please tell me you are going to continue- please PM me when u do!



yes i am gonna continue..happy that u liked it 😊
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Thanks..i will update it soon 😊
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PART 2

ZOYA WOKE UP LAST NIGHT SHE HAD MADE HER MIND NOT TO CONVINCE OR TO GAIN ATTENTION FROM MR KHAN!

ZOYA WALKED TO THE KITCHEN

ZOYA:Good morning phupi,app kaisi hai,do i need to help you?

DILSHAD: Good morning beta,i am fine,nahi zyaada kuch kaam nahi hai sirf kheer banani hai.

ASAD: Good morning ammi..good mornin...(zoya left)

DISHAD:Good morning asad.

NAJMA:Dheere se careful tanvi.(and made her sit)

DILSHAD:Kaisi ho beta,aur kaise gir gayi tum?

ZOYA:sare uss TAIZEEB ki vajah se phupi..TAIZEEEB ke naam par itni long long salwaar peheni hui hai toh aur kya hoga.

ASAD:STOP...(he was again interupted by zoya)

ZOYA:Hai na phupi aise TAIZEEEB ka kya faida jisse app safe na rahe. Aur yeh ghungat vo horse ke akho ke side pe daalte hai na jiske madat se horse ki "DHAYAN KISI AUR CHEEZE PE NA BHATKE" BILKUL VAISA HAI.

DILSHAD:Hahahaha Zoya..pagal.

DILSHAD:Theek hai abb aap sub dining p jake beto mei aati hun kheer banakar.

When all were leaving tanvi said..

TANVI:Jammy kuch aajeeb si smell nahi aarahi.

ASAD:YEA.

TANVI:Kahi gas?

zoya saw dilshad lighting the match stick,she though that she must have not fixed the gas properly.
Zoya ran to dilshad and threw away the match stick from dilshad's hand.The match stick fell on zoya's full sleeves which was of nylon.nylon which made zoya sleeve burn and the wax sort of thing which was formed due to her dress burning burnt zoya's hand.

When zoya saw asad coming near to her she hid her hand

ASAD:Ammi app theek hai.

DILSHAD:Haan beta.

Asad checked the gas and with anger fumed on zoya.

ASAD:Dekho tumne gas theek se fix nahi kiya tha..Ammi ko kuch bhi ho sakta tha.

DILSHAD:Ya allah Zoya ne bacha liya mujhe.

ASAD:Yeh hua bhi ussiki wajah se hai.i really dont know what's her problem!

Zoya ran to her room running...

DILSHAD:Zoya rukho beta please..ASAD kyun uss bechari par aase chillaya tumne?

ASAD:Ammi vo bechari nahi hai ok!

DILSHAD:Asad meine tumhe kya sikhaya hai "jo galti karta hai agar vo usse sudarde toh"?

ASAD: Unne maaf kar deni chaiye aur unpe gussa nahi karna chaiye!

DILSHAD:Dekho uss ladki ne meri liye aag ka saamna kiya.

This sentence of DILSHAD made ASAD guilty and it even flashed to him that she is scared of fire.
God vo meri ammi ke liye uske madi kamzori ka samna kiya FIRE..yeh meine kya kar diya.

Later in dinning table...
Dilshad tried to call zoya but she told she wont come..tanvi najma and dilshad were having breakfast ALL were sad but tanvi was normal.

After breakfast Dilshad left..later Najma...When Asad was about to leave tanvi stopped him..

TANVI:Asad please mujhe meri room tak jane mei help karo..

ASAD:Najmaaa

NAJMA:JI bhai jaan?

ASAD:Tanvi ko uske room takk chod do
tanvi aur kuch?

TANVI:YEA..(she was again stopped by asad)

ASAD:Toh najma ko bol do

TANVI:par asad..

ASAD:Take care!

TANVI:HE IGNORED ME!


Kaisa tha pleaasee do comment
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Edited by cyndu_ - 12 years ago
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really nice! plese do PM me for the next upate

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