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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

really liked this os...loved the fact that asad ignored tanvi...pls do continue...

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

hey i read it noe and i really liked! please update soon and can you pm me?? il buddy you!

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

PART 3

Asad was feeling really guilty he thought of going to her!Nahi so gayi hogi kal baat karunga.He thought of just going and seeing her when he went to zoya's room he found open firstaid box and some antiseptic.

ASAD:yeh kyun khula pada hai?i hope she is fine!

Morning

ZOYA:hello (phone call)

OTHERSIDE:helllo beta tum uss din vaha ghar mei aayi thi na aur mujhse poocha ki inn mei se mei kisi ko janta hun?

ZOYA:haan haan mei vohi hun bataiye aapko kuch pata chala pleasee na mat kahiye.

OTHERSIDE:beta uss photo mei se mujhe ekk insaan ka pata mil gaya hai,likhlo beta!

ZOYA:jii uncle...shukriya uncle appko pata nahi hai ki apne mere liye kya kiya hai.

zoya got up from the bed got ready and went down where she found dilshad.

ZOYA:goood morning phupi goooddd morning

DILSHAD:arre wah aaj bohot khush ho aap koi khush khabari?

ZOYA:Ji phupi, uss din Mr khan aur mei mere abbu ko dhunde gaye the waha par ekkk uncle ne kaha ki uss photo mei se kisi na kisi ki number dene ki khosish karenge..aur abhi unhone call karke diya,mei waha ja rahi hun!

DILSHAD:abhi toh 6:30 hai zoya aur dekho na koi nahi utha aur mei breakfast bhi nahi banaya.

ZOYA:6:30 hai toh kya hua aur koi nahi phupi mei bahar ka kuch kha lungi you know that i love street food.

DILSHAD:theek mei asad ko tumahre sath jannne ke liye keheti hun ruku!

ZOYA:nahi phupi mujhe unke sath nahi jaana mei akheli chali jaungi,bye phupi aur breakfast meri liye thoda bachake rakhiye ga app aaj khud kuch banane wali hai na?

DILSHAD:Haan par tum late aaogi na toh tum luch mei breakfast karogi?

ZOYA:Haan haan bye!

Later when zoya left afer some 5-6 mins Asad woke up.

ASAD:good morning ammi

DILSHAD:good moring beta..aaj kya hua sub itne jaldi kyun uth rahe hai tab zoya aur abb tum!

ASAD:zoya..?

DILSHAD:vo kehe rahi thi uss din ekk addmi ne kaha ki vo zoya ki madat karenge photo mei se kisi ko dhundega unka phone aaya tha aur unhone zoya ko adresss diya hai (before she said ki zoya waha gayi hai asad interupted)

ASAD:toh mujhe aur miss farooqui ko waha jana hai.

DILSHAD:vo already jaa chuki hai!

ASAD:WHAT VO CHALI GAYI...VO BHI AAKELE AUR MUJHE BATAYA BHI NAHI.

DILSHAD:meine kaha usse ki mei asad ko jaga dungi par usne mana kar diya!

Asad left with anger to his room.

Zoya on the otherside went to the place of the adress given.

ZOYA:yeh toh vohi ghar hai jaha mei raghu singh ko follw kiya tha but..?

she went in with a burka and found the house empty.otherside she heard "TUMHE SAMJH NAHI AATA"?

zoya followed the sound and found a lady talking "JO KARNA HAI KARO PAR MUJHE VO GUDIYA AUR SABOOOT LAKE DO BILLO RANI"

zoya saw a man comming out so she left from there and though "ki raat ko anna behetar hoga"!But she was cought by raghu singh who had knife with him.

ZOYA:jii nahi she was running when raghu singh attacked zoya when gave her a cut on the burnt wound!

She somehow reached home where she found Dilshad sitting but zoya didn't tell anything and left!

Later asad came to the hall and Dilshad said

DILSHAD: asad zoya wapas aagayi par pata nahi dari dari aur pareshaan thi!

ASAD:WHAT MEI ABHI JAKE DEKHTA HUN!

asad entered zoya's room without knocking!

he saw zoya was hurt and was putting some medicine on that

ASAD:ZOya kya hua..chot kaise lagi..god yaha pe pehele hi burn hai aur uske upper se yeh cut! kisne kiya zoya,batau! whenn zoya was applying he took the cotton and stareted applying it.

ZOYA:i am fine Mr khan!

ASAD:no u r not miss farooqui! mujhe kyun nahi bulaya agar aap jaa rahi thi! agle baarse aase mat karega "APKO MERI KASAM"!

ZOYA:what's wrong with YOU Mr khan aap aase kyun baat kar rahe hai.

then asad started cleaning the wound the moment asad kept the cottton with antiseptic zoya screamed.asad was hurt seeing zoya like that so he was like sshh! he carefully cleaned and cover the wound!

ASAD:Apne kuch khaya? apne breakfast nahi kiya tha na.
Zoya moved her face right to left left to right saying no

Seeing the cute thing zoya did asad smiled!

ASAD:ekk min..tamatar!

instead tanvi came running kya hua asad and zoya apko kya hua!

later najma came running and saw asad zoya too close and zoya's hand on asad's leg..then she saw that zoya's hurt!

NAJMA:Kya hua zoya..bohot dard ho rahi hai..thekk hojayega (she is smart didn't ask ki kya hua kaise hua kab hua jo hua and all like tanvi) Ji bhai jaan apne kyun bulaya?

ASAD:Zoya ne breakfast nahi kiya hai tum yaha lekar aao!

NAJMA:JII bhaijaan!

ZOYA:TAMATAR vo toast nahi vo laao jo phuphi ne banaya hai!
ASAD SMILED

NAJMA:ji she smiled and left...

BUT tanvi was stilll there!

najma came with the break fast and left and tanvi said

TANVI:mei khila deti hun apke right hand pe chot lagi hai na

ASAD:Thanks taanu par tum jaao mei khila dunga! which made zoya akhe pad pad ke stare-o-fy asad!

TANVI left and asad turned to zoya with a smile but all smiled vanished seeing zoya!

ASAD:app mujhe aase kyun dekh rahi hai? yeh peheli baar thodi na hai jab mei aapko khila raha hua!
they both together remembered that dhaba and the things happened to them there in mangalpur!

Asad gave her a pain killer and was about to leave but couldn't so she sat near her!

How was it please do comment 😊

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malini

@malini96

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nise update

plz continue soon and thanks for the pm...

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maria

@maria_awan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

nice yaar but asad ko thori akal ajayey jaldi

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Hey ...

That was fab !!!

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awww!!! That was perfect! But I think Zoya should've played hard to get a bit more...and She should find that doll!!! And stupid Tanvi -.- hate that biatch xD LOL <--- oops! xD Please PM me for next update!!! :)))

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suchishah

@suchishah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Flawless...u need to continue soon...thanx for pm

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s0n00smi

@s0n00smi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

good one... 😆 enjoyed ... waiting for next part...

Akdu ahamed khan ko thoda aur pareshashan karna..please.. he he😆

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

PART 4

Asad had slept there itself near zoya actually very near to zoya..he was woken up as zoya moved her hands it her sleep. Asad saw zoya sleeping so he left to his room!

After some 10 minutes zoya woke up..she saw the side table but there was empty jug but she was really thirsty so she walked to kitchen!There at the side she found tanvi talking but later she found her shouting "MEI BILLO HUN SAMJHI NA BILLO" zoya was confused but again tanvi continued "DEKHLENA JALDI HI TUMKO VO GUDIYA DHUNKE DIKHAUNGI"

Zoya was completely confused when she was going back to her room she remebered that lady telling "BILLO RANI" too.

She didn't know while thinking she reached the hall..while she was walking she was very close to someone..someone with "thodi open shirt" someone with "six pack" n then she got who it was Mr khan.

ASAD:Zoya tum theek ho?..kya hua? tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

ZOYA:pani peene aayi thi Mr khan!

ASAD:o ok ekk min tum yaha beto mei leke aata hun!

In less than 25 sec Asad was back with a glass of water..he gave it to Zoya but he found her lost

ASAD:Miss farooqui? kaha kho gayi aap yeh leegiye!

ZOYA: Mr khan aap bhi na itna sare pani lene ki kya zarurat thi puri glass bhari hui hai..waste ho jayega toh?

ASAD:Its ok miss farooqui app peejiye!

ZOYA:kya okk Mr khan apko pata nahi apko pani bachani chaiye aur app!

ASAD:ok miss farooqui mei pee lunga..fine ab app peejiye!

Asad saw zoya she drank the whole glass of water.

ASAD:Apne toh pura glass paani peeliya?

ZOYA:Haan? kyun appko chaiye tha.

Asad though of stoping that before he goes mad!

ASAD:nahi nahi its alright,chaliye mei apko apke room tak chod aaunga!

They walked into zoya's room asad made zoya to lay down and he left!
Zoya was still thinking about the connection of billo-that lady and tanveer!

Morning
ZOYA:Good morning phupi!

DILSHAD:good morning zoya..tum theek ho na abb?zyada dard nahi ho raha na?

ZOYA:I am fine phupi! app itni sad kyun hai o god! i almost forgot aaj court! she stopped as she saw her phupi crying!

zoya went and hugged dilshad and said

ZOYA:Kuch nahi hoga phupi the case depends on me and Mr khan agar vo sach kahenge jo jhoooth hai toh mei jhooth kahungi jo sach hai!

DILSHAD:matlab?

ZOYA:apko jaldi pata chalega par app dekhiyega ki yeh baat Mr khan ko na pata chale!

ASAD:Good morning...zo Miss farooqui app kaisi hai..feeling better?

ZOYA:yea Mr khan!

3 pm they had to go to the court now it was 1 pm but sub ki baare baj rahi thi
Asad was sad...dilshad was sad...najma was sad..zoya was sad...aur tanvi uski emotion ke baare mei kisi ko pata hi nahi chal raha tha!

Zoya though of making everyone's mood proper so she though of making kababs

ZOYA:phupi mujhe kababs banane hai please!

DILSHAD ASAD NAJMA:ZOYYYAA???

ZOYA:WHAT? mujhe banani hai..app log chinta mat keejiyega mei khud bana dungi

Zoya left and after some time she came back with some awesome kababs!
Dilshad and najma smiled as she kept it on dining table and though of cleaning the mess she had made of herself!

By the time she came tanvi had already given the kababs to Mr khan and ASAD'S health worsen first but later MORE he fell on the ground and started coughing!
zoya searched in her internet and she got to know that it happens to the people alergic to peanuts and she read these people have a injection which if injected make the person better!

zoya ran to Mr khan's room and stared searching..and she got it so she ran and injected it to asad! Asad was better and najma gave him a glass of water!

ASAD:yeh apne kya banaya Miss farooqui...yeh apne issiliye kiya na taki mei bimar padjaun aur court na jaa saku "AASE GALAT FAMILY KISKO HAI VO SUNLE AGAR MEI MARNE WALA BHI HUN NA TAB BHI MEI COURT ZARUR JAUNGA"!

ZOYA:wait Mr khan agar aap itni hi interested the court jane par toh apne kabab kyun khaya...meine banaya zarur tha apko diya kisne? yeh(pointing tanvi) janti hogi ki apko peanuts se allergy hai and she even knows that kabas mei peanuts dalte hai toh give it a better taste! kyun?!?!?

ASAD:SORRY! OK...TANNU TUM...TUMHE PATA THA NA KI MUJHE PEANUTS SE ALLERGY HAI?TOH PHIR KYUN?

TANVI:Sorry asad..mei bhool gayi thi.

ASAD:BHOOL GAYI...KAL HI TOH TUMNE DINING MEI KAHA THA KI MERI RELETED KOII BAAT TUM NAHI BHOOL SAKTI TOH AAJ KYA HUA?

TANVI:vo asad..mei vo vo..

ASAD:UNBELIVEABLE!!!!!! and he left!

how was it please do comment..! and 3-4 updates (parts) baki hai first i though of going with the episode then i thought its ok! But it was really fun writing and your responses 😊

Edited by cyndu_ - 12 years ago

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