~Dil-e-Muztar~ AsYa FF Part 7 updtd Pg. 74

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
Just read all part up to now and they are really good :-) please pm me when you continue, would love to read more :D

Thank you Nikki di :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: AnjaliSharma
Awesomeee update! :)
Finally you updated!! :)

Hahaha :D Thanks Anju :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Ahhh update fast, this is getting really good, \AsYa are meant to be, where did Ayaan come from.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
Awesome part bacha
I really feel bad for Zoe.
I wish she may not go to Ayaan's home now.
I want her back to Asad's family.
This update was wonderful.
It was really amazing to read Asad crying for Zoe.
Please update the next part soonest.
love u
Muah!
Take care!

Thanks diduuu <3 :) so glad u commented :)
Nope...dun worry she won't go back to Ayaan :) Updating in a few minutes :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: flowergarden
ITS REALLY BEAUTIFUL DEAR!!
LOVE IT!!
PLZ UPDATE SOON..
THANKS FOR SHARING UR THOUGHTS & FOR THE NICE STORY

Thank you so much :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
Superb up-date...
Dilshad and Asad should have stopped Zoya to go in that hell and marry that so-called Man...Can't wait for the next up-date...😊

Thank you<3 :)

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Chotu_Babu
LiLL PrinceSSS...👍🏼

loved d part dear.. such an emotional one...
but glad dat zoi is fine now but wat doc is wanna say??
hope nothing go bad 😭

but baby.. aap sudhrogi nahi, na???
itna chotu sa update...😭

anyways, faida nhi hain.. i knw ur height of laziness.. LOL...

so if possible madam ji aur agar aapka mood ho toh update soon.. plshhh...😊

take care dear,
love u,
ur jaanu di ❤️

p.s - mm... princess... can u plz tell me d meaning of the title of ur FF??? 😊

Thanks jaanu di :).glad u liked the part and commented :)
Hahaha :D aap ko pata hai ke mein sudhrungi nahi so why waste energy? :P
Dun worry...will update in a few minutes :)
Di...dil-e-muztar means restless or impatient heart...:)
Love u too di :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: dmegha
Awesome update buddy!
Loved each bit of it!

Thanks dear<3 :)

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Hello guys! :)
Well, here I am...back with part 2(b) :D Hope you guys like it...do leave your comments!:)

All the emotions which were bottled inside her, started to come out as tears, which flew down the corner of her eyes.

"Zoya..." She heard Dilshad's extremely concerned voice as she felt her soft hand wiping her tears, "Beta...kya hua?" She said and Zoya immedietly threw her arms around her and hugged her, sobbing in her warm and soothing embrace. Dilshad kept carressing her back in order to calm the poor thing down, but all she did was sob harder.

"Phupi..." She tried to speak, "phupi...wo...wah-wahan...wo log..." She tried narrating everything to her but all she could do was stammer so she kept sobbing. Dilshad kept carressing her back in order to calm her down.

"Zoya, meri jaan" Dilshad said, sitting beside her, cupping her face, "Jo bhi hua...uss mein tumhari koi galti nahi hai...It was meant to happen beta" Zoya hugged her, sobbing on her chest

"Phupi...Ayaan..." Dilshad closed her eyes in pain. What is she going to tell her? How is she going to console her?

"Beta...maybe you and Ayaan were never meant to be together" Said Dilshad, "Aur jahan tak unn logon ka sawal hai...tou unhe nahi pata unhone kia khoya hai. Zoya, hume tum pe poora bharosa hai...hum jaante hain ke tum aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti"

"Haan Zoya..." She heard Najma's voice, "Unhone aap ko galat samajh ke apna hi nuksaan karwaya hai" Najma said and hugged her

"Zoya..." Nikhat came forward and held her hand, "mujhe maaf kar do Zoya...mein ghar walon ke saamne kuch keh nahi paayi...I am sorry..."

"Nahi Nikhat, tumhari koi galti nahi hai" Said Zoya in a meek voice, "Par mujhe khushi iss baat ki hai ke tumne apne dil mein hi sahi...par tumhe mujh pe bharosa tha"

"Sab theek ho jae ga beta" Dilshad said and Zoya hugged her, trying to find peace in the motherly embrace.

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"Mr. Khan, even though she is fine but she is mentally stressed" Disclosed the Doctor to Asad, who just nodded, not knowing how to react.

"Dekhiye Mr. Khan, wo physically se zyaada mentally stressed hain...and this is not good for her health"

"Yes Doctor...I know, she's been through quite much in...just a few hours" Said Asad, pain reflecting in his eyes, as if pleading to Allah to give all her pain to him.

"I understand. But that doesn't mean she'll continue taking stress...it can lead to depression" Asad looked up, "mein bas aap se yeh keh raha hun ke unn ke dimagh se yeh saari tensions nikal dein...keep her busy, so that she doesn't have time to think about it...make her feel normal and happy" The Doctor smiled up at him and he nodded, understanding his words.

"All the best" The Doctor smiled once again, patted his shoulder and left while he stood there trying to fathom his words. He had to take Zoya out of this mess. He can't see her like this! He desperately wanted his old Zoya back.

He walked up to Zoya's room and stood there; witnessing the scene in front of him. Dilshad had Zoya in her embrace who was continuously sobbing.

Edited by sweetypie_16 - 12 years ago

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

A/N

Well, this is just a short note regarding pms. Guys, if you want pms so please send me a buddy request...it's a hectic task otherwise. I hope you guys understand :)
And yes, one more thing. People ask ne what actually Dil-e-muztar means? Jaanu di (Chotu_babu) you raised a same question, ryt? :P well it means a restless or impatient heart :) hope its clear :D

And not to forget, a special Thank you to Appie (Mishumptydumpty) for sending all the pms:) thanks a ton appie :D love you alot :D

Edited by sweetypie_16 - 12 years ago