~Dil-e-Muztar~ AsYa FF Part 7 updtd Pg. 74

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Annie

@_Annie_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: -ChocoPie-
itna chotu!

big one na! :(

liked it. update soon!

Aww...the next update will surely be longer :) thanks for commenting :)

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Annie

@_Annie_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: muskaan23
have i said this before?? I just simply love the ways you write!!!👏...really looking forward to read the next part... to b very honest, i love reading FF's n stuff.. but since long i haven't come across anything which really got me hooked ... but u got me from the very second with the title Dil-E-Muztar... now i daily check IF just to see if u have written something new😊... looking forward for the next part!!

OMG...girl, I love you!
Thanks for such an awesome comment and honest appreciation :) Your comment really means a lot to me! :)
I hope you'll keep loving and supporting me like this! :)

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Meli Princess ne update kiya..
sachchi???
omg!! can't blve my eyes...

great part princess...
loved it !!!
but but but...
too small as usual..

fir bhi quite fast update..
so maaf kiya.. 😉

t.c lill princess...
luv u lotsss...

-ur
jaanu di ❤️

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

A gr8 work

Read chps 2a and 2b

I really enjoyed reading it

Sorry for short comment as my exams are going on and I am inactive

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Khan Sadaf

@_Sadaf_

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Well, firstly I wasn't knowing that you're writing on AsYa. 😕

Sorry about that. But your fault too. Why didn't you temme? 😭

Anyways, that's fine. 😛

Glad that you're writing on AsYa too!! 😊

I'll start with the title first!

Such a beautiful title!! 'Dill-e-Muztar' ❤️

This show is having Naqvi, as in Imran Abbas Naqvi in it. Right?

Well I should be right coz saw some pics of this show on his page on fb!! 😆

Coming to the update, Chotu, you're fantastic!! 👏

Felt really nice reading your work after so long!! 😳

Aww! Poor Zoee!! Felt really bad for her! 🥺

You described her pain really well!!
And my poor baby,Asad. He loved her but couldn't express. 😕

He must have been broken when he saw his love getting married to his own brother!! 💔

Nice storyline Chotu!! & I'm loving the way you're writing it! 👍🏼

Well, I always love whatever you write!! 😆

Loved Dilshaad & Najma as usual. Good to see Nikhat with Asad's family. 😊

Hope Asad succeeds in bringing his old Zoya back!!
Update soon!!

Love,

Sadaf 😳

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Hey I love this story a lot.. Do continue soon!!!

Thanks for the pm.. Just read this in one go...

Dee

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Wow! Super cool!!!🤗 Please continue soon. And can you please send me a buddy request because I'm not able to send one due to some error.😔 I really want to read more from you. Please...