Lonelier than before - AsYa SS [UPDATED PART 5]

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suchitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Heya it was fab...amazing...bt v want a realy long 1...continue soon...n u write awsum :)

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kiran khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Beautiful. Waiting for the next one. You're an amazing writer!

"the biggest coward is a man who awakens a women's love with no intention of loving her."<-- This hit hard!

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Hey ...

That was brilliant !!!

So Zoya finally got a clue about her Abbu ... :)

But felt bad when Dilshad and Asad fought :(

Aww Asad was actually thinking about Zoya when his mum was talking about the girl :)

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Andrea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

NICE! 😊
Asad needs a reality check ASAP. Good to at least get it in a story if not from the actual show.

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kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Great update!!! It was amazing!!!!

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598470

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

"the biggest coward is a man who awakens a women's love with no intention of loving her."

Damn this quote, it really touches the heart.

Lovely update, you need to continue soon :)

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Manpreet23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Nice :) continue soon.

Edited by Manpreet23 - 12 years ago

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Barayah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Amazing! Love it! And I'm glad your putting in the Zoya finding her Abbu plan also! Thanks for the PM :)))

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Yuks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Nice update. Am waiting for Asad's reaction to Zoya's news

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

*CUTS YOUR AIR SUPPLY WITH A TIGHT HUG*

Thanks for the PM! This is just amazing! I love the confrontation between Dilshad and Asad and how his views on love are so hopeless.

And of course, how he inevitably thinks of Zoya in between. ;) Just beautifully put!

*CLAPS*

And I also love that you've brought in the whole aspect of love and trust and everything. The quotes used were just beautiful! :D

And moreover, Zoya has some self-respect. :D Damn good! I hope this Mister on the phone will give her some recompense. :D

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