Lonelier than before - AsYa SS [UPDATED PART 5]

jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hey it was wonderful...so Asad don't need such girl in his life but i want to see him breaking down on listening that zoya is leaving... please update soon and thanks for the pm...

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

hey it was a really nice chapter! please update soon!

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Manasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Wow it was really fantastic!!!I just read all 3 parts👏👏👏👏

Please update soon & PM me when you update. I have added you to my buddy list😊

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Aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Nice... story is getting interesting...

thanks for the pm...

plz continue soon😳

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Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Astounding and extremely impressive dear !

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kdramafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

2 days. 2 updates. Ahaan!!! I like it😉

And a longer one too. 😃

Getting to read about appi and jiju after so long. God!! I miss them so much!! So so so much

I wonder when will we get to see them again in the show

I loved their cute nok-jhoks regarding Zoya and her marriage

Ohh dearie you used that quote

You used it at a perfect place👏 FLAWLESS!!

Zoe gonna leave the house. Forever.

Poor soul is in a dilemma. She has to leave the house and knows her dearest Phuphi and her BFF Najma would be disappointed. But she must know or maybe deep down she already knows-You'll never get what you truly deserve if you remain attached to what you're supposed to let go of.

And Asad, he fought with his mother.😭

His mother was trying to explain him the other side of the coin but no. He has his own set of priorities and principles. He feels his father left them only for money. His mother was right, "Just because you don't understand love doesn't mean you get to belittle it." Asad Miyaan one thing you should know- Love is individual to each person and I don't think you can define it before experiencing it because it isn't going to be the same for everybody.

Meanwhile, Asad couldn't stop thinking about what his Ammi said to him. But that wasn't his problem. Not the words. But the images in his head. Those were a problem. Because every time he thought of his Ammi's words, he thought of Zoya. He thought of her little quirks. He thought of her laughter. Her tears. Her blind trust. Her caring attitude. And then, as if he could shake his head and displace the image of Zoya, he walked away shaking his head.

This proves, he's already in love. 😳

Love is the condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own.

Yay!! Finally there's a ray of hope. That call from Mr. Naib seems to be a silver lining in the dark clouds that are surrounded across Zoya😃

Hope she gets some help from him and Ayaan is a smart guy😉

P.S. How the hell did you thank me for a mere quote

Aap kya bhul gayi dosti ke asool

There's no thank yous' and sorrys' involved in friendship.

The next time you thank me for anything and i swear I won't comment

Okay kuch zyada hi hoga shaayad. I know I wrote crap. 😆 Mujhe bhi nahi pata maine kya likha hai bas mann me aaya likh diya. if you want me to hit with jhootas and chappals

then you are allowed

Because I know I would have written shit, as usual. *chuckles*

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Peppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

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reaally interesting SS!!!! pls continue soon!!! loving it!!! and PLEAAASSSEEE pm me!!!!

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princess_T

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Very Interesting. I would love to read the next part as soon as possible. Continue Soon! Thanks for the PM!

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e_enigma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: havokhotline
*CUTS YOUR AIR SUPPLY WITH A TIGHT HUG*

Thanks for the PM! This is just amazing! I love the confrontation between Dilshad and Asad and how his views on love are so hopeless.
And of course, how he inevitably thinks of Zoya in between. ;) Just beautifully put!
*CLAPS*

And I also love that you've brought in the whole aspect of love and trust and everything. The quotes used were just beautiful! :D

And moreover, Zoya has some self-respect. :D Damn good! I hope this Mister on the phone will give her some recompense. :D

CAN"T BREATHE!

Awe! I'm so glad that you hugged me hard enough to kill me!😆 LOL

Thank you :)

Well, what's love without trust? :P. Yup, I love the quote too :) ( Thank you asyaforlife)

That's another thing, self-respect is just so damn important. Even for men. Nobody should stop respecting and loving themselves.

Hehe, thank you for your ahmazing comment! :)

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e_enigma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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2 days. 2 updates. Ahaan!!! I like it😉

And a longer one too. 😃

Getting to read about appi and jiju after so long. God!! I miss them so much!! So so so much

I wonder when will we get to see them again in the show

I loved their cute nok-jhoks regarding Zoya and her marriage

Ohh dearie you used that quote

You used it at a perfect place👏 FLAWLESS!!

Zoe gonna leave the house. Forever.

Poor soul is in a dilemma. She has to leave the house and knows her dearest Phuphi and her BFF Najma would be disappointed. But she must know or maybe deep down she already knows-You'll never get what you truly deserve if you remain attached to what you're supposed to let go of.

And Asad, he fought with his mother.😭

His mother was trying to explain him the other side of the coin but no. He has his own set of priorities and principles. He feels his father left them only for money. His mother was right, "Just because you don't understand love doesn't mean you get to belittle it." Asad Miyaan one thing you should know- Love is individual to each person and I don't think you can define it before experiencing it because it isn't going to be the same for everybody.

Meanwhile, Asad couldn't stop thinking about what his Ammi said to him. But that wasn't his problem. Not the words. But the images in his head. Those were a problem. Because every time he thought of his Ammi's words, he thought of Zoya. He thought of her little quirks. He thought of her laughter. Her tears. Her blind trust. Her caring attitude. And then, as if he could shake his head and displace the image of Zoya, he walked away shaking his head.

This proves, he's already in love. 😳

Love is the condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own.

Yay!! Finally there's a ray of hope. That call from Mr. Naib seems to be a silver lining in the dark clouds that are surrounded across Zoya😃

Hope she gets some help from him and Ayaan is a smart guy😉

P.S. How the hell did you thank me for a mere quote

Aap kya bhul gayi dosti ke asool

There's no thank yous' and sorrys' involved in friendship.

The next time you thank me for anything and i swear I won't comment

Okay kuch zyada hi hoga shaayad. I know I wrote crap. 😆 Mujhe bhi nahi pata maine kya likha hai bas mann me aaya likh diya. if you want me to hit with jhootas and chappals

then you are allowed

Because I know I would have written shit, as usual. *chuckles*

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DUDE! Those monkeys are soo cuuute!

Thank you for this! It made me laugh sooo hard. And I know, I want to see her Appi and Jiju back in the show too. I loved the little girl monkey hitting the other little boy monkey. Such a perfect relationship between those two monkeys ;).

Well said! Both about the letting go and the love thing. Beautifully said! :D🤗 Are those quotes too or are those your thoughts? Doesn't matter. They are beautiful!

Well since the other two are a little too much in love, I thought atleast someone needs to be a little smart.

NOOO! Don't stop commenting.

I'll do anything! I swear. Jahanpanda...Tofu qubool karo! ;) [I love how in that movie quote, there are two things that relate to QH]

Dearie, you and me have very different definitions for the word 'shit'. I love this. This comment is pure gold. <3 <3 <3

P.S. I wanna love your comment.. :(. Like is frriggin not enough. Damn. It.

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