Lonelier than before - AsYa SS [UPDATED PART 5] - Page 4

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

This was heart wrenching

The more I read your story, the more I feel bad for Zoe. But she is being strong. I like this Zoe.

Heart breaks are the worst thing that can happen to anybody. No pain is more painful than the one given by the one you love.

I love your writing style, simple yet beautiful and the way you depict Zoe's pain and agony.

Keep up the good work dear and make the next part very soon. Want to read more.

P.S. Make this into a SS/FF

P.S.S. If our comments brings smile on your beautiful face then it's your work that compel us to drop our two cents and share our feelings😳 and I'm thankful to you for that. Don't forget that.

Just wanted to spill my heart out. This can be irrelevant but still. Hope you don't mind.

In the show, Zoya is behaving way too weird and dumb. Doing all the silly things in the world to get Asad's attention. She must know this quote

Sometimes, the best way to get a person's attention is to stop giving them yours.

And Asad,

The biggest coward is a man who awakens a woman's love with no intention of loving her.

That's it. Sorry if this was stupid.

Love,

Diya

Originally posted by: rennie

loved the way that it has started...pls do accept my buddy request and add me to ur pm list...and if it is not too much trouble, could u pls send me the links of any earlier os or ss or ff that u might have written on asya???

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Great Great Great!! 👏

I dont understand why people call such awesome work of theirs to be bad? i mean kinta aacha hai!! 😳 Soo good.

Continue, do i have to threat?! :P

Originally posted by: e_enigma

Okay, first of all I totally LOVED your comment! :D Thank you! <3 Your welcome Eshani😃

I know it's angsty right now. But that's what I feel like when I watch the actual episodes. Sad but totally true. And awee! Thank you dearie! But honestly, comments make any writer so much more confident about his/her work. <3 Yup! You are right (at bold)

Damn! I love those quotes. Might even use them in the next part ;)I would be more than grateful if you use them. They aren't my creation but just love them.😳

Broken hearts suck. So I can imagine how much more broken Zoya is. To go through what she did...and then to be cast away. Gah. I'm not too fond of the way Zoya is acting but I doubt that if I was in her position, I'd do anything different! I too did some silly things when I was in love, like getting his attention and all that but Zoya is acting too much probably she's hurt beyond words and thoughts. I would try to get his attention for a day or two...and then give up and be a strong boulder. That's what I expect from Zoya. She'll act like a boulder. She needs that jhatka😆

And please it was in nooo way stupid! I love that you care enough about Zoya to feel so strongly about her... I feel Zoya bcoz I'm too much like her; carefree, fun loving and voice my opinions whenever and wherever necessary; and now seeing her changing for her love; I feel hurt. I can only imagine how strongly you must feel for your real life family and friends. :) Ya! You got it right. I strongly feel for my family and friends probably bcoz I know the pain of loss. I know how it feels when you have a broken heart but have to act all strong and happy bcoz people(world) think teenagers are crazy😆 that's not the age to fall in love. Par unko kaun samjai ki pyaar me padne ki koi umra nahi hoti

Bohot senti baatein ho gayi, nahi??

God has given us one life. Enjoy karo yaar!!!

Heart could only love for a while,

Feet could only walk for some miles..

Clothes won't forever be in style,

But having you as my friend is worthwhile.

This was for our newly found friendship. Hope I'm worth being your friend.

I loved your comment so please comment a whole lot more...even if you think its stupid...because I'm never gonna think it's stupid. Now you encouraged me so much that you will expect more longer comments from me, henceforth.

Gosh. Done. I swear! :P hehehe

Take care,

Eshani

Originally posted by: asyaforlife