Lonelier than before - AsYa SS [UPDATED PART 5] - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice.. write till happy note please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey it was just wonderful... zoya's pain was quite visible in the part... please continue and update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello, beautiful people! I want to say thank you for the great response to my story :). So here's the next part! And as usual, please let me know what you think!

Recap:

He let out a sigh and sat down.

" I wanted to say sorry, Ms. Faro...Zoya."

"For what?"

"For everything."

"Seems like you're in a giving mood Mr. Khan. First with your family then with me."

"Well, Tannu does help me see the silver lining."

"Hmm..that she can. Well, if that was all, then I'd be heading inside."

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Part 2

"Ms. Farooqi'if you still want my help with finding your...y'know'then you can always ask me."

She was walking away but his voice stopped her. She counted to ten before she said anything otherwise she'd knew she'd say it all. Because if she hadn't calmed herself, she knew she'd go flying into his arms for comfort. And she didn't want to get used to that comfort. Those arms were never meant to hold her'

Always ask him. Always ask HIM. The irony. The one person who she thought she could depend on, she can't. She was so close to feeling like she had a family and then it was as if a tsunami came and washed it all away.

"That's okay Mr. Khan. You don't need to waste your time. I don't need anybody's help."

And before he could reply, she walked away.

While walking away, all she wanted to do was to turn around and say this to him :

Arz kiya hai Mr. Khan...


Jo dard shabdon mein bata nahi sakte

Who kya yeh aanson batayeinge

Janab hum un logon me se hain

Jo aansoon bhi hassi mein chuppayeinge.


She walked away while he stood there.

He stood there feeling empty...wondering why he felt so empty.

It was as if, without her, the bench seemed incomplete.

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She had to leave. It was now or never.

She couldn't bear feeling unwelcome anymore. She couldn't bear feeling unloved anymore.

It had been a couple days since 'Tannu' moved into 'Jammy's' house.

I hate that name 'Jammy'. God. It's as if she made that nickname up for him, just to infuriate me. Who calls anyone Jammy? Breathe Zoya. It's just a nickname. I mean I call him Jahapana Six-packs ...that's pretty weird too. Though, anybody who has seen his abs won't disagree with me. Breathe.

Her visa was about to expire. And she couldn't bare to stay in Asad Ahmed Khan's house anymore. She was not angry. She was not vengeful. She was heart-broken. She was heart-broken because she had gone from being family to being a stranger.

She had gone from friendship to love to friendship.

She knew she loved him. She knew it'd be hard to stay away.

But she also knew that time healed everything. Even broken hearts.

She had decided she would tell everyone tonight that she had to go back to NY and leave in a day or two.

Even if everyone asked her to stay, she couldn't. Even if he asked, she couldn't - though she'd be tempted. But her visa was expiring.

But she knew that she would feel a little lonelier than she was before. She knew leaving India meant leaving him and his six packs behind. She knew it meant letting her heart sew stitches. She knew she'd be lonelier than she was before.

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Next part : Page 9

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So...what'd you think? Sorry if its too short! I'm still working on the next part and I swear it'll be longer the next time! Also - please overlook any mistakes. I forgot to edit :S. LOL

Please comment and let me know! :)

Be safe. Be happy!

Ciao!

Edited by e_enigma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Is there a third part? If yes, update soon :) you write real good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manpreet23

Is there a third part? If yes, update soon :) you write real good.


Haha! I love that you got here before my pm! :D
Thanks!
I shall update it asap!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It better be longer next time! It was too good!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
This is AWESOME! Ah the angst... Me like. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can't wait for the next part!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it!! If only Zoya acted like this in the show...I'd be a lot happier! 😃 I actually very much like her decision...Asad is acting like a complete
d-bag so he deserves it! 😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Loved it
I wish if gul can change todays episode to something like this man
Thank u so much for the pm really appreciate it
And plz plz update soon wid long update

Jazz

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