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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

At first i was like whats happing but then you saved my mind with that explanation.

Truly superb you know how much i love your writing btw best of luck for the EXAM

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥺 🥺

Kyon kya tumne Asad ke sath aisa 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

why????????????????

Beautifully written, Zoya's and Asad's feeling was written truly well, Zoya's sentence made me cry when she said that she loves him, but now there is no way to say it to him.

A painful story 😭

But loved reading it.

It was Superb, no wait, it was mind blowing, oustanding 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Wonderful shot.

P.S. it was not confusing😊, I understand tha he was dead and it was his atma who was talking to Zoya😉, you written so well that there was no space for confusion

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

GAH!

Only u could think of things like this

But I din find it confusing

I understood it right from the start😃

Twinsy's brains work the same way remember? 😆

N UUU?

U killed both Asad n Zoya...

I understand exams ke stress hai lekin iska matlab ye nahi ke uska stress in "becharon" par nikal do

Dono ko maar dala

Dono ka accident karwa diya

Ya Allah whats wrong with you?😆

But I liked it

I'll love everything my twinsy writes (even if she kills the characters) 😆

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Btw whose gonna put [ NOCOPY] tag?

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Eternal1234

@Eternal1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

i really loved...it was very heart wrenching though but it was good

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Faatimah

@starsanjana

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

oh my this story brought tears to my eyes

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Irresistible.
YOU KILLED MAH ASAD!!!! :O
but thats okey, i killed him in mah os too 🤣
a beautiful os love <3 thanks for the pm <3

When I read your comment saying, You killed my asad! I was like look who's talking 🤣 Thanks hun 😃

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: irock321
Wah wah!! Even Romeo and Juliet couldn't give this OS justice 😆lmaooo !!! I hate the fact that both of them died but really great writing ...beautiful actually!

Hehehehe 😆 Thanksss 🤗