OS: Forever Together - Page 8

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Pata tha cheating karegi 😆

Exam time is THE best time to write !

Creativity ubhar ubhar ke bahaar aati hai 🤣

Oye ! I liked it ! And I didn't find it sad, rather, it was kinda sweet.. :D

No, I'm not a freak ! Crazy, you can say :P

P.S. I love you 🤣

P.P.S. I love the OS too 😆

P.P.P.S On phone so no bandars 😛

P.P.P.P.S. Bas, that's about it for now 🤣

Hahaha! Yes thats what I'm saying, when they unite together at the end, I too find it sweet 😉 So you're not crazy! 😆

Yesss! Exams time mein aur IF per anay ka dil karta hai! Even right now I'm sooo tempted to write a happy funny OS 😃

Lovez youz Morez 🤗

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

Fari! Souls together this was!!

Gosh I thought he didn't die and all so she realized and came out of the trauma but both die and are united for ever!

Heheh nish nish!

Cheers

Ohhh what you thought could've been correct too but my stupid brain doesn't work like normal people 🤣 Thanksss 😳

Originally posted by: aniashree

gud one...one of my fav song n video😃<div></div>

Finally someone's here you loves Nickleback 🤣 Thanks hun!

Originally posted by: janestone6

At first i was like whatshappingbut then you saved my mind with thatexplanation.

Truly superb you know how much i love your writing btw best of luck for the EXAM

Aww yes the concept was confusing cos one doesn't accept Asad's ghost to just walk back in to his house to talk to Zoya 🤣

Originally posted by: HK90

<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥺🥺</font>

<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Kyon kya tumne Asad ke sath aisa😭</font>

<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">why????????????????</font>

<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Beautifully written, Zoya's and Asad's feeling was written truly well, Zoya's sentence made me cry when she said that she loves him, but now there is no way to say it to him.</font>

<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">A painful story😭</font>

<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">But loved reading it.</font>

<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">It was Superb, no wait, it was mind blowing, oustanding👏⭐️👏</font>

<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Wonderful shot.</font>

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<font color="#003333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">P.S. it was not confusing😊, I understand tha he was dead and it was his atma who was talking to Zoya😉, you written so well that there was no space for confusion</font>

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Yayyy! I get sooo happy everytime someone says they got the concept behind the story 😳

Glad you enjoyed it even though it was pretty sad 😛 Thanksss 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

GAH!

Only u could think of things like this

But I din find it confusing

I understood it right from the start😃

Twinsy's brains work the same way remember?😆

N UUU?

U killed both Asad n Zoya...

I understand exams ke stress hai lekin iska matlab ye nahi ke uska stress in "becharon" par nikal do

Dono ko maar dala

Dono ka accident karwa diya

Ya Allah whats wrong with you?😆

But I liked it

I'll love everything my twinsy writes (even if she kills the characters)😆

I knew it!! Kissi ko samaj aye na aye twinsy ko samaj aye ga 🤣

Yep! I killed Asad and Zoya! Kia karti life itni boring ho gae hai, kuch tou karna hi tha 🤣

Of course you had to like it warna me tumhe chamaat maarti (advantages of being the older twin) 😆

Love youuu 🤗

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Btw whose gonna put [ NOCOPY] tag?

Ohhh crap!! On cell right now... Will do it when I'm using the computer 😉

Originally posted by: Eternal1234

i really loved...it was veryheart wrenching though but it was good

Thank youuu 😳

Originally posted by: starsanjana

oh my this story brought tears to my eyes

Aww I'm sorry but that means you enjoyed the story right? So I'm happy 😆

Great writing ! but so sad 😭