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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

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Holy Christ!!

I was actually craving for this

You explained it well better than words can describe it😃 Yeah! You can see that be smile on my face😃

Last night went all sleepless. Where I should have been concentrating on my English paper today, I was dreaming AsYa🤪 Where were you yesterday.

You rock with your skills dear👏

You should write more and more because we obsessed readers just can't get over with one, we want more😆

I hope today AsYa grant me some sleep🤔 otherwise dark circles aa jayenge🤣 LOL, jokes apart.

Your one shot was just AWESOME if you want me to describe it in one word😆

Enough of my blabbering😆

Wish you a sleepful night instead of sleepless😆

P.S. Wish me the same🤣Yeah!! I have gone crazy and that's evident. AsYa ka asar, I guess.

Love,

Diya😳


Aww.. thanks so much Diya! You are incredibly sweet with your compliments. I wish I could sleep at least now! But I just saw these new spoiler pics of Asad and Zoya wet, and now I'm back to square one.

Nevertheless, I wish you sleepful night as well, sleepless nights doesn't equal to good mornings :S

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Gurmeet4Drashti, thanks for liking it! :)

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

i want part 2 NOW then go and sleep :P


😆 I wish! I won't be able to sleep just thinking about part 2! Maybe if I can't sleep for another hour 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, I need more & more fan fictions on the hug 😊

and I can totally understand when you say that you are losing sleep over AsYa scenes.

Same thing happened to me after the V-Day dance sequence 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolfire


Aww.. thanks so much Diya! You are incredibly sweet with your compliments. I wish I could sleep at least now! But I just saw these new spoiler pics of Asad and Zoya wet, and now I'm back to square one.

Nevertheless, I wish you sleepful night as well, sleepless nights doesn't equal to good mornings :S

And you are sweeter😳

Yup I know the spoiler pics have been successful in keeping my brain working all the night and heart from beating too fast with my eyes tightly shut to see my rather our AsYa in the form of a beautiful dream. Their hug is too pure to be doubted and I just can't stop awwing KaBhi for such wonderdul acting. HATS OFF to them.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh please do entertain us more,
this one was soo good.
especially the line "There was nothing between them now, not in this moment! He was completely hers and she was his. And he wanted time to stand still! " Bravoo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's super yaar... U captured his feelings well.. 🥳
Not rotten tomatoes... It's 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames

oh please do entertain us more,

this one was soo good.
especially the line "There was nothing between them now, not in this moment! He was completely hers and she was his. And he wanted time to stand still! " Bravoo


Shukriya! Wrote this so that my brain stops going on overdrive. I didn't expect such good response, maybe I should think about writing something again :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indidesi

It's super yaar... U captured his feelings well.. 🥳

Not rotten tomatoes... It's 🤗


Shukriya ji shukriya! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolfire


Shukriya! Wrote this so that my brain stops going on overdrive. I didn't expect such good response, maybe I should think about writing something again :)


yes yes you should write more.
write down whatever you feel, its a type of catharsis of the self.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Absolutely brilliant! *claps*
I do wish it were a wee bit longer though. :(
Please write some more? I loved it! :)

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