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AshvikFan

@AshvikFan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Wow... 😊 awesome update... Waiting for the next part... 😛

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adele9010

@adele9010

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
Superb update :-) loved how Asad knew Zayd was his son and cute name :p

Thanks! Yeah - Zayd is cute and so is his name! 😃

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adele9010

@adele9010

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: anoogna
Wow... 😊 awesome update... Waiting for the next part... 😛

Thanks Anoogna!

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Awsome job Dee and Del!Loved the fiery,steamy hot opening...what else could have got better than that?Need a girl ask for more?😃
This seductive,dominating,strong in the bedroom Asad just makes me wish all the more that I was in Zoya's place instead!☺️
You really did take me by surprise with the twist as I wasn't expecting the baby to come along so soon and for Asad to find out this early on but Baby Zayd was a pleasant surprise of course!Could picture the miniature Asad in him with those big doe like eyes...aaawww!
At one end Asad will be working at winning his love back and the other Zoe at getting ready to enjoy the victory of sweet revenge.This sure is getting more and more intriguing by the update!
I am madly hooked on this,so cannot go long without a dose,so guys have enough mercy on me all the others just like me and please dnt take too long giving us your next installment! 😃

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Oishi

@Oishi23

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

I loved the part... so now asad knows about Zayd...

it will be tough for him to get zoya back..well asad miyan..lets see how u get her back

but nice update <3

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Well, he's determined to say the least.
Nice update

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: shaz2009
Awsome job Dee and Del!Loved the fiery,steamy hot opening...what else could have got better than that?Need a girl ask for more?😃
This seductive,dominating,strong in the bedroom Asad just makes me wish all the more that I was in Zoya's place instead!☺️
You really did take me by surprise with the twist as I wasn't expecting the baby to come along so soon and for Asad to find out this early on but Baby Zayd was a pleasant surprise of course!Could picture the miniature Asad in him with those big doe like eyes...aaawww!
At one end Asad will be working at winning his love back and the other Zoe at getting ready to enjoy the victory of sweet revenge.This sure is getting more and more intriguing by the update!
I am madly hooked on this,so cannot go long without a dose,so guys have enough mercy on me all the others just like me and please dnt take too long giving us your next installment! 😃

Hey Shaz!

Glad you liked it. Thanks for writing back! Yup, it's an SS. So the pace is like that.

Yup, it's going to take some twists and turns but we will get a happy AsYa ending for sure!

We're trying to be quick with this... So stay tuned.

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Good that you guys didn't drag the whole hiding phase for too long and brought Asad and Zoya to face each other soon. I'm happy that Asad knows about Zayd. Looking forward to see how he's gonna get Zoya and Zayd back in his life!!

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RMamsa

@RMamsa

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Guy's please do yourselves a favour and start a blog. Your talent does NOT belong here in a list of posts with the rest of our amateur writings

You make my heart go balle balle & the reader in me go woohooo!