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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: NVBGKY
Ladies, once again another awesome chapter, very nice opening, just the right amount of heat to start the chapter😳
Love the name Zayd, he seems to be a great blend of his parents. I'm so glad Asad figured out that the baby is his without any additional drama and misunderstandings. Seems like Asad has really matured over this past year, looking forward to seeing him make amends with Zoya for his past mistakes, hopefully we'll be treated to some romance and passion.
Could you please PM when you have an update, thanks.

Thank you!

Well, Asad grew up! 😆

Sure, we'll update you.

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rads73937

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Nice one/
Zayd, it's cool name.
I guess "z" n "y" from zoya and "a" n "d" from asad. Rite??????
Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: rads73937
Nice one/
Zayd, it's cool name.
I guess "z" n "y" from zoya and "a" n "d" from asad. Rite??????
Thanx for the pm. Take care.

Hey!

Thanks, you noticed the name thing! 😆

Come back for more on the weekend

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-
that was amazing, loved it! do update soon

Thanks, we will update this weekend I think

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Good that you guys didn't drag the whole hiding phase for too long and brought Asad and Zoya to face each other soon. I'm happy that Asad knows about Zayd. Looking forward to see how he's gonna get Zoya and Zayd back in his life!!

Abby,

Sorry, think I didn't reply to you.

Yup, it's going to be an interesting and trying period for AsYa. But love will prevail.

Cheers

Dee

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

just came across this story..
its beautiful..
pls do pm me wen u update the nxt part..

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
just came across this story..
its beautiful..
pls do pm me wen u update the nxt part..

Hey there,

Will do, once I have my PM method sorted out. Thanks for dropping by 😃

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

very interesting..well written..please do PM me whenever you update... please continue soon..😊

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Nim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

hey guys, i loved this ff of urs. i already love Dee as a writer n hope dat some day she'l start as a writer officially.

well i've been hooked to this ff but the prob was dat i was using net on my cell so cudn't reply or like da parts. but now i'm here to make up for it. plz accept my apology n add me to ur pm list.

i'v loved dis plot. its so different n captivating dat i cudnt help read it all again. i'm soo looking forward to read wat Asad does now to regain her trust on him n get her n his son back in his life. i loved it wen Zaid gave Asad a toothless smile n his emotions wen he knew it the first second dat he was his son, just were so over whelming. it was heart breaking to hear Zo say dat she dint want him to stand dem all his life. ihope u cont soon.

love,

Nimra.

Edited by Rarepearl - 12 years ago