Revenge Roulette by adeeti10&delena90-Chapter 5 up - Page 10

Hello my lovelies. :P

Originally posted by: havokhotline

Hello my lovelies. :P

Fantastic plot you have unfolding right there! I'm in love with the storyline already! :)

And it's even better that it's you two writing it. :P

And there are of course the cold shower moments. :P

This was a good chapter! Zoya's hellbent on screwing up Asad's case, that's not something new. :P But it'll be curious to find out how she does it. :)

Love! :)

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Awesome update:-) love how Zoya is getting even

Originally posted by: RMamsa

Enjoyed reading chapter two, I liked that even though it was a build up to the mail storyline it did not drag one bit. It's great that Asad's feelings and thoughts are hidden as off now & I am looking forward to reading them more now that things are based on zoya's assumptions from his side :)

I like that you added the romance flashback to stir things up!

Bring on revenge wrapped chemistry I say 😉

Originally posted by: shaz2009

Awsome job so far Del and Dee...the writing maestro's are sure here to leave their mark in etching another memorable story in our heart and minds.👏Brilliant concept,the story so far has good flow with apt pace,with never a mundane moment.The flashbacks are just right in giving us the lowdown of what had traspired between Asya for them to have come to this juncture of bitterness to the extent of Zoya wanting sweet,bitter revenge.I can only see the story from here on getting more and more interesting by every update and there is no way right now that I can call what's to come,the mind is only left wondering to what extent Zoya's revenge would take.I am just left intrigued with how you guys are going to tackle this.Will it be a raging war between the two or just Zoya's ultimate revenge ? With offcourse not to mention the racy,cold shower requiring moments, I am sure you wont let pass by!😉

Would love to read Asad's side of the story too,so we get to know his inner most thoughts and feelings about the whole inuendo.

Will be waiting eagerly for your next installment...so guy's get writing and dnt keep us waiting for too long!Del, thanks for putting up the lindex dear!🤗

great update...I wonder what asad will feel when he will get to know about the baby

Originally posted by: _Oishi_

great update...I wonder what asad will feel when he will get to know about the baby

Originally posted by: adeeti10

Oishi!

You're the first one to ask that😊

Most readers are worried about Zoya... Yup, knowing Mr. Khan's temper, you think he's going to take it ummm... lying down?😉😆

Lol depends on what Zoya does to him when he's...um...lying down :P

Ladies, wonderful job on the new chapter. The story is progressing very well. I can understand Zoya wanting to help take over Asad's company. Hopefully this brings Asad & Zoya face to face for some for some more fireworks 😉. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Originally posted by: NVBGKY

Ladies, wonderful job on the new chapter. The story is progressing very well. I can understand Zoya wanting to help take over Asad's company. Hopefully this brings Asad & Zoya face to face for some for some more fireworks😉. Looking forward to the next chapter.

It's going to get interesting. Things are definitely heating up 😉