AsYa FF - Devotion [Updated Chapter 4B/p24](24/08)

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blueflames

@blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

wow superb beautiful...👏👏

i totally loved it. Zoya went straight up and proposed Mr khan.,

voila a perfect straight forward zoya and a perfect hero desperately in love, his love is defined by his concern of having zoya's happiness as his priority.

please continue soon

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Nila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

This is absolutely wonderful, just happened upon it and read both chapter together. I love how you let us into Asad's and Zoya's inter most thoughts, fears and the turmoil that they are going through with themselves. It was so nice to see Zoya take the first step and ask Asad to marry her. Love how both of them at this point are going into the relationship with the state of mind that this is forever. Anxiously waiting the next chapter.

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

wow

Simply amazing

that is all i can say, wow

Please continue and pm me when u do

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

read all the 3 parts...superb superb superb!!!!!!!!

cant tell u how awesome it was

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proshomi

@proshomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

This is just beautiful...Fantastic concept and amzzzing writing style update soon and please do pm me...

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Read all your 3 chapters in one go.. you are an amazing writer. where have you been hiding all these days Dear? . loved the depth of emotions that you have made each character portray. And the way Zoya went and proposed to Asad on her own was very classic Zoya style. You have managed to incoperate humour also where it is needed and in the right doses.
Waiting eagerly to read more. Do continue soon and if you can pls PM me.even if you don't ,i will surely look out for your updates.😃