AsYa FF - Devotion [Updated Chapter 4B/p24](24/08)

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friendsall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Marvellous writing...out of words to describe it... publish worthy :)👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

You should publish, girl! :) you've got MAD skills! :D

I kinda got all emo during this part! It was so bloody brilliant! Your writing is eloquence at it's heights! :) brilliant!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

And you were on my favorite authors list list in Laila's post. :)

Just wanted to tell you that i admire you. A lot.

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trina2010

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awesome. Loved this FF. update soon and add me to ur pm list please. Thanks

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arnjal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

wow! im absolutely speechless!
its BEAUTIFUL 👏

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poojdc87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Wow, another great update!!im just amazed at their level of understanding with each other. One question though, Zoya mentioned that she wanted to get married so she can stay in India - did Asad understand that that was am excuse? I hope they both are under the same understanding - that their wedding is real.

Please keep writing. Your POV on the characters is so good, you've really gotten in their heads!

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irene

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

love the story...pls do continue soon and also pls accept my buddy request...

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: havokhotline
And you were on my favorite authors list list in Laila's post. :)
Just wanted to tell you that i admire you. A lot.
:)

Hey,

Thanks heaps!

You always make me feel so special with your comments.

And thank you for having me on your list as well!

It feels amazing to be appreciated by a writer of your calibre.

And I have also read your work and I think you're fabulous.

I absolutely loved your 'Windows'.

I hope you will write more.

And sorry for making you feel emo in the last chapter!

I promise the next chapter will be much lighter :)

Love,

Pari :))

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: poojdc87
Wow, another great update!!im just amazed at their level of understanding with each other. One question though, Zoya mentioned that she wanted to get married so she can stay in India - did Asad understand that that was am excuse? I hope they both are under the same understanding - that their wedding is real.

Please keep writing. Your POV on the characters is so good, you've really gotten in their heads!

Hi,

Thanks for your feedback and your query!

I'll make sure to clarify this in the forthcoming chapter.

Pari :)