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Glambi89

@Glambi89

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

WOW! That was a excellent piece of writing! Great story and excellent grammar. I have read a lot of the stories on this forum, a lot of them had a good imagination but had an appalling writing style and grammar. Your one of the only few writers on this forum who has good imagination, writing style and grammar. Three very important ingredient for a good story according to me.

Gracias for the wonderful Easter delight!

p.s. have you written anything else?

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Nidhi Chandrakar

@MeetPremeer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Loved the story dear...
Plz do continue to write more stories...

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

I feel should have written one more part lol but that was awesome!!... not complete ending but i still love it thanks... if u have more plz pm me

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Thank you everyone for waiting patiently (or impatiently for those who stalk me on PM!) for my next story. And thank you for your wonderful feedback, private messages, buddy requests and for clicking the LIKE button. Your constant encouragement is what keeps me writing! I'm sorry I cannot send private messages to anyone who is not on my buddy list. It's just too time-consuming. Please know that I'll post every Friday morning and Sunday evening, New York time.

I'll start posting WEB OF LIES next Friday, May 31, 2013.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Wow...that was very good...plz dont end like this...Its really really good...would love to read your work if future...

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sonia555

@sonia555

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Great ff would hav been better if u continued

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JJN

@JJyoN

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

I love the action in this story. Reread it twice. Great job.

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Azriya
I love the action in this story. Reread it twice. Great job.

I've already started posting the sequel. You may find it here:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3610367/ff-web-of-lies-completed-on-p80

Thank you for reading!

Paly

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Damn I almost missed the last part!!!Fabulous ending,or should I say a new beginning?😃

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Akilla

@Akilla

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

😭😭😭 wow this is the first story that actually made me tear up and cry, i loved the fact that along with your story you incorporated so many issues that plague the general society today. the extent of your writing prowess was amazing and i know for a fact that this story will touch the readers in one way or another. the forum welcomes excellent writers like you and i am thankful i came across your short story and had the opportunity to read it through and through. i hope in the future we would be able to read many more pieces of writing from you. congratulations on the fabulous piece of work.😃

keep writing👏

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