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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Hey , hi ... I just stumbled upon this just today.. And, I feel like so lucky to actually getting a chance to read this beautiful work of fiction. Its just whoaaa... Loved it.. Well, m sending you a buddy request , if possible please send me the links of your other work if any or else if you'll write anything in future do pm me once please.. You are a fabulous writer... I cant find proper adjectives to define how good you are...

Amazing!!!

Dee

Dee,

Thank you for your very kind feedback. I have accepted your buddy request and will send you PM when I updated the sequel, WEB OF LIES. My only other QH story is an OS:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3598392/os-whats-in-a-name

I'm so happy to know that you liked my work.

Take care,

Paly

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canadiankudi

@canadiankudi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

I just read the whole thing in one go!!! Beautiful!! Can't wait for you to write another one =)

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braich_gal

@braich_gal

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

wow!! this was an amazing story!!! i read it all in one go...and mind you...it's 1.53 am and i need to wake u by 5 am to get to work...i kept telling myself...go and sleep..but then i was like too engrossed with the story and!!! OMG!!!! amazing!! i loved it...can't wait to read the sequel...wish i can read it now itself but i really need to sleep or i've had it later!!! well done!!!

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Hi PalyGirl... Oh my God i absolutely loved this ff, it was sooo good! You've done a great job and the ending was absolutely fab, i laughed sooo much, thank you for writing such an amazing ff, it was different to most of the ff's in this forum but still had that loving element between Asad and Zoya which added to the whole adventure of the story making it a great one, of course! Once again thank you and please do continue to write, you have an amazing talent and i'd love to read more of your work. If possible please can you pm me with any updates of your work, i really look forward to reading more, thanks! x

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Ira

@-Pyaar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

This is like one of the best fanfictions ever! I literally cried endlessly! It was just so amazing! Please keep up the great work!

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Just finished reading the entire story in one go. Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. I'll be looking out for more in the future 😉

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Read it all in one go. Will read others too. Well written.

Edited by notagain - 11 years ago

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

This was amazing!! I loved this! I just read the ENTIRE thing! And I'm going on to read the sequel, Web of Lies. But lets focus on this one.

Asad calling her Musibat all the time annoyed me to now end 😡 But at the same time I liked it because it later showed how wrong he was to call her that.

Zoya is stubborn and yes always lands herself in trouble, but that time when Hafez took her, I had a hunch Asad leaving her alone was a bad idea. Your descriptions are so vivid and well written. You're good, seriously :)

And I absolutely went into jelly mode when Asad was taking care of her and realized she was hurt on her arm, and the way they calmed him down, and made him get away from Harfez was vivid, painful, but well done. I especially liked the way she disuaded Asad from choking Ravi to death. Although that sleaseball deserved it. 🤬

And finally Asad taking care of Zoya everytime just had me awwing and making googoo eyes. Seriously good story.

Just a comment, since it has less than 10 parts, you might want to relabel it an SS (Short Story)? But again it's up to you. Just a friendly suggestion. 😊

LOVED IT! Off to read Web of Lies

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago