AsYa OS/SS Ye Dooriyan Last Part pg 5

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😃Hey Guys!!! Hope you guys are all doing good!
Here is my first OS so its probably really bad but do try to read it! 😃
This was Zoya's last day at Mr. Khan's house. She was packing her bags and picking up all her mess as she knew how much Mr. Khan hated her messy room. She Picked up her bags and walked out of her room and walked towards the door where Najma and her ammi waited for her. She first walked towards Najma.
ZOYA: Tamatar, always stay happy and keep on smiling. Here is my pepper spray in case those guys come and bother you again.
She handed over her pepper spray and tried to smile but she just couldn't. She hugged Najma Very Tightly while both their diamond like tears escaped their innocent eyes.
Zoya then walked to Puphi.
ZOYA: Puphi, I am going to miss you very much. You are like the ammi I never had! I really wish I didn't have to leave.
Puphi cleared her face of tears.
DILSHAD: We will miss you very much zoya but you know you can always come and visit us whenever you'd like. Also, thank you for bringing happiness back into our lives Zoya. You will be missed a lot.
She hugged her as she wished she didn't have to leave them all.
Zoya picked up her bags and opened the door. She stepped out side the house and turned back. She smiled and waved good bye. They both waved back as well trying to hold back their tears. Zoya Walked into the car. The Driver started to back up and leave while Zoya opened her window taking a last Glance of the Khan Mansion. She wished she didnt have to make this desision, but she knew that it was for the best, or so she thought. The driver turned on the radio and a song played. It was the song Ye dooriyan from the movie Love aaj Kal. Tears were flowing as memories of her and asad ran through her mind.
******Back at the khan mansion******
Asad Came back from work and walked in the house. He noticed that the house was way more quite than usual. He saw his ammi and najma on the sofa looking a bit off. Something was upsetting them.
He walked into his room to freshen up when he noticed somethinf on his bed. He Put his stuff down and picked up it up. It was a letter from Zoya. He opened it and began to read.
Dear Mr. Khan,
You have probably notcied that everything is very quite. Well yes that right, I have left your house. I know that I was living in your house against all your wishes and you have always waited for the day that I would leave your house so todays the day Mr. Khan. Dont worry, I have told Najma and Puphi that I have to go back to New york because of my Visa. So enjoy your Life Mr. Khan. You can now go back to your normal life without me.
Regards, Zoya.
He frooze as a tear fell down from his eyes. What had just happened? Zoya left? Back to New York?
Shouldn't he be happy? Isnt this what he always wanted? He can finally live without zoya creating anymore problems for him. Nope. Zoya and no problems? thats impossible. This was a problem for him. He cant let Zoya go that easily. After everything that had happened. The whole mangalpur incident and the amount she helped him with the whole Gudiya Factory raaz. He was not ready to let her go. After all these thoughts going through his mind he came to one conclution:
ASAD: I will not let her go from my life.
He grabbed his keys and Ran out the door. Najma and her ammi were confused.
He ran to his car and went to find his Zoya.
Thats it guys! 😊 I know it was short and on top of that a cliff hanger. I wasnt sure if i sould continue it so you guys decide on that :P
I hope you enjoyed it. Please do comment and tell me what i can fix for next time!! Thank you😃😊
Here is the link to the Song that i mentioned in the OS : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DKOLynNhWxo
LAST PART PG 5
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shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pehle promise u have to update this beautiful peace...

loved it...totallycan picture how it shall be wen zoe actually leaves their place...cant wait to c wat mr. khan does
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its jst awesme! Plz continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

pehle promise u have to update this beautiful peace...

loved it...totallycan picture how it shall be wen zoe actually leaves their place...cant wait to c wat mr. khan does

Thank you so much!!!! I'll try to update it depending on how many people actually want to read it 😆 But thank you. Im glad you enjoyed it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aniiee

Its jst awesme! Plz continue soon! 😃

Thank you! and I will try 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsYa_fan

awesome please continue!!!!!!

Thank you so much!! I will try to update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dear!li loved it very much!plz continue<3 <3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked it!

Hope u do plan on at least a second part to this OS coz it begs for another chapter where and how Asad finds his Zoya and how he convinces her to come back.

Hope u decide to continue.

Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeah u have to give us its next part its so beautiful!
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Where's the next part?? You cant end it here all of a sudden 😆

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