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Posted: 12 years ago
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tooo guuud...plzzz contineu...plzzz as soon as...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was so cuuuttteee. I felt bad for Asad. Poor guy doesn't know why she left his house and most importantly him😭

Can you please continue this? I want Asad to find her, convince her to get back, and never let her go anywhere. 😳

I would literally cry if this really happens in the show. Can't even imagine my AsYa separate from each other.😭

I would be more than happy if you can really continue your work😃 and if you plan to continue it, can you pm me your update, if possible? Thanks in advance😛

Love,

Diya😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

<font size="3"><font color="#9999ff"><font>This was so cuuuttteee. I felt bad for Asad. Poor guy doesn't know why she left his house and most importantly him😭</font></font><font><font></font></font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#9999ff"><font>Can you please continue this? I want Asad to find her, convince her to get back, and never let her go anywhere.😳
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<font size="3"><font color="#9999ff"><font>I would literally cry if this really happens in the show. Can't even imagine my AsYa separate from each other.😭
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<font size="3"><font color="#9999ff"><font>I would be more than happy if you can really continue your work😃 and if you plan to continue it, can you pm me your update, if possible? Thanks in advance😛
</font></font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#9999ff"><font>Love,
</font></font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#9999ff"><font>Diya😳
</font></font></font>


Thank you so much diya
That was really sweet of you :)
I will be posting the next part in the next hour
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEY GUYS!!! Hope you are all doing well today!! Excited for QH?

Thank you everyone for commenting and to those silent readers! I'm so glad to know that my writting actually made sense And i know everyone was upset with the cliff hanger, what can i say i love to leave everyone thinking :P It lets every reader get a chance to create what would happen next. So this is what I have thought out! Hope you guys enjoy it more than the 1st Part

ASAD: I will not let her go from my life.

He grabbed his keys and Ran out the door. Najma and her ammi were confused.

He ran to his car and went to find his Zoya.

Asad was driving his car as fast as he could trying to reach the airport before his Zoya would leave him forever. Ah the word Forever hurt himm inside as if someone had stabbed a dagger in his heart 100 times. Why did he always do this? He always hurt Zoya everytime causing her to become more distant every single time. He promised himself that he will never hurt her ever again but to keep happier than she already seems to be.

************* At the airport*************

Zoya had completed all the formalities at the airport and it was just 15 minutes till they would call her to the plane. Since she had the extra time, she decided to change into a salwar kameez since it was more comfortable than her jeans, and she could wash her face from all the tears that had been cried.

After 5 minutes she came outside of the bathroom wearing a White punjabi salwar kameez that had green designs all on the borders of her dupatta and her top. She went to go sit in the waiting place still trying to hold back her tears. Flashbacks of her and Asad were crossing her mind making it very difficult to hold back the tears. She really wished things would have worked out for them, but she couldn't do anything because she might have loved her but her Jahapana six packs didnt, or so she thought. If he did, he would have never told her to leave his house. But she couldnt do anything now. It was too late.

****

Asad reached the airport. He bought a ticket so he could get inside and ran in. He asked a manager where her flight would be. The manager assisted him and he made his way towards the new york flight waiting area. He ran everywhere but couldn't find anyone wearing jeans and a top. Was he too late? This fear started to eat him. He can't be late. He searched around but she was nowhere to be found. He was running everywhere when he accidently bumped in to a lady making her drop her bags.

ASAD: Oh I'm so sorry.

He picked up the bags and was about to give it back to her when:

ASAD: Zoya.

He said her name in relief and confusion. He finally found her but she was wear a Punjabi suit. She looked more beautiful than ever!

Zoya was shocked to see him here

ZOYA: Mr.Khan, what are you doing here?

ASAD: I should be asking you that Ms. Far… Zoya. What are you doing here? Do you even know what you're doing.

Tears fell from his eyes stabbing Zoya in the heart. She couldn't see him like this.

ZOYA (in her head) No zoya. Stay strong. Don't cry. You have to go back no matter what.

Zoya: Yes mr.Khan I know what I'm doing. I'm going back to New York. Forever.

She could feel the tears coming so she turned away and began to walk when she noticed that something was holding her back.

Asad had grabbed her hand! She turned to see his tears flowing not being able to make eye contact. Looking at the floor and he held her hand tight like a child holding its mother mothers hand.

ASAD: mat jao.

The 2 most simplest said so desperately broke her heart. She wanted to hug him but she knew she couldn't

ZOYA: asad let me go. Why should I stay anyway? I have no reason to stay back.

ASAD: Zoya you have to stay. For me, for us.

ZOYA: What about us?

Asads anger/ pain was increasing by the second.

ASAD: THAT I LOVE ZOYA!!!!

…she froze. Time stopped. Everything felt so silent. Asads tears were still flowing along with Zoya's

Asad: That I love you zoya, I love you. I cant live without you. I day with out you is like a year without rain (yes it is the Selena Gomez song :P )

Zoya smiled. Smiled as there was no tomorrow.

Zoya: I love you too Mr. Khan.

He was relieved to hear those words.

She dropped her bags and he took her in her arms. He spun her around as they were finally together. Forever.

THE END!!!

I hope you enjoyed it guys. I know that end sucked. I agree. But please do comment. Always makes my day!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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mar jawa...love at d airport;) hayeee

lovely ending:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww... This couldn't get more better.

So cute!! He succeeded!! I can't find words man. AWESOME!!

You made my night. *sigh* Now I can peacefully go and sleep having AsYa in my dreams. Good night sweety. Do come up with more works. Would love to read them.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Awww... This couldn't get more better.

So cute!! He succeeded!! I can't find words man. AWESOME!!

You made my night. *sigh* Now I can peacefully go and sleep having AsYa in my dreams. Good night sweety. Do come up with more works. Would love to read them.

Awww thank you soo much once again! and IKR. This man is UH MAZING! 😛 I'm glad you liked it! I will try to post more often :P
Goodnight!!! Sweet dreams 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK YOU 😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

mar jawa...love at d airport;) hayeee

lovely ending:)

Thank you soo muchh!!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK YOU! 😃

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