AsYa OS : Realisations - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
N we got our treat!!

Radha radha...main kya karu tera!!??? i just wish u didnt have those stupid exams...else i m sure v would hav a lot more similar treats...

koi nai...ATB for tmrw and yeah CYA!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife


res
==unres==

Oh God! Oh God! Oh God!
Am I just dreaming? *blinking my eyes a hundred times*

Please someone pinch me.

*I: Mumma please pinch me.
Mumma: Why would I pinch you? 😲
I: Mumma please just do as I say.
Mumma: Ok then. (She pinched me.)
I: Ooch mumma not too hard. It hurt me.
Mumma: I did just as you commanded. Silly girl.(She goes to the kitchen for some work)*

Ok, now I believe, this is real.
OMG!!! This was the best surprise I ever got, except for BD surprises.

This was super cute. *Going inside my iPad screen and pulling your cheeks. Real hard. Don't care if they hurt*

"Mr. Khan, agar aapko coffee nahi peeni thi to aap nahi peete. Girane ki kya zarurat thi?Main pee leti!" - I loved this line😳😳 and his reaction after this dialogue.
Hope something like this happens in the show as well.*day dreaming*

Him offering her biscuits was so sweet.
Itne sweet changes apne Jahapana mein ek saath dekh kar toh mujhe bhi diabetes ho jaaye, toh Zoya bechari ka kya hua hoga.

He getting a little jealous after she told someone comforted her, was just flawlessly penned.

And then, came the confession. While reading those few sentences, I thought Asad would really not believe her and simply yell or something like that but he proved me wrong. He understood what she wanted to say. *My deal(dil) doing balle balle.*

And then, their hug. Oh Jesus Christ!!

I literally skipped a beat. 😲

This OS was full of surprises. Starting from the dedication to AsYa cute moments to Asad agreeing to help with further investigations to their hug. This could not get any better.
You concluded it beautifully.

I'm so in love with your writing.

Thank you Thank you Thank you soo much for the dedication dear. Now I'm back to my chirpy being, thanks to you. You never fail to please me😳

PM me the next one too.😳😳



All the words right out of my mouth. Left nothing for me to say...not fair 😆 Please PM me as well.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Awe 3D it was juuusssttt so awesome!
Loved Loved it!
Hug & Kisses!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
That was mindblowing!
It was damn cute, I loved Zoya
Silly girl, fell in love
my favorite line was when Zoya unknowingly said "Mr. Khan agar aapko coffee nahi peeni thi to aap nahi peete. Girane ki kya zaroorat thi? Meh pee leti."
Beautiful love
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Hey ...
beautiful OS :-)
Loved it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome OS!! better than the serial 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
You write so well. I have read all your OS's and they are great. Thanks so much for entertaining us.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
This was amazing! please do continue!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
wowww

that tooo amazinggg


please write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
I liked it Ahaan! You never disappoint me :D

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