AsYa OS : Realisations - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woow!!!! This was amazing!!! This should totally happen in the show.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Arrey wah ek aur likh di! Cool ya! Mast hai! 😛
Waise ek baat samaj nai aayi ki mr.khan ki treat kya thi![8-)]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: asyaforlife


res
==unres==

Oh God! Oh God! Oh God!
Am I just dreaming? *blinking my eyes a hundred times*

Please someone pinch me.

*I: Mumma please pinch me.
Mumma: Why would I pinch you? 😲
I: Mumma please just do as I say.
Mumma: Ok then. (She pinched me.)
I: Ooch mumma not too hard. It hurt me.
Mumma: I did just as you commanded. Silly girl.(She goes to the kitchen for some work)*

Ok, now I believe, this is real.
OMG!!! This was the best surprise I ever got, except for BD surprises.

This was super cute. *Going inside my iPad screen and pulling your cheeks. Real hard. Don't care if they hurt*

"Mr. Khan, agar aapko coffee nahi peeni thi to aap nahi peete. Girane ki kya zarurat thi?Main pee leti!" - I loved this line😳😳 and his reaction after this dialogue.
Hope something like this happens in the show as well.*day dreaming*

Him offering her biscuits was so sweet.
Itne sweet changes apne Jahapana mein ek saath dekh kar toh mujhe bhi diabetes ho jaaye, toh Zoya bechari ka kya hua hoga.

He getting a little jealous after she told someone comforted her, was just flawlessly penned.

And then, came the confession. While reading those few sentences, I thought Asad would really not believe her and simply yell or something like that but he proved me wrong. He understood what she wanted to say. *My deal(dil) doing balle balle.*

And then, their hug. Oh Jesus Christ!!

I literally skipped a beat. 😲

This OS was full of surprises. Starting from the dedication to AsYa cute moments to Asad agreeing to help with further investigations to their hug. This could not get any better.
You concluded it beautifully.

I'm so in love with your writing.

Thank you Thank you Thank you soo much for the dedication dear. Now I'm back to my chirpy being, thanks to you. You never fail to please me😳

PM me the next one too.😳😳



Itna lamba comment ?!
*Now my dil doing balle balle*
Hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha
Poor aunty 😆 Kitna pareshaan kiya unhe ! V.bad !
Oww ! *running away from the screen* Someone save me !
Abhi ke liye to aapki inn super-sweet baaton se muje diabetes jo jayega !
You know I couldn't be gladder you liked it ! And this improving your mood is the best possible compliment I can get for the OS. Now I don't mind if I flunk tomorrow's test 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: aniiee

Arrey wah ek aur likh di! Cool ya! Mast hai! 😛
Waise ek baat samaj nai aayi ki mr.khan ki treat kya thi![8-)]


Zoya's wonderful expressions after she realised she had just jumped and stuck to *read : hugged 🤣* her Akdoo Jahapana 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Omg. This was one of the best OS' of AsYa I've ever read till date. ❤️

Everything about was just perfect. The language was so simple, their relationship was portrayed beautifully, and the huggg
How I wish they hug soon. :P

Awesome work hunnn. 🤗

And I'm off to read your other OS', RIGHT NOW. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani



Itna lamba comment ?! Ab iski aadat daal lo😳
*Now my dil doing balle balle* Hehehe
Hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha Laughing? At what my mumma did to me? Uhhuun Uhhuun😭😭😭
Poor aunty 😆 Kitna pareshaan kiya unhe ! V.bad ! Mumma ko toh maza aaya hoga. Mujhe bina baat ke maarne mil gaya😆😆
Oww ! *running away from the screen* Someone save me ! *Catching hold of your collar and bringing you back in front of me so that I can again pull your cheeks*😆😆
Abhi ke liye to aapki inn super-sweet baaton se muje diabetes jo jayega ! Awww...
You know I couldn't be gladder you liked it ! And this improving your mood is the best possible compliment I can get for the OS. Now I don't mind if I flunk tomorrow's test 🤣 OMG tomorrow you have a test?? What the hell are you doing here😲 Go study. *I would never say this🤣 Bcoz I do the same thing😆😆 Raat kiske liye hai😎 Studies ke liye of course😆*

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
So I read this and I now my face hurts from smiling like a mental.
This was so bloody gorgeous.
How do you make me feel like I'm on a cloud every single time?
You're a priceless author and I think no one could've described this scene better than you. :)
Thank you for writing this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani



Zoya's wonderful expressions after she realised she had just jumped and stuck to *read : hugged 🤣* her Akdoo Jahapana😆

*imagined* kya badiya expressions honge nah
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
oooh...I wish they'd use this or do something like this...,your OS is better than watching the actual serial ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Amazing Os.. I loved it!Such a sweet one!

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