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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Did I ever tell you that I love you? (In a straight way of course)😆😆

You are a brilliant writer.
I was dancing when I saw an OS from you so soon.
This was an epic.
Made my morning and thank you for that.
Loved Zoya's POV. Very few people write about female protagonist and I'm glad that a wonderful writer like you took a step forward and penned it for us
Please PM me when you write more😳


Do you know I want to get into the laptop screen and hug the daylight out of you right now ? 🤗 (Yes, you should be alarmed. I'mm to happy to notice how hard I'm squeezing you :D )

You know, I LOVE these monkeys ! I've used them soo many times, but this is the first time someone's used them for me, for my work ! 😲

I'm feeling pure glee. Beyond words and emoticons. I LOVE YOU !!

Okay, I know you've had enough of my bakwas..so back to replying you sanely...SEMI-sanely 🤣

I am not sure about you, but I definitely do love you !! (Yes, straight.) 😆

I am an amazingly lucky writer. I have a reader like YOU. ⭐️

Really ? 🤔 I was thinking more along the lines of "This velli chic has gone crazy" 😆

Thank you so soo sooo sooo much 😳

I couldn't be more glad. You know, I wanted to write to make people smile. The prev ones, when I started, were fun types. But lately, rather, ALL my OSs on AsYa have been kinda senti types ! And I'd sulk that instead of making them smile, I ruined their mood

Believe me, I had NO whatsoever idea how it would turn out. And yes, this is my FIRST attempt at the female lead's POV 😆 Its usually always the males I'm interested in 😉 🤣

I'm soo happy you liked it 😃

OBVIOUSLY I'll PM you ! Which idiot of a writer will not PM you ? 😲
Edited by Monu_Deewani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Oyye pagal !
You have your boards and you're reading AsYa OSs on IF ? 😲
I LOVE YOU ! 🤗 ❤️

Chalo koi to mila mujhe mere jaisa ! 🤣

P.S. All the very best dear ! Rock n Roll baby 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
That was... good!! Half intense, half breath-hitching! The way you described her emotions was well done! 👍🏼 You wrote it out in her POV but in the third person's view manner. Hope you get what I mean!😳

I loved the way you brought out that last part. But it was a bit off-putting for me when I first read that that skeleton was of a woman. Nobody knows who it is. Neither do the three here, standing and glaring at each other with various emotions. 😲

When the part of her seeing something like a dress on that skeleton did make some sense, the logical part of the clothing being totally ruined came to my mind.
This was the logical part speaking here.🤓

But I loved this OS, 'cause I felt like I was standing there and viewing the whole scene.

Annie😳
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani



Oyye pagal !
You have your boards and you're reading AsYa OSs on IF ?😲
I LOVE YOU ! 🤗 ❤️

Chalo koi to mila mujhe mere jaisa !🤣

P.S. All the very best dear ! Rock n Roll baby😉

hahahaha haan kal hai meri boards phir bhi yahhaan hoon 😆 himmaat dekho meri 😆
I luv u 2 🤗
Teri bhi xams hain kya!?



Thank u so mch 😃
Hpe mai ppr aache se likhu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: aniiee

hahahaha haan kal hai meri boards phir bhi yahhaan hoon 😆 himmaat dekho meri 😆
I luv u 2 🤗
Teri bhi xams hain kya!?



Thank u so mch 😃
Hpe mai ppr aache se likhu


This is what you call HIMMATWALA ermm HIMMATWALI 😆
Its you what inspired Sajid to so the movie, believe me 🤣
I luv u 3 ! Okay, I'm crazy 😛
Haan, how'd you guess ? 😲 Antaryami 😆

Arre, chill yaar ! Board pe papers paploo hote hain 😆
Tukka nai maar ri main ! Experience baby 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani



I knew it. All gutter minds here😆
I'll believe it till BRAVO. Next goes 'Blah'.😛
See, there's a limit to everything. Even flattery⭐️
After a point, its evident you're just buttering😆


HAHAHAHA!Arey m serious yaar.. Seriously the writing piece was too good :D I cant write half as good as that. Zoya's feelings were aptly described.. Its not easy.. U did a fab job! Keep writing more and more!
Kya karu mai tumhaara! Kuch pagalo ko taareef bhi hazam nahi hoti *pulls ur nose* :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani



This is what you call HIMMATWALA ermm HIMMATWALI😆
Its you what inspired Sajid to so the movie, believe me🤣
I luv u 3 ! Okay, I'm crazy😛
Haan, how'd you guess ?😲Antaryami😆

Arre, chill yaar ! Board pe papers paploo hote hain😆
Tukka nai maar ri main ! Experience baby😉

Yup sajid ne mujse idea churaya🤣believe me m equally crazy' 😆 kal meri hin xam hai aur topics dekh dekh ke comments kar rai hoon kal ppr mein vaat hai meri 😆 waise u also givin boards disbyr or other xam? 😳
Ani
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd


HAHAHAHA!Arey m serious yaar.. Seriously the writing piece was too good :D I cant write half as good as that. Zoya's feelings were aptly described.. Its not easy.. U did a fab job! Keep writing more and more!
Kya karu mai tumhaara! Kuch pagalo ko taareef bhi hazam nahi hoti *pulls ur nose* :P



*rubbing my nose*
Taareef thodi bohot hazm ho jaati hai
Butter nai hota 🤣

You're WAY better. Believe me.
But I can't be gladder that you liked it ! :D

I wasn't too sure about this one..
This is the very first time I've written from the female lead's POV..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: aniiee

Yup sajid ne mujse idea churaya🤣believe me m equally crazy' 😆 kal meri hin xam hai aur topics dekh dekh ke comments kar rai hoon kal ppr mein vaat hai meri 😆 waise u also givin boards disbyr or other xam? 😳
Ani



If you are, no one's gonna be as happy as me ! 😆
Hehehe I know that feeling. I've got to do like 200 pages of EEE within 24 hours and I too am roaming around on IF AND thinking of writing another OS 😲

Arre Hindi's easy yaar ! TV serials saare kab kaam aayenge ? 🤣

Arre na re ! Baksho mujhe ! Gave the boards last year ! Thankfully, I'm in college now..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani


Do you know I want to get into the laptop screen and hug the daylight out of you right now ? 🤗 (Yes, you should be alarmed. I'mm to happy to notice how hard I'm squeezing you :D ) Khushi ke aasooon😆

You know, I LOVE these monkeys ! I've used them soo many times, but this is the first time someone's used them for me, for my work ! 😲 Aww... sweets🤗

I'm feeling pure glee. Beyond words and emoticons. I LOVE YOU !!

Okay, I know you've had enough of my bakwas..so back to replying you sanely...SEMI-sanely 🤣 Don't worry when two insane people meet, this is tend to happen. PAGALPANTI.🤣

I am not sure about you, but I definitely do love you !! (Yes, straight.) 😆

I am an amazingly lucky writer. I have a reader like YOU. ⭐️ Thank you for considering me a good reader

Really ? 🤔 I was thinking more along the lines of "This velli chic has gone crazy" 😆

Thank you so soo sooo sooo much 😳

I couldn't be more glad. You know, I wanted to write to make people smile. The prev ones, when I started, were fun types. But lately, rather, ALL my OSs on AsYa have been kinda senti types ! And I'd sulk that instead of making them smile, I ruined their mood What nonsense😡 I don't know about others but I can assure you, your work always brings a bright smile on my face* blush blush*😃

Believe me, I had NO whatsoever idea how it would turn out. And yes, this is my FIRST attempt at the female lead's POV 😆 Its usually always the males I'm interested in 😉 🤣 Me too😆

I'm soo happy you liked it 😃 Aww..

OBVIOUSLY I'll PM you ! Which idiot of a writer will not PM you ? 😲 hehe

I have read all your works but still don't know your name I know I would be killed for this🤔 but still daring to ask BTW I'm Diya😳

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