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@AdorableTrouble

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: aniiee
200 pgs! OMG! Baghwan bachaye tuje arry apni sereil wla hin thodi use kar sakte hai! Dey bloody hell wnt us to knw'shudh hin' jab koi usse use bhi nai karta 😆 waise tu OS likhe toh mereko pm karna! Kinni besharam hoon nah 🤣 mai bhi colg mai hi hoon! Hamere yahhaan 11 n 12th junior colg mein hota hai! Baas ye boards khatam ho den degree colg! Yipppiieee 🥳

Pata hai mereko..

Mere dost hai Mumbai mein

11th se clg 😡 😆

Aur hum school 😆

Bohot satate the hume 😭

Padh liye na tune saare ?

Pocket Full Of Sunshine aur Realisations ?

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

You evil person! You made me cry with this one! 😭

The ending was sooo heart wrenching when she suddenly realizes that the person who was murdered all those years ago was her own mother 😭

Loved how Zoya could easily read the hurt Asad tried to mask underneath his anger 😳

Although you made me cry still I can't bring myself to hate you for writing such a wonderful piece 🤗 🤗 Awesome it was!!

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@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Pata hai mereko..
Mere dost hai Mumbai mein
11th se clg😡😆
Aur hum school😆
Bohot satate the hume😭
Padh liye na tune saare ?

Pocket Full Of Sunshine aur Realisations ?

hahahahha! Saare nai padhi i read realizations mast tha :-P pocket full of sunshine nai mila

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Here goegoes second comment. Loved it!!! Uh mazing...

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awe! That was awesome!

I do like that twist :)

I do love how you wrote out Zoya. :)

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

amazing 😆 my words fall short to describe your works 🤣

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Beautifully written u can feel wat Zoya is going through

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

OMG!!!! You gotta continue this one!!! Unbelievably amazing!! Speechless!

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Eternal1234

@Eternal1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

wow awesome loved it ...and ya thnxs for the pm

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Thanks for the pm :-) loved the os and how you expressed Zoya's thoughts

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