ASYA SS!!DOORIYAN...updtd pt 13 pg 71

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Nice Update!

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Loved it!! Can't wait for next part!!! Thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This was a long update... But not long enough

I loved both past and present

Everything was beautiful

I so loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hai dear...

Good update... Precap is making me gear for next part...😊

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#46

Its really nice SS I jst read all 3 parts

continue soon plz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Very well written with flashback incorporated...really nice...continue soon

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Nazia

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Posted: 12 years ago

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thnk u so much for ur likes and comments
it means a lot to me😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

@startruck - finally updated😉😉😉😉😉

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Nazia

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DOORIYAN...😭😭😭
PART-4
No sooner did he hold his hand,he looked at him as if he was his own part...
He scolded the other boy...but didnt utter a single word for Ali and not even for once did he leave his hand...he felt if he will leave his hand he wont b able to live...
Shrugging away his thoughts...he looked towards Ali who was standing besides him with a shocking expression and tears in his eyes...his hands instantly reached to wipe his tears and pulled him in a hug...
Ali stuttered between his sobs...da...da...da... u are back...
Yes he recognized him...how couldnt he identify his dad...when from his childhood he had seen his photographs with his dad...from the time of his birth with soft cotton ball Ali in his hand till his 4 years of his existence...
His room was full of his dad and his pics...Yeahhh Zoya had enlarged and edited all the pics of Asad she had..
And combined them with Ali's and hers photos...so as to make it appear real tht Asad was present at his time of birth, during her pregnancy times...she never wanted to make Ali feel tht his father does not live with them...
Instead she has always told him tht his father is a very hardworking and busy businessman tht he has to move to Delhi to handle his firm there and Asya constructions was started by him and since he is busy he has given its responsibility to his mother...
Asad didnt understand what he was saying but he just kept rubbing his back inorder to calm and sooth his sobs...
After sometime he broke apart, but Ali refused to budge...
Ali - thank u...da...da...da for coming...
Asad didnt understand the stuttering part and hence thought tht he was referring to the fight tht he had solved sometime back...
Asad smiled and told him no problem...
Ali - u will come na to attend my PTM????
Ali was looking at him with such a cute innocent face tht he couldnt deny him...not because of his face tht he agreed he thought as if his duty to attend it...
Asad and Ali were walking through the corridoors of the school hand in hand...
On their way Ali's friends were looking at him when one of them askd...
Friend - whoz he?pointing towards Asad ...
Ali - he is my da...da...da...and flashe his 100 watt smile...this time also Asad was unable to understand what he said but he shrugged...
They reached Ali's class...the teachers were shocked first but smiled afterwards seeing their bonding in such a short time...
Teacher - So Ali Ahmed Khan...whats ur roll no...
Asad's heart skipped a beat hearing this name...This is the same name they had decided for their baby boy...and now his feeling for this boy has increased twice...
Ali - mam 21...
Teacher - here it is...congratulations Ali u hav again came 1st in the class...
The teacher congratulated both Ali and Asad...
Asad - congrats champ...
Ali - thnx...da...da..da...u r happy na...
Asad - m very much happy beta...
He was shocked at his own words...
They both came outside the school...
Asad - so champ...bye...
Ali face fell when he uttered those words...Asad saw the change of expressions on his face...and quickly corrected himself saying tht he will definitely come tomorrow to meet him...
Ali smiled a little...
Ali -promise...
Asad - pakka promise...
He hugged and pecked his cheek and bade him goodbye...
Asad felt tht today was hi luckiest day and tht his mission to find his Jaan will soon be accomplished...
Zoya come running towards Ali who was standing near the school gate...
Zoya - sorry baby...sorry baby...mummy is late...but kya karu kaam itna tha ki...
She stopped in between when she realized tht Ali was not listening to her instead was looking towards the school gate...
Zoya shook Ali and asked him what happened to him...
Ali - mummy da..da..da...came...mummy da...da..da... came...and hugged her crying...
Zoya was shocked would b an umderstatement...she thumped on the seat besides her...
Several questions were clouding in Zoya's mind...was he here? Or Ali has just been overemotional?...
Somewhere in Delhi...
A man in his mid forties was standing by the window of his house
Man - Asad Ahmed Khan bohot ho gaya tumhara tamasha ab hamari baari h...
Phew!!!!! Finally done with the next part...
Good news guyz my board exams are over but my classes for CPT has strtd but will try to update the next part aftr 4-5 days depending on ur likes and comments...
Till then read this part and enjoy
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Edited by naztheasyalover - 12 years ago

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