ASYA SS!!DOORIYAN...updtd pt 13 pg 71

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

Guyzzz this story has been ringing in my head for quite a long time
So thought to pen it down
I dont know whether it is SS/OS
Here we go...
DOORIYAN...😭😭😭
prologue
Mussorie...
A woman of about 22 years was enjoying the fresh morning air of the cool Mussorie...After a while a boy of about 5 years came running towards her and hugged her lovingly
Ali - Mom... aap yaha kya kar rhe ho?????its so cold here u will catch cold come on get inside..
Zoya - awww!!!!! My baby kitni care karte ho aap meri sometimes i feel that u are my dad... she stopped as Ali's face fell down...
Zoya - I am sorry...
Ali - aap q sorry bol rhe ho i know dad bohot busy hote h isliye he doesnt hav time to meet me but mom is this the really reason he doesnt stay with us...
Zoya was expecting this but not this early...
Zoya - there is no other reason... he will come to see u soon with that she hugged him...and sobbed lightly I am sorry Ali...
At the same time in Delhi
A man of about 23 years was walking in his office in his usual style and attitude...the girls working in his office just forgot to breath as he was so handsome

But he didnt even spare a glance at them... and entered his cabin...

After taking a seat he opened his drawer and took out a photo and started asking her the same question which he daily asks her
Jaan,where are you...
So i am stopping here eagerly waiting for ur comments
And plz tell whether i should continue or nor
Plzzz comment

Index
prologue pg 1
PART 1
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7
PART 8
PART 9
PART 10

PART 11
PART 12 (16+)
PART 13

Edited by naztheasyalover - 11 years ago

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: freya123
nothing part

kind of prologue

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freya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nazia100ify

kind of prologue

hey i want to write awesome start but mistakenly typed nothing bcoz i m doing nother work also

sorry

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: freya123

hey i want to write awesome start but mistakenlytyped nothing bcoz i m doing nother work also
sorry

no problem sweety

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: freya123

hey i want to write awesome start but mistakenlytyped nothing bcoz i m doing nother work also
sorry

no problem sweety and thnx

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kriti

@GroverAddict

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

lovely..but so short...

wrote long parts please

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Kriti--
lovely..but so short...

wrote long parts please

jst wantd to know ur response sweety

Edited by nazia100ify - 12 years ago

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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Really Nice!
Please continue soon pm me!

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suchishah

@suchishah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Sooolo...is Ali adopted...I mean Zola 22 with 5 year old son...

Well...the prologue looks fantasticcc...pppeeejjj...lcontinue soon

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Farhana

@risingsea101

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Beautiful start

Ali? Zoya's son...can't wait to see who the father is...

Continue!

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