Revised Asad's apology to Zoya. :)

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Loved it!

Awesome OS!

thanks a lot😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: reginaberrito
Though I loved the apology scene to the core, but if it was like you have described it wud have been much beTter... In short aap ne ismein jaan daal di :)

thank you. 😊

ya even i had felt that the apology scene was lifeless. therefore i can't say i like the original much.

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shloksuchi

Heya nice update...tysm.!!!

thanks a lot😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Asyalover
beautifully described :)

thank you😊

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

amazing can we pls have a second part of it
please *pleading making a puppy dog face*

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: SPNnIPKKNDlover
amazing can we pls have a second part of it
please *pleading making a puppy dog face*

please don't make puppy face because i cannot resist it.

i would have but i am first of all having trouble managing my previous ffs so i cannot even think of starting a new one.

sorry!😭

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Sophia

@sophie420

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Nice OS!

Liked the way the emotions were described.

Nicely written!

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

That was awesome you know I really love ur writing and ur os and ss and ffs. I really enjoy reading them😊😊

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa

please don't make puppy face because i cannot resist it.
i would have but i am first of all having trouble managing my previous ffs so i cannot even think of starting a new one.
sorry!😭

*not making puppy dog face* 😃 aww i understand the pain of keeping ur FFs pending.
its ok dear😃 but i love ur AsYa FF n ur other writings.

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RMamsa

@RMamsa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Thank you SO much! specially for describing emotions our actors may not have projected clearly. I really liked how he kept turning back to mend things with her. Really wish it could have been a little longer but it was very well intertwined with the actual scene with creative inserts tipping the scale towards true remorse on Asad's side & Dignity on Zoya's. I really like your writing and am now going to go feast my eyes on the latest part of our regular FF by you!

A Huge thanks once again! xoxo!

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