OS-emotionally challenged Mr.khan? pt 4 on pg 14 - Page 12

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Love this story.. Just awesome...:)😊


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From dance to the stranded night in car to the proposal

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Read all parts in one go, and honestly... I didn't want it to end :(

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Originally posted by: iaddiction

Read all parts in one go, and honestly... I didn't want it to end :(

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dat was superbbb...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

read all d 4prts in one go...😊



prt1
d dance was beautiful
najma seeing dem dancing and den she teasing her bhaijaan was soo muchh funn...😛😛

prt2

THE NEXT MORNING

IN ZOYA'S ROOM-

"Allah miyan, what should I do? Should I go out or no? I'm really hungry, maybe I should go but if najma teases me again and this time in front of phupi? What will phupi think? Ya I won't go out but wait if I don't go out then 1 najma will tease more and 2 I'll die of hunger. Yes, yes I'll go and have a quiet and hopefully peaceful breakfast. Allah miyan, what if jahapanah six packs is also there? Of course he'll be there, why won't he be there? After all this is his home. How will I look at him after last night. By the way Zoya, why are you worrying so much, huh? It's not that you committed some crime; you had a challenge with Mr. six packs which you won. Nothing is wrong in it, or is it?" Zoya was pacing in her room, talking to herself more like debating with herself whether she should go out or no.

"Ya Allah now only you can tell me what to do? Only you can give me the answer." Zoya prayed with her Allah miyan to give her an answer and just then her stomach grumbled loudly.

She clutched her stomach and said. "Yes, I got my answer, I'll go out. Why should I skip my breakfast for that Akdu Ahmed Khan?" her stomach rumbled again. "I'm going, stop rumbling so much." She muttered to herself and left the room.

MEANWHILE IN ASAD'S ROOM-

"I hope najma kept her recent discovery to herself. If ammi comes to know about it then what would she think. I don't know how I'll face najma and Zoya. Allah miyan what's wrong with me, I just complicated my own life wait a second, did I just use Ms. Zoya Farooqui's trademark line? Thank god, she is not here otherwise she would sue me for copyrights." Asad laughed at his own joke. 😆

"Great, now I'm going crazy, talking to myself and laughing alone at my own joke. Zoya's presence is really rubbing off on me. I'll go out and behave as if nothing happened and last night was just the most amazing dream whoa where did that come from, I meant nightmare not dream." He shook his head and silently prayed to God to save him.

d convo to themselves was too cuteee😃😃😃😃

prt3
speechless👏👏👏
it was perfect👍🏼

prt4
najma and dilshad's 21 questions to asya wass superbb😆😆😆

the confession was beautifull❤️❤️


IN SHORT LOVED D OS👍🏼

u r such a amazingg writer🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150

dat was superbbb...⭐️

read all d 4prts in one go...😊



prt1
d dance was beautiful
najma seeing dem dancing and den she teasing her bhaijaan was soo muchh funn...😛😛

prt2

THE NEXT MORNING

IN ZOYA'S ROOM-

"Allah miyan, what should I do? Should I go out or no? I'm really hungry, maybe I should go but if najma teases me again and this time in front of phupi? What will phupi think? Ya I won't go out but wait if I don't go out then 1 najma will tease more and 2 I'll die of hunger. Yes, yes I'll go and have a quiet and hopefully peaceful breakfast. Allah miyan, what if jahapanah six packs is also there? Of course he'll be there, why won't he be there? After all this is his home. How will I look at him after last night. By the way Zoya, why are you worrying so much, huh? It's not that you committed some crime; you had a challenge with Mr. six packs which you won. Nothing is wrong in it, or is it?" Zoya was pacing in her room, talking to herself more like debating with herself whether she should go out or no.

"Ya Allah now only you can tell me what to do? Only you can give me the answer." Zoya prayed with her Allah miyan to give her an answer and just then her stomach grumbled loudly.

She clutched her stomach and said. "Yes, I got my answer, I'll go out. Why should I skip my breakfast for that Akdu Ahmed Khan?" her stomach rumbled again. "I'm going, stop rumbling so much." She muttered to herself and left the room.

MEANWHILE IN ASAD'S ROOM-

"I hope najma kept her recent discovery to herself. If ammi comes to know about it then what would she think. I don't know how I'll face najma and Zoya. Allah miyan what's wrong with me, I just complicated my own life wait a second, did I just use Ms. Zoya Farooqui's trademark line? Thank god, she is not here otherwise she would sue me for copyrights." Asad laughed at his own joke. 😆

"Great, now I'm going crazy, talking to myself and laughing alone at my own joke. Zoya's presence is really rubbing off on me. I'll go out and behave as if nothing happened and last night was just the most amazing dream whoa where did that come from, I meant nightmare not dream." He shook his head and silently prayed to God to save him.

d convo to themselves was too cuteee😃

prt3
speechless👏👏👏
it was perfect👍🏼

prt4
najma and dilshad's 21 questions to asya wass superbb😆😆😆

the confession was beautifull❤️❤️


IN SHORT LOVED D OS👍🏼

u r such a amazingg writer🤗



NIshaaa i love all your comments! i love love love long comments and i rarely get them so when i do i go crazy! thank you so much sweety these comments means a lot to me! thank you thank you thank you 😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Amazing! Great job! Loved it! Another OS or ff soon plZ?!

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