Asya SS: When reAl!ty.knocks..(updated pT pg 32 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sophie420

Amazing!

Nice update!



Thanks dear 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: enrique


Oh! My God this is really overwhelming to see that u r eagerly waiting for it 😃

Will update soon


im so waiting 4 the next part
this is really interesting n i realy wanna know ki what happens next 😃😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
When are you gonna update next?
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreet23

When are you gonna update next?


by tomorrow i guess coz got few office work so😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: enrique


Thanks dear glad that u liked it 😃


Sure dear will update it soon ...😉


It's good that u could feel wat I wrote 😭


Thanks dear 😊




You write really nice.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part

P.s. in a hurry so short comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey hai dear pls update soon ur ss is awsm.pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Just amazing! Please update sooon!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful story; loved the you treated the secret!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey all thanks for appreciating my work really feels great to see that every one is glued for update

So all you have to do is hit the like so that it helps me to keep the count of scraps …happy reading ,

Recap; asad reads the letter by zoya


Everyone was in hall watching tv ayan was flipping the channel and asad was just walking away with his coffee when ayan stopped on the news channel everyone was just stunned to see what was been played ….it telecasted that

Repoter:bhopal airport par bomb blast hone ke karan bohat sare loog ghyal hai …


By hearing this asad feet just froze to the ground and he turned to see the news everyone was desperately looking at the tv….when reality hit asad's heart that the blast was on the air port and zoya's flight was at 11 he was just frozen like a statue on the ground and tears started to roll down his hot cheeks it was like a huge hammer has hit him and he was boiling in his temperature ….the cup just dropped down and grabbed everyone's attention …..with in no time every one gathered around him …the news flash by flash was weakening his strength and with in no time the ground pulled him and only one name he uttered

A: ZOYA..a..a..a.a.(the name echoed in the whole house which was empty for asad after she leave )

Everyone gathered around him on ground and asked him…

D: asad kya hua beta?

A:[ with teary eyes and pain thumping his heart he spoke] ammi zoya …..(the realization stuck everyone's senses and each of them worried for the little life god knows where and how she was )

D: asad zoya ko kuch nahi hoaga upar wale par yaakeen karo ….

S: asad beta unhe kuch nahi hoga…..

Ay: bhaijaan par aap …. …aap kuy itna pareshaan ho rahe hai (ayan couldn't see his brother in such state but he was more confused as to why for an girl he was worrying ..he has to know ) boliye na bhai jaan ….

A:[ turned towards his ammi and thought to accept the truth rather than running from it and he cried a loud cry and spoke ]ammi mai zoya se mobahat karta hu ( this should be the most happiest line for dilshad but the situation made it unhappier and she couldn't help her son come out of this situation )

A:[ he ran his hands in his hairs and bend down in disagreement and screamed his heart out ]haaa …mujhe zoya se pyaar ho gaya hai….[this words echoed in the whole house ].

Now everyone in the room couldn't handle asad ..he was sinking more in the pain of loosing her ….and he looked at her ammi and said in crying voice..

A: ammi shayad ye meri saza hai…..use itna dukh denki , use itna parashaan karne ki …use itna nafrat karne ke .[ he shut his eyes and and could feel the pain , which was beating in his heart beat by beat ….now he couldn't bare the pain and it was busted his heart from vain to nerves …]

Nijma: bhain jan aap ko ja kar zoya ko lana chaiyea …unhe kuch nahi hua hoga ...[asad looked at her and she nodded her head and so did the other siblings ]

He looked at her ammi and shreen both of them indicated the same and ayan spoke

Ay: bhaijaan hum sab dua karenge ke unehe kuch na ho aap jaiye aur nuhe le kar aye ……

Now asad just got up and rushed to the door and ran into in cars direction ..the whole family could see the fear of loosing zoya on his face and prayed for his love ..he just drove the car like a manic ..like he has a race to win against destiny ..he wanted to prove that destiny cannot snatch his life from him…while he drove he remembered every moment when zoya was close to him and he tried to push her away …he cried on this thought ..he remembered every flash back when zoya was hurt and he saved her …..he banged the wheel in frustration and he covered the distance of 1 hour journey in 25 min as to reach to his life …

A: Allah miya aap zoya ko mujhe se nahi cheen sakate …….his tears even were meant for zoya .he abruptly got off the car and ran in the airport and could see the infracture was damage people was hurt and was laying here and there this made asad go more mad and he could feel the pain around him in his heart …he helplessly started to search her in every corner of the destroyed place as it was no more an air port….this was it his all hope took another way and ran apart from him now he went weak and sat on his knees…


He closed his eyes in disbelieve and could see only her in his thoughts ..he had a rushing flash back of her from previous nights incidents, to their fights to everything he ever said to her, to moment when he disliked her ,last thing he saw was her image sitting in mazar when he saw her for the first time ….he didn't even flinched his eyes for once ...he could feel her tears which were rolling from her eyes at that time

Guess destiny played its trump card this was the same man who has the audacity to hit the girl for who he is dying today , he was the same guy who hurt her uncountable time , the guilt which was filled in his heart was not enough for what she suffered …destiny bought the same guy on his knees to repent his mistakes and beg for the same beauty of his life which was no were seen …..now ..his dreams , his life, his ZOYA left him and he disagreed to this thought and screamed his heart out for her..

A: Z…OO..YYY…AAA…( this name was of a pure hearted girl who never indented to hurt anyone …this name was a symbol of love ...)

By hearing her name called out so loudly she jerked up …..( here she was sitting on the bench unhurt without even a scratch …guess god didn't wanted to destroy the little bug who still had the chance to turn into a flower ..) she just got up and recognized the voice and the fear took over all her possessions and she let out only one name in a low voice

Z: Asad………( this was enough for him to hear and recognize her and feel her presence , he got up without wasting another second and looked behind there she was standing )

He ran towards her and pulled her in a tight hug which almost chocked her on her own breath he didn't realized what he was doing ..the anger of love raged in him back and he looked in her eyes and spoke ..

A: aap ke himmat kaise hui …..aap ne he kaha tha na ke koi kisi ke jaan bachaiye vo usiki ho jati hai ..to how dare you zoya to take away my life from me …[ he was happy to confess his feelings to her…. he thought he couldn't effort to loose her again tears were just flowing like a river of relief …]aap ne socha bhi kaise ke aap mujhe chod kar chali jayangi aur vo bhi kab jab mujhe aap se be inteha mobahat ho gayi hai ……( the last words made zoya's go stunned her stone heart started to break into pieces and forced her again to go back to the same zoya who had a golden heart )

Z: Mr khan par …..[ he thought that even if she didn't loved him back he wont complain its just her what he wants ]

A: aap agar mujhe se pyaar nahi karti to mai aap ko force nahi karunga …

Z:(as once she was a girl full of love and joy .. who couldn't resist herself from being happy she said ) par ….

A: [ he again interrupted in middle and said ]don't worry mai aap ko force nahi karunga …

A: ( now she thought will this man let her confess her feeling and she shut her eyes and spoke in a train speed) maine kab kaha ke mai aap se pyaar nahi karti …

Asad just froze at this line and looked at her …he then removed the strings which disturbed her and spoke ..

A: agar aap ko kuch ho jata to mai aapne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata ….

Z; don't worry Mr khan Allah miyya mujhe kuch nahi hone de sakate the …..because vo mujh se bohat pyaar karte hai ..aap ke taraha ( she smiled her million doller smile on which the whole bhopal would .brighten up ).[ this made asad realized what he have hurt … and what he gained back ]

His phone was just ringing from past 20 min and he was ignoring it , now both of them sat in the car and zoya rested her head on the seat and his phone rang again and he picked it and his ammi spoke

D: beta zoya mili ….

A: ha ammi vo mera saath hai …

D: phone speaker par rakho hume use se baath karne hai..

He switched the speaker on and she spoke

D: tum theek ho na zoya

Z: hai phoopi mai theek hu…..[ he looked at her an sigh in relief and was happy that she was safe …]

All the sibling or should say devils screamed in ….

All: bhabi jaan hum aap se bohat pyaar karte hai …jaldi ghar aya jaye ..( this made her eyes popped out and go all red and made asad hide his face into other direction and then he spoke )

A; aacha hum ghar aya rahe hai …(and disconnected the phone ) chele miss farookhi …

Z: yes Mr khan ….( she was now more than happy she could ever be in her life )

Asad finally fell in love and now dreams became one and their life's strings connected to each others heart …

That is for today guys it's a final rap with me

Maggie😳

And if you guys want I have one more sweet chappy after this to post only if everyone agrees it is about how the devils ruin the golden night of newly met couple ….its a fun chappy and happy wali ending ….

Please hit like and give sweet comment not one line wala *pout*😳 please as I just love this ending and hope u all also loved it

Love Maggie 😛..

Edited by enrique - 12 years ago

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