Asya SS: When reAl!ty.knocks..(updated pT pg 32 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

257

Views

35.8k

Users

77

Likes

669

Frequent Posters

Posted: 12 years ago
Note: Thanks a lot guys for loving my ss and am overwhelmed and fluttered to see all the and love you all guys and now I have one more part left which is comedy and romantic if everyone say i will post but in new post if only you all agree it will be a continuity of this ss

Now do tell me how did you all like my ss

When Re@l!ty Kn0cks ThE Do0rW@y 0f Dre@ms
Edited by enrique - 12 years ago
rutvis thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
😊

Originally posted by: enrique

Hey all here's the update of next part enjoy reading '..

Recap : the truth reveled and zoya disappeared in between '

Everyone was busy and no one noticed when she disappeared '.Asad panicked and spoke in a crying voice ..

A: miss farookhi kaha hai '[ he had the pain of losing her as he knew that the pain in her which was boiling like lava has busted out and she couldn't handle it any more ] where is she ''.

Dilshad , najma was confused and scared for her as it was starting to get dark and she was alone and she in a worried tone spoke to asad

D: asad shayad vo ghar gayi hogi tum ja kar use deekho '[asad ran his hand in his hairs and looked at the exit of the house and his mother and siblings then a hand laid on his shoulder he turned to see it and found ayan with tears in his eyes and who spoke with all his strength]

AY: bhai aap ja kar zoya ko dekhaiya mai dilshad ammi aur in sab ko lekar aata hu ''(as asad decided that his sibling wouldn't be here anymore so all agree with this decision of his 'asad now just sigh and moved towards the door when he heard ayan calling out ..

AY: bhaijaan ye le kar jaiye ..meri bike'.and threw the keys towards him and he gave his car keys to ayan 'asad just ran towards the bike sat on it and drove with a high speed '.he drove like it was an airplane he could feel the chilled wind piercing his face and that made him think of zoya's state of mind what could be her state after all this drama '.he reached his home and dashed into the house and broke open the door and screamed his strength out

A: zoya aaa.a.a.aa'..[ he started to search the house and went to her room and was frozen to see her in that state ]


She was sitting in the corner of room with only a bulb on and was crying hard she was scared 'she was sweating like she had a fresh bath ..the pain made her wince , he could clearly hear her sob and could feel the pain in the air of the room he just moved in and switched on a lamp to brighten the room little more , he went close to her and sat down on his knees and touched her cheeks 'when he did so zoya just wrapped her arms around his waist and hugged him tightly and cried hard , there was a sharp pain in her cry which was tearing him into pieces as to why this was happening he had no clue about it ' to console her he just replied to her hug and wrapped her in his arms and said 'without saying any word they spoke much more ...

A: s.s.s.s.hhh..hh' don't cry '[ he knew the fact that it wouldn't be normal easily but right at that moment he wanted her to come in her normal state and didn't want her to hurt herself more 'he then just was caressed her hairs and didn't notice that she has fallen sleep 'after few minuets he thought to talk to her but found that she was sleeping ..slowly picked her and mad her rest in her bed and covered her by quilt ad bend down close to her and said]

A: I am sorry for everything I wish mai aap ka ye dhook kam kar sakata'[ he was about to kiss her on forehead but realization stuck him and he backed off and went out ]'few minutes later every one came home and found asad sleeping on the couch by resting his head on the sofa 'he woke up by the noise of the door slam and sat straight and everyone wanted to know where is zoya '..dilshad asked him the question on behalf of everyone

A: she is sleeping in her room '.[ he had a feeling of satisfaction that she was safe and sound in her room near to him, close to him ..where he can feel her ..]

Nikhat: how is her condition'.

A: vo bohat roo rahi thi and dar bhi gayi thi par phir so gayi ''.Now everyone was just sitting in the hall and asad talked to humeira ..

A: humeira tumhe dar ne ke koi zarurat nahi hai , tum yaha maifus ho 'us galti ke saza hum tumehe to nahi de sakti ..is mai tumahari koi galti nahi thi

..he just placed a hand on her head , as to make her feel better 'shreen entered the house with rashid and went near everyone and spoke

S: dilshad 'hume maaf kar dejiye hume nahi pata tha ke humara bhai itni badi saazish kar rahe the ..agar pata hota to hum ye aise kabhi nahi karte '..dilshad was silent and couldn't speak a word then asad came in front of shreen and made her sit on the couch and spoke

A: hum jante hai 'ke aap aisa kabhi nahi karti 'maine humeria se kaha ke sidique sab ke saza hum unke parivear ko to nahi de sakate '.ye sach hai ke aap abu ke bewi hai ..lekin mera jaan se pyaare bhai ke ammi bhi hai ..isiliye hume aap se koi shikayat nahi hai'jo ho gaya hum use badal to nahi sakate

he was now taking the responsibility of being the youngest child of the family and he wanted his family to be happy 'now after hearing that he called ayan as his loveable bhai nikhat spoke

Ni: aur hum aap ke pyaar behan nahi hai ,..sife ayan bhaijaan he hai '.(she spoke like a baby ')all the 5 girls pout like a child ..and he said

A: maine aise kab kaha aap sab bhi mujhe jaan se pyaari ho '.( he smiled at all of them )

Sh: sab kismat le luck hai ismai kya shaak hai '..asad aap to sab se pyaare baache hai is parivar ke

A: shukriya shreen ammi [ he called her shreen ammi , dilshad was proud to see his son , as what she sow she is preaching the same 'she loved him ]

now all the sibling fell on asad for a hug 'then asad hugged his father ...someone was seeing at this family reunion and was being ripped apart as she didn't had a family ( guess now the wall around her heart became more strong and more tough as even she dreamt of a family but" the reality knocked her doorway so hard that her dreams" shattered into million pieces )she decided she would leave the house cause if she stayed more in this house she could come to an erg to die '..it was now midnight everyone was in their room asad was thinking about the hug which took place between them and marched to and fro in his room ... Here , zoya packed her stuffed by remembering every moment she spent in this house and it was now 6 in the morning she didn't sleep the whole night and now came in hallway and walked near the door and took a turn and saw the whole house and she found her most adorable flash back from the day she entered till today ..tears never left her eyes for even a second she went out and shut the door behind and was gone '


Next morning was a bunch of rose flowers morning for khan family but even rose have thrones in it '.everyone came for breakfast asad was waiting for zoya to come out of her room but to his hard acceptance she didn't showed up and now watchman came in and handed a letter to dilshad and said

W: zoya madam ne diya tha '

D: diya tha matlab ..

W: vo to aaj subaha he chali gayi [ asad thought he skipped a heart beat his heart started to beat faster that the normal speed 'out of pain...his heart was now bleeding as it was turned into a soft spot ]

Dilshad and the whole family was in dilemma to hear that she went away without speaking to any 1 now dilshad read the letter zoya mention everything in it which was in her heart but not even a single word about asad she even mention about rashid but not him , he couldn't digest this fact and he marched in his room in his anger 'every one was bewildered by his action ..now he reached in his room and shut his eyes in an unknown guilt and sat behind the door with a heavy hearted feeling 'after few min , he started to threw away the pillow , bed sheet quilts every thing he messed the room same way she use to mess up , the anger took over his heart and the circle of love which he entered was set on fire of rage , there was a knock on the door he slicked his head out so that no one sees the condition of room and found watchman standing at the door and he spoke in whispering

W: zoya madam ne kaha that ke ye sirf aap ko deena hai to '( he handed the parcel in his hand and left )

A: he shut the door behind and went and sat on the sofa and digged in the parcel and first found a letter in that and then a white coffee mug on which it was written " best friends forever "'he shut his eyes and a lone tear dropped on the cup and he picked the letter he opened it.. his hands were shaking out of fear that she was gone and he slowly looked into it

Mr Khan '

Khatay hai ke agar aap kisi ke jaan bachate hai to vo aap ke ho jati hai [his anger just calm down after reading this ], aur meri jaan bachane ke liya mai aap ka shukriya 'jitna bhi karu kam hai'..mai un buri bato ka zikhar nahi karungi jo hamare beech hui thi [he just took a heavy breath and tears fell down on the letter], mai un sab baato ko bhulna chati hu , aur dua karungi ke aap bhi bhool jaye '[ he curled his lips in pain remembering that she didn't wanted to mention about her pain ]Mr Khan you have been very kind to me , you helped me and supported me I appreciate it ..i wish aap ke zindagi mai koi aise ladaki aye jo aap se bohat payaar [he closed his eyes on this thought and could see her face sitting on the window of that night few days ago and he started to read again ] kare kyu ke aap jahi deserve karete hai'I will miss your family a lot specially "you" cause in new york no one will be there to protect me the way you did [ he remembered all the memories when she was in danger] '..you was there with me in good or bad , rain or dust like a friend so maine aap ko ye coffee mug diya hai jis mai aap apni fav coffee banaya ga aur thodi sugar extra add kijiya ga[ he smiled faintly on this thought that she did cared for him ] cause is se aap ke life mai bhi sweetness bhar jayagi 'mai dua karungi ke aap ke zindagi mai sab khariyat rahe'''.

good bye '..Allah hafiz '..

Miss. Zoya Farookhi .


He just stood in fear of loosing her and he dropped the letter and couldn't accept the truth that she was gone 'he was feeling like someone was pushing him down the dark water and he didn't wanna come out of it .'it was now quarter to 10 and he didn't go to office today he closed himself in the room and suffocated himself he sat down putting his head in between his legs and wiped for hours .'then he saw zoya standing on his bed and laughing 'he just saw her and a huge smile came cross his face he went close to touch her but she vanished , this made asad more mad and he started to throw thing again ..he again saw her standing out of the window practicing her kick boxing ..he went close to talk but she again fade off ..now he couldn't handle this and dashed in the wash room and splashed water on his face and looked in the mirror and again he found her standing behind him ..he took some water in his hand and threw it on the mirror and thought she would go away but she didn't he turned back but couldn't find her 'he again saw the mirror and now the tide of love created a tsunami in him and he picked the bottle near the basin and stuck it hard on the mirror and it shattered in pieces'


Guess even reality stuck asad's heart very hard his dreams shattered with in no time '.there was a knock on the door as the family was worried about him 'asad just opened the door and came out and looked at everyone and spoke in a rude tone

A: kya hua ?

D: tum theek to ho na'..(she could see his teary eyes and thought something is fishy )

A: ha 'vo bas kuch gir gaya tha [ he ignored the eye contact with everyone ]..can I get a coffee '

Nikhat: hai bhaijaan mai lati hu '(she went away and everyone disperse and they thought he is stressed so shouldn't trouble him )

Dilshad informed him that zoya's flight is at 11 'o clock today and she called her 'he wanted to ash her how she is and where she is ...but he tried not to think about her so he just ignored her talks 'and moved out

Every one was in hall ... asad just took his cup and was moving in his room and stopped by hearing some thing which rooted him on the ground 'he just froze to the place

That's it for today it's a rap with me

Maggie 😛

Precap: kya suna asad ne jis ke karan uski duniya he rook se gayi


Hit the like will help me to keep the count and do drop ur comments 😛

rutvis thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
😊Hey the story is so awsum... Gud wrk.. jst luved it... Eagerly waiting 4 nxt part..
Dead_Nightmare thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Res
Di aaj coment nahi kal
suchishah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Enrique (that's what I call u?) U know whose so ever will read this will never be able to resist themself from commenting or hitting the like button and that's coz of ur own magnificent writing, plot, scenes , set-up, emotions everything is mindowing...just perfect...ur update really touched the heart...it's where I m longing and waiting for the instalment eagerly...just can't wait...
I heartily request u to upload the nextchapter today as I know it wud be the biggest gift on my birthday ...but I know u have ur own commitments so that's actually fine...I just want u to continue soon...pppllleeeaaazzz and pm me if possible...tc
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suchishah

Hey Enrique (that's what I call u?) U know whose so ever will read this will never be able to resist themself from commenting or hitting the like button and that's coz of ur own magnificent writing, plot, scenes , set-up, emotions everything is mindowing...just perfect...ur update really touched the heart...it's where I m longing and waiting for the instalment eagerly...just can't wait...
I heartily request u to upload the nextchapter today as I know it wud be the biggest gift on my birthday ...but I know u have ur own commitments so that's actually fine...I just want u to continue soon...pppllleeeaaazzz and pm me if possible...tc


O god dear thanks a lot and happy birthday 🥳i wish i could upload but i havent written it yet

and thanks a lot i am go happy and glad to see ur comment

i will surely try to update it and happy bday again 😳
WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
My devil is on!

Bring it on bituwa, ek kya, 2-4 aur aur! 😆 😆

haiyee haiyee! Main varii jawan! Such a goood Update. POST ASAP. cant wait 😳 🤗
rutvis thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Its awsum... Luved d ending... Ya sure jst post ur new story..
loveuarmaanu thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 Gr8 Gr8 Gr8 Gr8 update loved it
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priyanka52

Gr8 Gr8 Gr8 Gr8 Gr8 update loved it


Originally posted by: rutvis

Its awsum... Luved d ending... Ya sure jst post ur new story..


Thanks dear will surely think to continue

Glad dat u liked it

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

a year ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".