Asya SS: When reAl!ty.knocks..(updated pT pg 32

Posted: 12 years ago
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WhEn Re@l!ty Kn0ck$ ThE D0or w@y 0f Dre@m$



Hey guys this is my first attempt to write anything on Qubool Hai forum

I hope you all will appreciate it .

When reality knocks the door way of Dream

Tossing in her bed from past 1 hour zoya felt uneasy and was upset about the fact that her mission for which she is in some 1 else house and going through a lot of emotional turmoil this thought made her go insane and she sat in her bed , her hands ran through her hairs , tension was clearly visible on her face , this was not that zoya which came her with her mission she was a one girl full of life and enjoyment she picked the picture which was the only evidence to find her father and sat staring at it , she thought she could drink a cup of coffer or something to cheer her self , she let her legs fall on her slippers and she walked to the kitchen thinking about how she should find her dad she didn't realized that she bought the picture with her to the kitchen '.she took a glass of water and was drinking it and sat on the window space looking at the sky , which indulge her more deep in her thoughts '.

Here asad was not able to sleep because of the severe head ace and he sat on his bed leaving his legs hanging down the bed . He just shut his eyes in pain and pinched his eyes as the pain was beyond his baring capacity he though he should take and pill for this and sleep he dragged his body and flipped open the gate of his room and came close to the kitchen and he noticed that the lights were still on he though it might be a bugler and hid him self behind the pillar and peeped slowly from that same place , the sight in front of him made him glue to the place and he placed his head on the wall and was staring at zoya

Zoya was just sitting on the window space and her hairs were left open and were swinging as the cold breeze touched her hairs and made her shiver , she placed the picture in her hands and was looking at it when a lonely tear escaped from her eyes , when the tear made their way to her cheeks asad got straighten up and was about to make a move even he didn't realized which part of his heart made him do such thing , but he stopped when he heard zoya saying something

Z: ABU! (the name just echoed in the empty house in the cold night )[he was just staring at her with all love and peace in his heart his head ace to a u turn and slipped out ]Abu aap kaha hai ?

A:[to himself] kaha hai matlab ? She didn't knew where her father is (now the curiosity took a new level and wanted to know more, he wondered who's pic was in her hand )

Z: (was talking to the picture) aap jante hai maine aap ko kitna dhoond ne ke koish ke ! Mai yaha srif aap ko dhoond ne ayi thi !

A:[T.H.S]dhoond ne aye thi means ( his thoughts went to the day when he offered coffee to her and apologies to her she mentioned that she was here for some thing but she didn't tell him )

Z: 17 saal ho gaye abu aap ko kabhi meri yaad nahi aye ( tears made there way out and she wipe them away )[seeing this some liquid like substance started to form in his eyes when he realized his eyes were wet as he could feel what she was feeling ]

Z: na to mai aap ka naam janti hu ? Na je janti hu ke aap kaise deekhte hai ?[hearing this asad routed to the place he then realized how badly he has hurt his by questioning her up bring and questioning about her parents , she had no clue about her past , his lips just curled in guily and he closed his eyes in shame and tears got there right place ]

Z: mai aap ko jald se jald dhoond na chati hu , mai Mr khan aur unki family ko aur trouble nahi karna chati '[ hearing this he realized the fact that how deep he has hurt a girl who was at no fault ..](she cried her heart out)

A:[ a girl full of life sitting here in front of me was looking like here life got no means to live , he felt a cold breeze which shiver him , when ever her tears made a way out , he moved his hand in her direction to stop her but he thought I am the only 1 who have hurt her to infinite extent if I console her she might be hurt more ]

Z: (was numb and just tucked her hairs behind her ears and shut her eyes in pain and agony ) [asad thought I should envy myself I have a father but I hate him but she doesn't even know who he is and I taut her every time ]

Asad was shaken from every root of his heart after listening to her and he realized his biggest mistake of his life to hurt a person In the most ruthless way , to hurt the girl who's heart was already ripped into pieces ..

That's it guys as this is my first SS

I hope you all like it and please hit like and comment

Praise /criticize

I will like to know !

Precap:

Kya asad dega zoya ka saath

Ya sach jaan jane ke baad chood dega us ka haath !

To know more like my story

Index:

Part 2 : pg 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76267250

Part 3:pg 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76541063

Part 4: pg 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76839043

Part 5 : pg 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77060462

part 6: pg 32

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77353499

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