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Posted: 12 years ago
I need a part 4 please have mercy!

Really good- keep up the good work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow

This was an amazing update

Asya were so cute

Lets see wats next

Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks to all the readers who appreciated my work and lied it 🤗

Am so glad that every 1 is liking my work 😳

Now its update time so here we go 😃
Posted: 12 years ago

Hey all thanks for all the beautiful comments and glad that you all liked it😊

Recap: zoya and asad to sneak peek in factory and found that sidique to be zoya's father😭

Hit like which makes my count easy …happy reading😃

The word abu should have bought a smile or feeling of victory in her but it was reverse there were no tears left in her , they were just liquidize water which were flowing from 2 pair of eyes…which was none other that asad and zoya ….she couldn't digest the fact that her father wanted to kill her mother …she just lost the balance and potential to with stand in the same room with a loathness monster like him and she moved towards the car and asad followed her as it was more important to handle her than it was to him ….she came near the car and stood near it and now the pain became a huge tide in her which was drowning her away and would destroy a innocent bud in her... which always on an erg to turn in a beautiful , soft flower….the heat and the gushy wind made her week inch by inch and when she saw asad standing in front of her …she could blurrly see him cause of the tears formed in her eyes and he vision was fading and she dropped on ground

Asad ran to save her and caught her and sat on the ground and tried to speak to her …..[ he went in all the flashback when ever he taunted her for her up bringing and he realized that how ever she is , she is million times best that her father , he was proud of zoya for what she is]

A: zoya utho …..look I am here [ he was now scared for her health as she was looking like a wingless bird who tried all her strength to fly hard ….he just picked her and placed in passenger seat and came to grab her stuff , he found her I pad and picked it and put all the stuff on the desk of the car and sat in ….]

He drove with a heavy pain in his heart and shot few glares at her and when he saw her wincing cause of pain he stopped the car when he hit the break she fell on his shoulder and he cupped her face , tears rolling down her checks where dried up ….and even his eyes had tones of tears after seeing her in this state …guess the conversion was complete and his heart was transformed into a soft foam which was now melting into water after seeing her …..

They came home and dilshad haven't return yet , he put her in her bed and sat beside her ..he then placed the ipad and all her stuff on the table when he note that I pad was on and he checked it and found there was some recording on it and he pressed the play button and the whole incident repeated it self on her I pad

He then just played it again and again and was just disturbed and frustrated cause of it…he put the I pad back in her bag and sat…silently letting his conscious feel her pain in the presence….she now was coughing and he jolts and tried to grab a glass of water but to the utter bad luck there was no water in the room he just ran like a small boy who's behind a kite to catch it and fetch water and came back and found her sitting on bed and her head in between her legs and he called her out …

A: miss ..f..arooki [ his throat went dried after looking into her eyes and he gave her the glass and she gulped it ]

Z: mujhe kuch saval ke javab chaiya ( there was a lump formed in her throat and her neck had a strong pinning pain )

A: kis cheez ke [ he slowly asked her as not to hurt and break her more ]

Z: mujhe mera..a..bu..(she gulped down the bitter truth that he was her father and said ) ke paas jana hai ..

A: but …. [ he looked at the curiosity in her which was digging his heart , he knew the fact she has gone way to week to even stand so , he then just spoke in a low tone ] but ….you first have to eat something ..[ he was concern for her as his heart was now daring to step in the circle of love ]

Z: ( she was amazed what he was speaking at the serious moment and thought to agree as she would do anything to get her way to her father ) oh..kkk

Asad just bought the food and gave her and she was just scooping it down like a small baby and didn't even care to look at him who so caringly bought the food for her ..asad just knew she would be hungry …he then said that lets inform ammi and leave as she deserves to know ..she agreed to the thought as her father was the 1 who was trying to kill her phoopi ….

Now asad reminded her to grab her bag and both of them left from there and they reached the house and she got down from the car and shut her eyes and remember what happened in the factory before 17 years and even before few hours …they stepped in but the watchman stopped them on the main door and asad screamed out his lungs and called

A: MR ..sidique …bahar ayea …... the anger and was rage echoed in the house which was clearly visible on his face like he could kill any body with that rage …zoya just hid herself behind him as she was too scared to face her father who tried to kill her mom ……

Every one in the house came out after hearing such loud scream and ayan spoke

AY: bhaijaan….[ he was happy to see him even after what happened between their families]

S: kya hua kon hai ..jo itna chilla raha hai ( they reached the hall way and saw him standing )

Raziya: tum phir aya gaye …huma paresheen karne ..(she had a cunning face and voice )

A: aap jaise logo ko kya satana jo khud itne gire hua hai ..[ he entered the house and zoya followed him ]

S: tum yaha kya lena aye ho ( he looked at them and tried to figure out zoya …and said ) ye ladaki kon hai tumehera saath …..now dilshad and najma also came and stood near him and was about to ask asad what's going on but he spoke before that

A: ye vo ladaki hai jiski ammi ko aap ne jala kar 17 saal pehale maar ne diya tha

Every one present over there was rooted and frozen to their places as to what he is speaking then raziya interrupted in with a face full of sweat and tension formed on it and said in rebelling voice

R: ye kya bakawas kar rahe ho tum ( a string of fear was completely visible on her face )

A:[ in a loud and firm voice ] mai bakwas nahi kar raha hu ..ye aap ke beti hai jiski ammi ko mar diya tha 17 saal pehela

Every 1 in the room was just stunned to hear what he was saying …then zoya just came out from his behind and stood in front and looked at every one and every one was looking at her with utter shock and sidique spoke

S: ye kya mazak hai …..( his face had an expression of guilt and fear and then it was all )

Z: mazak ….hai aap ne mujhe ek mazak bana kar chood diya hai …mujhe aabhi bhi yaad hai us din kya hua tha …meri ammi us aag mai jal kar mar gayi thi ( anger in her voice busted like a molten lava )

Sidique didn't had words to accept his deeds but raziya defended him and spoke

R: kya tamasha hai ye …aru tum ladaki ( she was about to raise a hand on her as the talk was going above her expectation )but the night in shining armor saved her by catching her hand and said …

A:aisa karne ke sochagiya bhi mat ... mera paas saboot hai … he just moved close to zoya and inserted his hand in her bag and took out his I pad and played the recording in front of everyone after the clip got over rashid came close to sidique and caught hold of his collar and was about to hit him when zoya interfered and said ..

Z: nahii …..mujhe mera kuch savalo ke javab chaiya …..dilshad moved close to her and kept a hand on her shoulder in her support and she spoke …

Z: aap ne meri ammi ke saath aisa kyu kiya …..kyu unhe mar diya ….aap jainte hai us din se lekar aaj tak mai har gum par sochti ayi hu ke ye gum us gum se chota hai jo aap ne diya hai( she was broken and the layer around her heart which was of ashes started to turn into a semi solid stone ) aap jaante hai aap ke vajaha se meri ammi ka pyaar mujhe naseeb nahi hua , aap ke vajaha se mai ye zakaham le kar zindagi bhar roti rahungi (she showed her wound which she got on that incident and by seeing it every one in the room got tears in their eyes and asad was like hell shaken from in side that how could she bare so much ….)

S: mujhe maaf kar do beta , now he realized and was asking a piece of sorry

Z: maaf kar do , kya aap ko maaf kar dene se meri ammi wapas aya jayagi …ye mera dard kam ho jayaga [ she was now going weak in her knees cause of her health issue and asad was just looking at her being ripped into pieces and he couldn't do anything to sooth her pain ]aap ko iski saza zaroor milagi ..aap ne do baacho ko unke abu se door kiya hai .., uski saza milagi , aap ne ek bewi ko uske shoorh se door kiya hai uski saza milagi , aap ne in 3 masoom zindagi ke saath nainsafi ke hai uski saza milagi , aur insab se zada aap ne mere ammi ko mara hai uski saza milagi ( her heart was now completely transformed into a stone one ..in which there was no feeling of any pain any love nothing she just wanted to run away from this Meany world who always snatched everything from her)

Z: mr khan call the police …..[ he called and then it was his turn to speak to mr sidique ]

A: aap ne jo meri ammi ke saath kiya uski to ek he saza hai …aur mai is baath ka bhyan rakhunga ke vo saza aap ko mile ..itna sab ho jane ke baad mai nahi chayinga je mere bhai behan is ghar mai rahe ..jaha aap ka akas bhi ho Zoya couldn't handle this anymore and she slipped herself out of this …..

Asad was talking to ayan and he didn't noticed when zoya disappeared from there….nor any one else noticed

That's it for today it's a rap ..with me Maggie😃


Precap : kaha gayi zoya , kya asad ke zindagi ho jayagi phir se suni

Ya kismat le ayagi in dono ko ek baar phir kareeb

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Love Maggie :)😳

Edited by enrique - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres... wow maggie that was such an awesum update... i love the part when Asad felt Zoya's pain... hayee.. perfect Mitwa moment... loved it... update soon 👏
Edited by RiDz_rox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Only one word
Wow amazing
Do word ho gye but kam hai
Lovely update
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

Only one word
Wow amazing
Do word ho gye but kam hai
Lovely update


Bhai confuse ho gaye ho kya update read kar ke

ek ke jagha do word 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Youuu, how dare you end the chapter like this? :P I WANT MOREEE , puhlease? 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
First Awesome Blossom!!!

Second, how are you maggie now?? better are you?! Was worried for you.

Although i am greedy for the next part like a despo, i cant wait for you to get well 😆 😆

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ You 👏 👏 👏
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

First Awesome Blossom!!!


Second, how are you maggie now?? better are you?! Was worried for you.

Although i am greedy for the next part like a despo, i cant wait for you to get well 😆 😆

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ You 👏 👏 👏



Awww anki don't worry now my condition is stable 😃

And glad u r waiting for nt update coz next will be super awesome

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