Asya SS: When reAl!ty.knocks..(updated pT pg 32 - Page 11

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Sorry I'm late! Actually my internet wasn't working! And gosh this was such a heart wrenching update. I really liked the part when Asad went to comfort a pained Zoya. Keep writing more!

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Sorry I'm late! Actually my internet wasn't working! And gosh this was such a heart wrenching update. I really liked the part when Asad went to comfort a pained Zoya. Keep writing more!

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Asad just shot up in shock after having a look at the picture he was rooted to place by seeing mr sidique in the picture and he just was hell bent to know the complete truth about her past 'and asked her

A: ye'.photo mai '[ his curiosity took a new level and he sat close to her on the floor where she was sitting ]

Z: ye mera abu ke aakhri nishani hai par mera abu is mai se kon hai mujhe nahi pata.mai unka naam tak nahi jannti ( she just was sipping the coffee in and sobbing slowly )

A: kya ?[ he was even more shocked to listen on the fact that she didn't knew her father by face nor by name ]

Z: she explained him how her mother was in factory and how her mom got burnt but she didn't mentioned about her wounds 'while wenting her heart out she didn't realized her tears were streaming down asad was just listening to her very carefully he watched the curiosity in her like she needed a hand to pull her out of drowning water '..she then mention about the factory '.by listening to it he interrupted her

A: doll factory bhopal ke ?[he thought ..was it the same factory where since ages no one is allowed in which a fire accident took place ]

Z: yes its in bhopal only but I don't remember clearly about it '[ he thought he should once go there and check if he can find something ]

Zoya just slept keeping her head on the sofa while taking to him 'he faced her and when he saw her sleeping in peace he thought she is so beautiful and so serine 'he never noticed her from so close 'but what was troubling him was mr. sidique in the picture ..he thought what connection did he had with her father he thought he must find out but first he need to shift zoya in her bed 'he carefully picked her up he was just looking at her . And he thought to him self that the girl who speaks so much and who is so hearty can even contain a tons of pain in her heart,

A hammer named as feeling hit his heart with a great force and had hit the stone wall around his heart which was creaked '.he slowly then placed her in bed and when he placed she didn't leave his collar 'he caught her wrist and tried to remove it when she spoke out in pain '

Z: ab..uuu 'abu '..[ he den slowly cased her hairs and shushed her and came close to her and spoke to her ]

A: mai aap ke abu ko dhund kar layunga ye mera vada hai aap se Miss new york '.[ he then placed the picture on side table and placed a paper weight on it and slipped himself from room ]

Whole night he kept on turning sides and been thinking about the picture and her past 'The first ray of light fell on his face and woke him from his sleep .. The first thing which he remembered was last night incident '.which made his intentions firm that he will help her in finding her father '.

Every one was on breakfast table , he was waiting for her and kept on peeping from the corner of his eyes .. news paper in front of his face... weather she have arrived or not ..the way she entered bought a huge smile on his face but it was dropped down after seeing her face which was same like it was last night '.dilshad called her and made her sit on her chair next to asad '.and served breakfast and informed asad

D: asad mai aur najma tumari phoopi se milne ja rahe hai jald he aya jayange

As it was Sunday and zoya got nothing to do so she decided to go with them and told...

Z: phoopi shall I also come actually I am bored and got nothing to do'[ asad thought if she go with them he wouldn't be able to take her where he want to take her so he decided to stop her'. in asad style ..he spoke in firm voice ]

A: nahi ..aap nahi jayangin[he saw her and pooped his eyes out hopping she would understands and will not rebel his thoughts but to his utter disappointment she prove him wrong and spoke in return]

Z: why Mr. khan '..

A: [kicked her leg from below the table and said ]kyu ke I am saying it that's why 'do you understand '[he stressed these words so that she get it ..]zoya closed her eyes in agreement as she understood he didn't wanted her to go with them

Z: ok Mr. khan I will not go ! Fine (she made a angry face and curl her lips in anger )[he kept staring at her ]

D: but zoya u can come '.

Z: nahi phoopi now ever I remember I got some work ( and she left from there )

Dilshad and najma went from there leaving a mumbling zoya and defensive asad behind '..as the door shut zoya asked him in her regular style

Z: why didn't you let me go mr. khan .. [asad hit his hand on his head in disappointment that she being so smart she didn't understand anything ]

A: lets go '

she was annoyed by his act as why he was behaving like this but then after last night there was a awaked feeling of strange trust which tied them with strange strings . she again tried to ask him but he told her to grab her stuff and come soon he was waiting in car she went in her room and picked her bag , I pad and phone and marched towards car ... He drove the car and they was a killing silent between them and he thought to break it

A: aap theek to hai na '[ his voice had a sweet concern which only he showed to his family ]zoya was surprised from his behavior )

Z:where are we going ?(now her impatient behavior was driving her insane and she out of frustration tried to talk to him but he stopped the car and pointed his finger out in one direction she looked at it )

Z: ye ''.(she remembered the place and went into flash back how here mother came here and how the fire incident took place . Yes it was the same old factory , she felt like her heart was sinking more in 'and the layer around her heart started to dry out of pain and she was becoming cold towards the word "feelings" as the incident left a deep mark on her mind and body )

Guess this was the natures game when his heart was been converted into a pure glass from a stone hearted ones , on other hand the process of going versa was taking place in her heart '..he then just placed a hand on her shoulder to bring her out of the trance ..she just jolt out of her thoughts and took a heavy breath and shut her eyes )

Z: thanks Mr. khan .(she wasn't unknown from the fact that apart from fighting on many grounds he is helping her to find her past , she had a cold voice and a harsh tone when she said him thanks , she didn't mean to but guess it was poured out from heart')

[ the cold voice somewhere pinned his heart like a sharp instrument ]

A: lets go '[ he could see the fear beaming in her eyes when she saw the factory ..this was creeping on his heart with a strange feeling ]

They stepped out of the car and she was just looking at the place and she picked her ipad ..and shoot few movie .. he was astonished and looked at her actions , and she looked at his expressions and said..

Z: mai is place ko kabhi nahi bhool sakti jaha par meri ammi ke mooth hui thi [ he saw the need of a mother on her face which he could clearly feel as he also almost was about to loose his mother few days ago ]

Now they moved in and saw few people talking in 1 corner asad recognize the voice and pulled zoya in a corner (she was stunned with his actions ) and she was standing in front of asad and peeping at those people her ipad was on recording mode and she slicked it to her stomach and what every was happening was been recorded 'she hear asad saying " Mr siddiqui" on his voice she turn her head and looked at him and asked

Z: do u know them ( she didn't realized that he was the same guy in the picture ) then he slowly came close to her ear and spoke

A: ye aap ke abu ke tasveer mai hai [ this closeness bought a tickling feeling in his stomach and he could feel the thum- thum of her heart which was increasing minute by minute , he could clearly see her expression by listening this ]

S: maine kya kaha tha ke vo mar jani chaiya '.parr dilshad aab tak zinda hai ( by listening this asad's world slipped away beneath his feet and zoya was petrified to listen to this) '. he continued

S: maine kaha tha vo is factory ka raaz ke bare mai kuch janti hai to tum ne use mara kyu nahi

A: so he was behind all this '.[ he grinned his teeth in anger and looked at him with rage anger ]

S: tum jante ho agar use pata chal gaya ke vo aag hum ne lagayi thi hamari pehli bewi ko marne ke liya ..aur is ka ilzam Rashid par lagaya tha to vo use aapne pass bulalagi

Listening this zoya remembered her mother who got burnt in that fire she couldn't handle the shock and she took a step back and clashed with asad's chest and the wall which was dried around her heart was turning into a cover with a layer of smoky ashes and husk which only gave her pain. and her feeling burned her whole body from within 'when she moved back he caught her from shoulders and said '

A: ye'.[ tears were even streaming from his eyes but he controlled it and console her ]

Z: (shut her eyes and warm tears slipped from her eyes and she spoke in low voice) mere abu hai !''.

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Precap: zoya ke saam ne aya sara sach aur Khool gaye sare raaz ,

kya asad de payaga zoya ka sab ke saamne saath ''

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