AsYa FF: Inevitable Love *UPDATED* Chapter 15 pg.36 *Final Chapter* - Page 10

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Chapter 10

"I'm crazy." He scoffed. "You know I always suspected something was wrong up there," He pointed his temple. "But now I know it's true. You are totally impossible!"
"Oh really?" Zoya was up in his face now. She probably didn't even realize how close she came to him while ranting away but he definitely noticed and wished he didn't notice everything about her so closely. "Mr. Khan, you've always been like this. Since we first met remember. Is there nothing you can do without shouting? At me?"
Asad sighed heavily, "Ms Farooqui, I don't have time for this. Najma and Ammi are waiting. I rather not keep them waiting much longer." He turned away and started walking in the direction of his car and his family.
Zoya gasped, "He walked away from me. Oh Mr. Khan I won't let you get the last word. This isn't over."
Zoya followed him back to the car visibly fuming. She controlled her expression at the last minute schooled her expression into a smile so Phoopie wouldn't worry. She was completely silent on the way home. Unusual for her. Najma shot her sideways glances wondering why she was so silent.
"Wonder what's wrong with Zoya." Najma sighed and thought to herself and shot a look at her brother. "Bhaijaan must have said something. I'm sure."
When they arrived, Zoya went straight to her room and didn't speak to anyone.
"What's wrong with Zoya?" Phoopie asked aloud looking at Asad.
"Ammi, why are you looking at me?" he asked taken aback that his mother automatically sought him out as the cause of Ms. Farooqui's unease.
"You fight so much and she was with you right before she came into the car and was unnaturally silent so . . ." she shrugged. "I just assumed . . ."
"Well it's not true. I have no idea why she's behaving that way." He walked away to his room and muttered under his breath. "I don't care either."
~*~*~*~*~
Zoya sat on her bed and video chatted with her Jeeju and Aapi. In the back of her mind she was recalling her spat with Mr. Khan. He was really impossible. He'd gotten the last word but she wasn't done yet. They still needed to hash out the hostility that always came out between them. It wasn't as if she didn't know he was capable of kindness. Mangalpur reminded her enough, She snapped back to the present.
"I miss you all a lot." She said wistfully. "You miss me too right?"
"Of course we do. We wish you'd come back." Zeenat sighed unhappily. "I know Zoya. I know how important it is to find your Abbu but you haven't found anything right. You've been there so long."
"It's only been two weeks, Aapi." Zoya tried to pacify her.
"So it has but you've never been away from us for so long. Promise me you'll think about it. Coming back?" Zeenat implored.
"I promise. I'll be back in the US so soon you'll never remember that I was gone. I love you. Allah Hafiz."
"Allah Hafiz, Zoya."
~*~*~*~*~
Asad couldn't stop himself. Zoya was fuming with anger when they left the wedding so why was she so quiet and why didn't she come to dinner?
He approached her room, the door was gaping open and he caught the tail end of a conversation and wished he hadn't.
"I promise. I'll be back in the US so soon you'll never remember that I was gone. I love you. Allah Hafiz." Zoya said to who had to be either her Jeeju or Aapi or both.
Back to the US? Was she leaving? Is that why she was so withdrawn and quiet? Was it because he shouted at her, maybe she decided that she couldn't live in the same house with him any longer.
"Yes, Mr. Khan?" Ms. Farooqui asked standing in front of him. He hadn't even realized he'd stepped into her room and without knocking too. What was going on with him? He was too in his head these days.
"You're going back to the US?" He appalled himself at his boldness. He hadn't meant to ask that.
She shot him a narrow eyed look, "You were listening . . . to my conversation?" She scoffed. "What's wrong with you Mr. Khan?"
"I . . . I didn't mean to I happened to overhear your conversation as I was coming to call you to see if you wanted dinner. Ammi was worried." He said.
"Oh . . . I'll be right there." She answered.
She turned away from him and he realized she didn't answer his question. He pushed the issue. "So are you?"
"Am I what?" she faced him again.
He cleared his throat, "Going back to the US. I know your VISA had only a month more."
"Why do you care Mr. Khan?" she asked staring at him intently. "What difference would it make if I was going back?"
Well wasn't that a loaded question. Did he care?
Well she asked and he should answer, right? Well he told her whether it was what she wanted to hear or not, it definitely had an impact. He needed to get out of here now!
He turned and walked out of the room and left a gaping Zoya staring at him with wide-eyes and an open mouth.

<TO BE CONTINUED>

I bet you want to know what Asad said to Zoya right. No worries, I'll get to that in the next chapter. Please share your thoughts. It's always nice to get feedback from your peers. I love to write so this is fun for me.

Edited by cclove - 12 years ago
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Asad's room

Asad sat on his bed and sighed. He rested his elbows upon his knees and dropped his head into his palms. Why did he say that? Damn, what was he thinking? He just blurted it out didn't he?
Did he mean it? No he didn't, did he? All he was doing was creating more questions and zero answers. He remembered the look on Zoya's face when he said it. He sighed and lay back on his bed. She was really going to leave now.
Zoya room: A couple minutes earlier.
"Why do you care Mr. Khan?" Zoya asked staring at him intently. "What difference would it make if I was going back?"
"What difference does it make?" He asked staring her right back. Two could play that game! "It makes no difference to me, Ms. Farooqui. It means nothing! Go back. Finally the day has come." It was just falling out of his mouth like a bad dream. He could stop it. It was word vomit and he had it bad.
"When are you going? Let me know, I'll help in any way that I can."
Oh God! Why did he just say that?
He could see the shock and hurt lining Zoya beautiful face and his stomach bottomed out. He felt physically ill.
He fled the room, but not without one glance back at her. She was staring after him, eyes wide, mouth agape and a lone tear sliding down one smooth cheek.

Zoya's room

Zoya sat there tears silently streaming down her face. He really couldn't wait to get rid of her could he? Well she would give him exactly what he wanted. Zoya Farooqui never overstayed her welcome. Phoopie and Najma had treated her like family never once making her feel like a guest but alas, Mr. Khan put her in her place. She was just a guest. One who according to Mr. Grumpy was overstaying her welcome.
She pulled up the airline site on her iPad and booked a ticket for the day after tomorrow. She needed time to make arrangements. She was leaving without finding her father. She'd come back. She'd have her Jeeju make some arrangements to get her VISA renewed so she could return and resume her search.
She hadn't yet found any concrete clues to her father's whereabouts so . . . it was okay for her to leave right?
Her heart ached knowing she'd be going far away from where her father might be but she wasn't going to stand the insults any longer. Mr. Khan needed to treat her with more respect and not like some foolish ladki from the US with no moral upbringing.

Khan House Living Room

"Phoopie, I wanted to talk to you, to all of you." She told the woman who had been very closest thing she had to a mother.
"Zoya are you okay? What's wrong? Why do you look so harassed?" she inquired, her face etched with worry.
Najma walked in and Mr. Khan followed behind her. She made sure not to look in his direction. "I'm going back to the US." Her voice reverberated through the silent house.
"Going back?" Dilshad asked confused. "But why Zoya?"
"It's time Phoopie and my Aapi and Jeeju are missing me." She looked up at Mr. Khan, he was staring very rigidly at the wall, his face blank an emotionless.
"You really don't care if I leave, do you Mr. Khan?" Zoya asked in her head. "I really thought you'd want me to stay after everything."
She turned and went back to her room. Her heart felt heavy. Why was Mr. Khan making her feel this way. She was sad, hurt and angry all at once and part of her . . . she just wanted him. She wanted him to hold her and tell her not to leave, that he wanted her to stay.
She shook her head, "Allah Miya. What's wrong with me? I must really be crazy to want Mr. Khan to be that way. With me!" she shook her head again, roughly as if trying to shake the disturbing yet thrilling thoughts from her head.

Coming in Chapter 12 . . .

"Zoya, I'm sorry. I didn't mean it." Asad said as Zoya walked towards the terminal.
"ZOYAAA." He shouted and she turned around, eyes wide and relieved?
He ran up to her and took her in his arms, "Don't leave me Zoya. Please." He pleaded.
Asad held her tightly to his chest and wished he never had to let her go.

<TO BE CONTINUED>

Edited by cclove - 12 years ago

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