OS Dont say sorry (part 2 pg.2) COMPLETE!!!

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malini

@malini96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

i dont want ur os to end ...plz continue if u can

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batgirl67

@batgirl67

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Laila2009
You want Zoya to apologize to him for being in the way at the wrong time and to accept responsibility for his anger...you want Asad to justify is slapping of her...not romantic in the slightest...and why did Asad think she liked him? She sounded terrified of him.

I found this to a disturbing piece of writing romanticizing violence from the start. Sad to read this. Very sad.

im sorry this offened you i just this is my first time writing anything and i was just trying to show how Asad realizes his mistake and he did slap her because he wasnt thinking all he remebered was that he told her to make mariam leave and when he saw mariam there he thought she had lied to him again. Beside i was making Asad look like Zoya's savior because Asad may have hated her but he has always saved her from harm. Yes he has given her harm to but remeber he doesnt know how to behave with this girl cause she is diffrenet, modern. Im sorry if this os offened you but it wasnt in my intentions do hurt Zoya or Asad in my OS. Hope you forgive me.

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Shrsan

@Shrsan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Wow that was really nice

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: batgirl67

im sorry this offened you i just this is my first time writing anything and i was just trying to show how Asad realizes his mistake and he did slap her because he wasnt thinking all he remebered was that he told her to make mariam leave and when he saw mariam there he thought she had lied to him again. Beside i was making Asad look like Zoya's savior because Asad may have hated her but he has always saved her from harm. Yes he has given her harm to but remeber he doesnt know how to behave with this girl cause she is diffrenet, modern. Im sorry if this os offened you but it wasnt in my intentions do hurt Zoya or Asad in my OS. Hope you forgive me.

Please don't apologize to me - this is your forum to and you can write what you want. I just gave my opinion. I found this piece of wok disturbing as you have justified the slap and I just didn't see a sincere apology. Instead I see Zoya apologizing for making him slap her by being in the wrong place at the wrong time. The rest of it..just didn't have any magic...go read my redemption posts and you can see my take 😉 You don't have to agree with them but it will give you a different perspective.

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Cutie one, filmy par phir bhi cutie As usual made me smile soo biggy 🤗

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suchishah

@suchishah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

That was purely amazing...meaning I literally was smiling all throughout the write-up...u made my day ...thank u...pls pls pls try on ff...u will surely rock ittt

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Oishi

@Oishi23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I love this

u should write more on ASYA

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Aaawww... This was seriously just tooo cute!!! Loved the ending:)

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batgirl67

@batgirl67

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: suchishah
That was purely amazing...meaning I literally was smiling all throughout the write-up...u made my day ...thank u...pls pls pls try on ff...u will surely rock ittt

I would love to write a FF but the only thing im afraid of is that ill hit writer's block and the story will be incomplete. I've been a silent reader for a long time so this is my first time actually writing something on this forum and from other ff writers it takes a lot of time to update and its needs time to be written and i don't have a lot of time so once i have time ill write one!