OS Dont say sorry (part 2 pg.2) COMPLETE!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is my first one shot i ve written on asya. Hope you enjoy it. My way of how Zoya should react to asad apology.

Zoya: Mr. Khan please leave me alone.

Asad can see how red her eyes were. I did that to her. I always hurt her and regret it in the end.

Asad: Look Zoya I..

Zoya:Mr. Khan im trying to stay in my limit please mera pe asan kar do aur huma akala chod do.

He had done it. He had finally managed to make Zoya like him. He needed to say sorry NOW.

Asad: Look Zoya i no i have hurt you and i shouldnt even deserve to be forgiven but let me assure you that i have NEVER hit a girl before and i was just so angry and...

Zoya:I no i was at the wrong place, at the wrong time...

Asad: PLEASE LET ME FINISH!

Zoya just stood there so he took that as a sign to continue.

Asad:Anyway I slapped you because i thought you had brought Mariam back home when i told you to get rid of her and that its your fault my ammi had to pay the price. I should have heard you out but im...

Zoya: Yes Mr. Khan you should have heard me out. I no you told me to send Mariam off and i DID. But them Phuphi brought her back home while i tired to explain to her that you wouldnt be happy about this. Everytime Mr. Khan, everytime something goes wrong you always put the blame on me but not this time. I am NOT he guilty one and the sooner you realize this the better. Mr. Khan i respect you a lot and i no the pain you have gone through and i no what a life is without parents but i would never EVER try to hurt Phuphi or Najama. They mean as much to me as they do to you. Im sorry that i have made you go through all this pain and i promise you that i will leave you if you think this is best for the safety of your family.

Asad couldnt breathe. Just the thought of her leaving made him want to take her in his arms and not let go.

Asad dropped to his knees and broke down. He cried for everything.

Asad: You no why you irritated me Ms. Farooqi? It was because you could laugh freely, live freely, and not have a care in the world. When my father left us me and my mom had to would work and make some money a day to keep us fed. She did worked day and night so me and Najma could go to school. I lost my childhood in a very young age and when you came to my life you just reminded me of what got taken away from me when I was young. I don't except you to forgive for all the times I have hurt you and all the times I have judged you and DEFINETLY don't expect you to forgive me but I m really very truly sor'

Zoya had heard enough she couldn't let him break. Mr.Khan who saved her every time she was in trouble is asking her for forgiveness. She couldn't and wouldn't let Mr. Khan become or show how weak he is.

Zoya: Don't say it!

She was on her knees immediately and wiping his tears.

Zoya: Don't you ever break like this again. In front of me you can cause no matter what Asa'Mr. Khan I will ALWAYS be there by your side. I will be your punching bag but the only problem is that your punching bag will fight back and defends herself think you can handle that?

She says that to make him laugh but all he does is stare.

Zoya: Mr.Khan you are the strongest person I know and when you breakdown like this all to say sorry to ME I feel like you are not you. Im grateful to know what is the reason you're like the way you are and you thought I was worthy to be told about your past but im not worthy of your sorry. You were just sad and angry and didn't know what you were doing when you slapped me. All that probably kept running in your head was Phuphi and I understand why you did what you did. The only reason why I was angry was you never heard me out.

Asad: Zoya I

Zoya: And for your information your not the only one to have a difficult past. When I was younger me and my mom were left to die in a fire and i watched my mom die in front of my eyes.(She lifts the arms of her shirt.) I have marks over my body, the reason why I wear pants and long sleeve shirts because they cover every inch of my body while the indian attire don't all have long sleeves and they are most of the time transparent so that is my reason for my fashion sense. And you must be wondering what about my father? He left us and he is the reason why I came here and one of the reason why I denied to get married. I have been in the same amount of pain that you have been through but I just handled it differently then you did. But now im here and it will work out in the end okay?

Asad kept wondering what he did to deserve her forgiveness. He also kept remembering every time he accused her for her attire or her manners and values and how wrong his judgement of Zoya was. Zoya wasn't an ill- mannered but a girl who just wanted to spread happiness that she didn't receive in her life.

Asad stood up while helping Zoya up.

Asad: Zoya I promise you this, I will NEVER judge a person before knowing their reason behind it but in return you promise me something?

Zoya:What?

Asad: One; You are going to let me help you find your father and two; Never leave me.

Zoya was shocked. All he ever said was he couldn't wait for her to leave but now he wants her to stay.

Zoya: I'I

Asad: You have to never leave ME! I need you Zoya. When your not here Im lost so please Zoya be with me. Laugh with me. Live with me. Love me.

Zoya couldn't believe what she heard. Love Me? He couldn't be serious.

Asad: I love you Ms. Farooqi and I hope you love me to.

He kissed her forehead when they both heard a gasp. They turned around to see Najma.

Asad was blushing and so was Zoya.

Asad: Najma! How long were you here?

Najma: Just in time to here you confess your love. Bhai finally you broke your walls! Thank you Zoya! Thank you! Without you my brother would have never

Zoya: Hey Najma I did nothing to your brother except brought the Asad that was hiding under this angry young man Asad.

Both Najma and Zoya laughed and Asad chuckled while staring at Zoya with loving eyes.

Najma: Oh ho Bhai jaan I think you want to be alone with Zoya BHABI!

With that Najma ran away from them before Asad and Zoya had time to react. They fell in an awkward silence.

Zoya: Well I think you should go check on Phuphi.

Asad: Yeah I think ill head there.

Asad started to walk to the door when he turned to Zoya and said.

Asad: Zoya, now that I have told me how I feel im gonna warn you I will never let you out of my sight and I WILL fulfill my sister and moms dream and make you my wife.

With that he smirked at Zoya's face and turned to go to ammi.

That Mr.Khan. Says I Love You once and is already putting a claim on me. And with that Zoya smiled and went to the bathroom with her night clothes while lost in the thought of becoming Mrs. Zoya Asad Khan.

Few I wrote one long os. If you like me to continue with this story and make a part two of her telling him I love you and them getting married then just like and comment ant part two will be on the way!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipee... I am first

beautiful os dear... brilliantly written... portrayed AsYa's emotion well...

Zoya: I will be your punching bag but the only problem is that your punching bag will fight back and defends herself think you can handle that?

this line really cracked me up😆😆😆 a punching bag which fights back hah..😆😆

Asad: You have to never leave ME! I need you Zoya. When your not here Im lost so please Zoya be with me. Laugh with me. Live with me. Love me.

Aww... 😳you have depicted Asad's love for her in this simple yet beautiful sentences.

I wish CVs adopt this OS for the current track thanx for giving us Asad's confessioon which is not going to happen soon in our show😃

pls pm me for the next updates... plshhh😳
Edited by rosamale - 12 years ago
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Lovely Muahhh 🤗
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AWWW!!!!
it was really cute...
loved it...
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I have such a big bright smile on my face after reading this! Thank you soo much. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooohooo...
loved it man...
but this isn't going to happen anytime soon...the confession i mean...
but anyway dream karne me kya jata...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb Os!!..
Much Better From Wat Was Shown In The Show!..(My Opinion,No Offence To Anyone)...
Would Love A Part 2!!..
Please Pm me..Thanks!..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think you should continue with a part two. This is an awesome OS. Love it. ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was happy with how many people liked my story! As per some peoples request and my promise I'm going to write a Part 2! Here it is and I hope you all will like it!

Next morning Asad, Najma, and Ammi were all in Ammi's room eating breakfast.

Ammi: Where is Zoya?

Asad smirked knowing that she must still be in her room since she didn't even come to dinner last night.

Asad: Last I can't believe told her I love her. What if she doesn't love me I mean she didn't even tell me she did? No! She does love me! I mean I saw it in her eyes when I left the room. Well either way she is going to be mine and I'm not going to let her get away from me. She thought that I was mean to her and more possessive well she will wish I didn't have loved her because now I'm not going to ever let her leave.

While Asad was lost in thoughts of Zoya, Najma saw him smile and knew what he was thinking and decided to make fun of him.

Najma: Well Ammi I think that she must be shy.

Ammi: Why would Zoya be shy?

Najma: Because Bhai Jaan…..

Asad put a hand on Najma's mouth and then told Ammi that Zoya was shy because he caught her saying her unconditional love to her favorite cricket player.

Ammi: Why would she be shy of that?

Asad: Umm…Umm

Ammi: Never mind just go and call her to my room. I miss her and her laugh.

Asad: I'll go get her Najma you stay with Ammi.

Najma: Okay Bhai don't worry you just get my….

Najma stopped from calling Zoya her Bhabi when Asad gave her the look.

Najma: Man my brother may have changed but something's just never change. Hopefully Zoya Bhabi will be able to fix this.

Najma giggled and Asad gave her another look before turning and going to get his girl with a smile on his face.

Ammi: Okay Najma you and your brother are horrible at liars so tell me what's going on with Asad?

While Najma told Ammi about Zoya and Asad, Asad stood in front of Zoya's door and was in a dilemma in what to say to her.

Asad: Suck it up Asad. Just behave like normal. She already knows how you feel so there is nothing to worry about. Just go in there and be a man!

With that Asad opened the door and was amused with what he saw. Zoya was pacing her floor up and down muttering things while unaware of Asad's presence.

Zoya: Should I go to Phuphi's room? I mean he has already said sorry and he has also said I love… well I just… I just don't know how I will be able to eat in front of him. Speaking of food I'm so hungry! Ugh woman up Zoya! Just face the man you…

Zoya turn and stopped talking as soon as she saw Asad. She blushed and looked the other way.

Zoya: How the heck did I not realize his presence?!? Gosh, my life is slowly becoming like those Indian RomCom shows!

Asad: What were you going to say?

Zoya: Huh?

Asad: You were saying something about facing a man you… You what?

Zoya: Uh…Uh a man that is…Um super irritating and um…

Asad: Here let me help you. A man that is irritating, dark, bitter, horrible, evil, mean, a jerk…

Zoya: No! He isn't a jerk, evil, or horrible! He is irritating, dark and bitter sometimes, mean when angry but never a jerk!

Asad: Then what type a man is he?

Zoya knew he wanted her to confess and she was not going to be those girls that shy away from her feelings. She is going to tell him and then maybe she will be able to go eat food without having to worry about him being there. If this kadhoos can say his true feelings then so can I!

Zoya walked up to him slowly and then wrapped her arms around his neck and whispered in her ears.

Zoya: A man I love.

She finally said it. Asad was so happy he picked her up in his arms and twirled her around saying I love you too. She giggled and he put her down and stared in her eyes. While they were lost in each other's eyes and arms, they happened to forget to close the door and did not realize Najma with Ammi in a wheel chair seeing the couple confessing their love to each other.

Ammi: *clearing throat*

Asad and Zoya trance was broken and they got out of each other's arms and Zoya blushed seeing Ammi and Najma there while Asad just put on a poker face but being his Ammi she saw him also blushing.

Ammi: Well get shot by a bullet and wake up to find my son and my going to be bahu confessing their love to each other is the best gift I have ever received.

This made both of them blush even more and made Ammi and Najma happy that Zoya was finally going to be in their lives forever.

Najma: This is so great! I always wanted a sister and will finally have one!

This made Asad and Zoya happy that their love was accepted by Ammi and Najma's. Asad looked over to Zoya and knew he made the right decision to give his heart to her. She would be the only one to keep him in line and can deal with him.

Zoya looked at Asad and saw a future with all the happiness she had gotten taken away from her. She was finally going to have someone that will love her and a mother she had lost and a sister to spoil and pamper.

Ammi: Well I have to call Zoya's Jiju and get everything set! But first Zoya beta kay app humaray Asad ka saath nikhaah qubool karthi hai?(English Translation: Zoya do you agree to marry my Asad?)

Zoya blushed and looked right into Asad's eyes and says

Zoya: Qubool Hai(I do).

Ammi: Aur Asad app ko yeh qubool hai?(And Asad do you agree?)

Asad looked Zoya in the eyes and says: Qubool Hai.(I do.)

Ammi: Tho fir settle hua hum abbi ja ka Zoya ki Appi aur Jiju ko phone kartha hain aur unce rishta settle kartha hain.(Then its settled. i will call her sister and Brother- in- law and get your wedding fixed.)

Ammi and Najma left to go plan and Asad and Zoya looked at each other.

Asad walks towards her and realizes she moves back and he knows that she is feeling shy so he decides to mess with her.

Asad: Zoya tell me right now if you are sure about this wedding because you have a habit to run away from your wedding's i mean you have done it twice and i need to be prepared before you decide to run away from the alter all dramatically like always because then i wont be the one saving you but the one running after you. So tell me so i can build my stamina so i can chase you.

Zoya: You little...

And that's when Asad laughed and ran out the room while Zoya ran after him threatening to now defiantly not marry him.

They ended up getting married in the next two months and while they had some tiffs during their marriage, Asad was right on the account that she was the only one to be able to handle him and she did get all the happiness she had seeked for and both lived their lives as happily as they wished to be.

THE END!⭐️

Well thank you for reading my One Shot! i was so happy with your guys comments and hopefully i will write another one when i get inspiration! Please like and comment!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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You want Zoya to apologize to him for being in the way at the wrong time and to accept responsibility for his anger...you want Asad to justify is slapping of her...not romantic in the slightest...and why did Asad think she liked him? She sounded terrified of him.

I found this to a disturbing piece of writing romanticizing violence from the start. Sad to read this. Very sad.
Edited by Laila2009 - 12 years ago

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