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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: suchishah
The letter was awesome...pls continue it...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...

thankuuu... i am really sorry, i didnt think of continuing it😕

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: npatel
That was an amazing Letter. You should definitely continue. I really loved it. 😆

thanks😊

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
Oh my god!!! That was so well written. Apart from the grammatical errors, which I don't really care about (not now, at least!), I just can't feel but feel for Asad now. And that letter... So like Zoya! So like her to say things and pour out her heart. I want one similar sequence onscreen!

And one request! Please... Please continue with this! Please? Or is it just that you have already ended with 'Forever'?

Annie

i am glad that u like it😃 well, my english really sucks😆 but how can i not write on my favourite couple😳... about continuing, well... i didnt really think about it..😊.lemme see if i can write more😃

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Shrsan

@Shrsan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow ... That was really heavy. And moving... This is one of the best letter I have read ... Great job yaar ...

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Omg its too gud! Plz pm me yr updates 😃

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sho-shweet

@sho-shweet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

it brought tears in my eyes...it was so heart touching,u are a fab writer..u know how to potray emotions...in short u are blessed with writing skills

good luck..will love to read more stuff from u😛

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Zehra

@senorzorro12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

OMG Awesome brilliantly written👏
i almost cried reading the letter
the words felt so real 😭😭

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Miss Sara

@Samaira32

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

You made me cry reading this... 😭

I was speechless..👏. Amazing... I dont have much words to say but it was beautiful.. I hope u post a part 2 to this but the pain and the title "All is lost" will be apt bcoz all is lost.. Asad lost her and she lost him... 😭

I would suggest you to write a part 2 as a sequel or another story bcoz this stpry till here is amazing.. No offence to you, just shared my opinion.. I hope you dont mind..😊.

Its actaully a harsh reality that in anger you refuse to understand anything and end up hurting the ones you love and afterwards you arent left with anything but remorse and regret...!