OS: Oops! On the Beach? [16+] Note - Pg 19

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misha93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Completely loved it! I was waiting for someone to post an asya ff or os thats oh-so-very sensual and intense :P

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

W-O-A-H! that was fan-freaking-tastic! *i bow down to you*
man it was just sooo sooo sooo damn hot! you really took my request seriously! 😉 and a badaaa wala hug especially for you! 🤗 🤗 🤗 ❤️

this scene made me swoon! 😳 😳

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SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

☺️ << that is how i am after the update! Dude, how old are you? This OS was such an high alert wala OS. I am still blushing ☺️ You write sooo well! Keep writing stuffs like these LOLL you are awesome! 👍🏼

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Asma Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

That was soo hot Annie.
I loved this part a lot.
ASYA's romance was soo sizzling and amazing.
You are a wonderful writer dear.

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Semi unres on page 14 😃

rest res 🤣

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kriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Loved it a lot ...plz continue soon...

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Gosh that was...SMOKIN' HOT!!!! Oh my!! Do you know girl that you can keep people hooked for a lifetime with such amazing writing? God! I'm having an adrenaline rush!

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Bhagwan eh!! where do u get these things frm... I f I wasn't so tired and busy I'd give a proper comment but this will have to do 4 now

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Arnavdewaani

@Arnavdewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

wht grammer ...wait lemme breathe first ...

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kdramafan

@kdramafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Oh Shit!!! *pinching your cheek* Way to go, Copy cat!! 😈 Now face my wrath!!! *smothering your faces with kisses* 🤣 They are from Asad, sweetum! 🤪 🤣

Oh, toh aap 9th ishtandard-wa mein hain!!! Mast maula ho aap! You're still in the juniors bachcha! Hahahaha... Heehee... If you ask me I never used to know where my books used to be until I used to get my exams schedule! XD 😆 Notebooks hi hote thhe mere bag mein, coz of the heavy weights of my books breaking my poor back! Damn! They still hurt! I hate all books, except for English! And maybe Bio! 😎
Hans hans!! Aur hans, sweetum!

OMG!!! Annie tum toh mere standards clothes ke jaise badal rahi ho😆 I said I'm in 11th grade. Hum bache kaise ho gaye😆 Kya kare books ko haath lagana padta hai warna I'm dead🤢

Laughing ka kota kal khatam ho gaya bas ab aur nahi warna mujhe sab pagal khane me shift kar denge🤣