OS: Oops! On the Beach? [16+] Note - Pg 19 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Rach.

Omg! This one is nothing less than HOT! I was smiling the whole time while reading it making all the people around me to wonder the 'person' behind that smile :P

Loveee yu sososososoosooo much for this darling. U are really talented ;)

Originally posted by: Samaira32

Res

Un Res - Gosh that was amazing... Guttery guttery... Shuru mein i was like yeh kya hua.. Then i understood acha yeh hua.. 😆

Naah you didnt make me bang my head but I was grinning like an Idiot and my mother asked me "Pharma mein funny kya kya hain..."😆

Well em trying to study for my pracs on my lappy... 😳

Hahahaahha... Study for your practicals, girl! Varna problem ho jaayegi! 😆

Are i was talking about ua story - its amazing and very very guttery... ☺️☺️

I always loved the part where the girl bites her lip and then the guy u know stops her from doing so coz its his job... Loved that part here... Rest all was amazing... 👏

I love that part too!!! Gives me the tingles all the time!😆

Grammatical errors...?? Nahi yaar acha tha.. Uski zaroorat nahi hain... Yaar who noticed them while reading this amazing part... ⭐️

Thankoo, girl!😳

Waise i loved the beach stories... Ahh i so wanna go to a beach... 😆

I know, i tend to talk rubbish in between - so please dont mind.😛. Loved it... When you ask for honest comments maybe someone experienced may give you but for me this was too good and i loved it... 😃

Nah! In fact, I love to read rubbish!! 😆 Mazaa aata hain aur doosro ki zindagi ke baare mein bhi pata chalta hain! 😈

Do write more and if you are cont it please do it soon.. Jaldi kijiye na... Ab intezaar nahi hota... 😃

😆 No more parts to this OS! It's done and done! But I may come up with something on the same lines! You never know...😉 And I mean another story in the same genre!🤪

Em sorry for the late comment, was talking to my bestie... 😊

No problem, girl! It's fine with me! :D

Originally posted by: latanzia

☺️OMG you are a tease girl, Fantastic, absolutely fantastic.

Don't leave me hanging hurry up and write the next part.

Whoo is it hot in here or is it just me

GOSH!!! This was hot☺️

Amazing sweetu... Thank God I read this part after my studies warna studies toh hawa me hoti😆

Wonderful update. Full of surprises. 😳

Come up with many more write ups like this.We have such Brilliant and talented writer😎 with us.

Too hot yaar!!! I think I'll burn☺️😆

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

GOSH!!! This was hot☺️

Amazing sweetu... Thank God I read this part after my studies warna studies toh hawa me hoti😆

Wonderful update. Full of surprises. 😳

Come up with many more write ups like this.We have such Brilliant and talented writer😎 with us.

Too hot yaar!!! I think I'll burn☺️😆

Shifting that same lighter under your bum🤣 Kaunsa Boards??? Ohh dear mera koi boards nahi hai😆 Isiliye toh enjoying out here. Yup yup but why only 7th heaven main cloud 9 pe nahi ho sakti🤣 and books hell se bhi neeche hote🤣

BAS ab mera pet dard kar raha hai. I'll die laughing🤣

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Shifting that same lighter under your bum🤣 Kaunsa Boards??? Ohh dear mera koi boards nahi hai😆 Isiliye toh enjoying out here. Yup yup but why only 7th heaven main cloud 9 pe nahi ho sakti🤣 and books hell se bhi neeche hote🤣

BAS ab mera pet dard kar raha hai. I'll die laughing🤣