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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: SilverFairy
Awsome Loved The OS.

thank you😃

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eshaa_avrc

@eshaa_avrc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

That was simply amazing! I loved loved loved loved it to death. Great job! :)

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sana

@ARHI-SKLOVERS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

it ws awesome don't knw wht they are going to show tomorrow n plz do continue n thnx for d pm...

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: havokhotline
This made me get teary eyed. :(

Just absolutely beautiful!

thank you. i know i am replying after so many days but i had been busy so this is the only time i have to reply.

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: RMamsa

Siddy you are an awesome romance writer! Your imagination and creativity makes me hang onto every word! I simply love your writing babe!

thanks a lot. your comments make me fall in love with my own writing.😃 i will see to it that i keep on doing my best in writing good stuff for you to read.😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Laila2009
You did an excellent job! I liked your different approach in showing how much Zoya cared for Asad that she stood in his way to protect him. You also had the truth (why Zoya helped the bride escape) revealed differently to Asad; a confession by the rapist himself and Asad's realization of the goodness of Zoya and her desire to help others so selflessly.

I thought our cliffhanger was brilliant; you had me at the edge of my seat wanting more. I am glad you gave us a second part. It was rushed and I know you felt pressured to deliver it but it was good.

I hope the PH does as a good a job. They definitely have some competition here and so they are really going to have to do a kick ass job to surpass some of the very talented fan fiction writers here.

Great work!

thanks a lot. i am glad you liked it. the whole confession part took me two hours to come up with.

the cliff hanger was actually the end of my imagination but since this was an OS and i was not going to continue it i had to relieve the readers of their misery so i wrote the 2nd part. which as you pointed out was rushed. thank god it was passable though.

and yes with the amazing FFs i read here surely the PH has to work really hard on their storyline.😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: jeenia123
Lovely. definitely something like this is going to happen today. waiting for the episode...

thank you.😃

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
hey dear. u've written a beautiful OS but y did you not continue it. thank God i was saved of the heart attack cox i read dis just now wen u completed it warna i'm sure i wud hav got one. u put everything together v well. the fight gave the real inside of their feelings for each other, like how dey wud risk their lives for eachother. Asad's feelings were so natural, anybody wud feel the world crashing down on seeing their love in danger or worse dieing. chalo finally monday is here,lets c wat actually happens in QH. u write really well so do cont writing on AsYa.

thank you. i am reliived to know that you atleast were saved from the possible heart attack.😆 i wouldn't want to be blamed for yet another one. and i am writing on asya. my FF is in progress. i haven't updated it in a while. but i will soon update it.😃