Pyaar ka ikarar-actions speak louder than words OS

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Okay i have been brooding on what will happen in QH tomorrow and i came up with this OS. There have been so many OS here for tomorrow that i had decided not to post this. But ASMA, thanks to you i am posting this though i still think that yours was much better than mine. Anyways so here goes my imagination and i have cut out yash-aarti on purpose because i don't know how to put them over here so this is strictly asyaland.😉😆

Asad looked at zoya as zoya looked away. Asad's eyes had a very strange pain that he did not understand and zoya was looking away for the fear that asad might see her heart in her eyes. Suddenly asad snapped out of his trance and stood up abruptly. The sudden motion caught zoya by surprise and zoya's hand was pulled along with asad. Zoya's dhupatta again fell down and asad quickly looked away as zoya looked up at him flustered.

Asad: thand bad rahi hai. Humhe andar chalna chahiye.

Zoya nodded adjusting her dhupatta. Asad offered her his hand but zoya being zoya tried to get up on her own. But since she could not use her right hand she lost her balance. Asad quickly caught hold of her hand which was handcuffed to his and put his right hand on her waist supporting her. Both had an eye lock. Seconds passed as both tried to understand their feelings as well as the others'. Asad helped zoya stand straight and gestured to her to walk inside. Zoya turned to walk but walked right into their handcuffed hands.

Asad was highly irritated. How dumb could this girl get?

Asad: miss farooqui. Aap kya kar rahi hai?

Zoya: allah miyan! What's wrong with you, mr. Khan? maine jaan bhuj kar nahi kiya na. Ab mujhe hathkadi pehne ke chalne ki aadat thodi na hai.

Asad: toh kya mujhe hai? Yaha aadat ki nahi common sense ki zarurat hai. Par aapse common sense ki umeed karna mera pagal pan hoga.

Zoya: dekhiye mr. Khan...

Asad cut her.

Asad: ab yeh sab rehne dijiye aur andar chaliye. Aapko yahan rukna hai toh main kuch nahi kehta par aap shayad bhul rahi hai ki aapke saath main bhi yahan bandha hoon. Toh please andar chaliye.

Zoya wanted to retaliate but shut her mouth and again with some difficulty both walked in.

As soon as they entered their room both of them realised the detailed they had forgotten at the same time. They both would have to share the same bed. Both looked at each other but then looked away.

Zoya: mujhe nind nahi aa rahi.

Asad: mujhe bhi.

But soon zoya couldn't stifle her yawn. Asad looked at her and felt bad. Asad moved towards a chair with zoya being pulled behind him.

Zoya; wait..wait mr. Khan. What are you doing?

Asad did not utter a word and ignored her. He picked up the chair and kept it near the bed.

Asad: aap bed par so jayiye aur main yahan par baithta hoon.

Zoya could help but admire her jahapana. He was alone with her but he wasn't taking advantage of her and had throughout been a gentleman. And now he was making sure that she was comfortable even though it was she who put him in such severe danger along with her. She felt tears sting the back of her eyes. She had put him in danger and there was nothing she could do to reverse it. She thought that maybe she shouldn't have called him and just made a run for it without involving him. she was brought back from her train of thoughts by his voice. That ever so sexy voice.

Asad; miss farooqui aapko ab so jana chahiye.

Zoya nodded and lied on the bed. She looked at asad as he sat on his chair and she could not help but feel relieved at the fact that he was near her. She did not know why but she was sure that evn if they were not handcuffed together still asad would have been with her and that he wouldn't leave her. But being handcuffed like this gave her the assurance that no one could pull him away from her. Asad made himself comfortable on that chair as much as possible and closed his eyes. Zoya looked at his face and couldn't help but smile a little at how innocent and approachable he looked as he slept. Taking in his face as the last thing she closed her eyes and soon the tiredness of the day made her go into a deep peaceful slumber.

Asad slowly opened his eyes to see zoy'a beautiful face peaceful as she slept. He felt this strange urge to touch her face just to see if it was actually so pure and soft. He just stared at her for a long time as he saw her smile fade into a frown. He did not like it that something was disturbing her. Suddenly she caught hold of his hand and again her face started to relax but still there was a little crease in between her eyebrows. Asad placed his index finger lightly on her crease to soften it and when he succeeded he pulled back his finger satisfied as a small smile came on his lips.

Minutes passed and soon even asad started to doze off. All of a sudden he heard a sound from outside which quickly made him alert. He tried to get up but he realised that he would wake up zoya so he stayed put trying to hear any other sound from outside. And then he heard gates opening and people rushing in. Now he had no doubt that their pursuers had come back. He quickly but gently woke up zoya. Zoya at first did not grasp her surroundings but then suddenly she recalled where they were and looked at asad frightened. Asad assured her with his eyes that he would not let any harm come to her and helped her get up. Both walked to the door and asad slowly peeped out all the while covering zoya with his bound hand. He saw the goons barge into the rooms. Asad quickly closed the door and pulled zoya with him towards the window. He helped zoya first to climb out and followed her out. As soon as they stepped out the lights from the jeep focused on them and one of the man's shouted, "vo rahe dono"

Both of them made a run for it but they couldn't reach far before they were surrounded by the men. Asad's main priority was zoya's safety and so he pulled her behind him but even he knew that with one hand bound he could not face the 10 men in front of him especially if zoya was with him. zoya also realised this and also that asad would certainly hold back because in the fight he would try his level best to see that nothing and no one harms her.

Goon 1: ab jab tum dono ko pakad liya hai toh ab tumhi hi humhe bataoge ki dulhan kaha hai.

Asad stiffened as the man eyed zoya. The man walked towards zoya but asad kicked him before he could catch hold of her. And that started the fight. All of them came at them at once. So asad picked up zoya and spun her in such a way that it was her who kicked all of them. Asad was very well holding them down but zoya could feel that asad had started to tire. His breathing was becoming harder. And worse was the fact that all the men were attacking her only and every time asad was intervening with was taking its toll on him. zoya had been so distracted noticing asad that she did not notice the sword that came towards her neck. She was caught unaware and the sudden swish off air caught her notice as she looked her side horrified. But her eyes grew more wide as she saw asad's hand bleeding as he caught the blade mid way in its strike.

Asad was angry. So angry that his gaze alone could have burned the man holding the sword. The man was trying with all his might to pull the sword away but asad's hold was too strong. The man was terrified by the fact that asad seemed least disturbed by the pain in his hand. It seemed like he was made up of stone which and did not feel anything. Well anything but anger.

Zoya looked at asad to tell him to let go of the sword when the movement behind him caught her attention. One of the goons was walking towards them with a rod. He was about to hit asad on his back. But zoya pushed asad with all her might. Asad was so surprised by zoya's move that he let go of the sword and it came down. Zoya came right in front of asad and took the double hit. First thing she felt was the sharp blade of the sword slicing her back. And she hadn't even finished her shrill scream when she felt the rod hit the back of her head.

Asad froze. Everything around him froze. He saw zoya lose her conscious. He felt her limp body fall on his chest. And out of reflex when he put his hand on her back to support her he felt the wet blood on his hand. He was so distracted that he did not see the man in front of him take the second hit and this time it landed on asad's forehead and asad saw the world spin in front of his eyes as he grabbed his head with his free hand. The last thing he noticed was someone pulling zoya from his arms and he tried to fight it. Before he could faint completely he grabbed zoya's hand which was handcuffed to his and fell down with zoya over him.

The men saw asad fall down taking zoya with him and sighed with relief that finally it was over. The groom walked towards the two lying down and snickered.

Groom: dekho toh. Kya chahat hai. Dono ek doosre ke liye mauth se bhi jung kar le.

Goon 2: par ab inka kare kya?

Groom: ek kaam karte hai. In dono ne hi maryam ko bhagaya hai toh inko zaroor pata hoga ki vo kaha hai. Jo pehle hosh mein aayega usse hum maryam ka thikana puchenge. Apne yaar ki jaan bachane ke liye inmese ek koi toh muh zarur kholega.

Goon 1: aur tab tak?

Groom: tab tak inko thikane lagane ke intazamat karte hai. Chalo jungle mein gadha khodne.

The men opened the handcuff and tried to carrhy zoya away but something stopped them. They looked down to realise that asad was holding zoya's hand. One of them tried his best to loosen asad's grip but failed. Atlast three men together tried to pry each finger off her hand with four men pulling asad and zoya away from each other. When both of them were separated again all the men sighed with relief. They put asad and zoya in the jeep and went towards the jungle.

...

Asad slowly became aware of sounds around him. he tried to open his eyes but a strong pain shot through his head. He tried to grab his head when he realised that his hands were tied behind his back. He started to kick and that caught the attention of the men who had captured him. one foot landed on his face and the groom spoke up.

Groom: ab bataiye shehri babu humhari hone wali begum kaha hai?

Asad with great difficulty and through gritted teeth said, "mujhe nahi pata."

Groom: thik hai. Vaise aap jante hi honge ki meri amryum jaan apne nikah se kyun bhagi thi.

Asad just looked at him.

Groom: arey aap kuch jane bina hi iss jhamele mein pad gaye.

Asad was still trying to make sense of everything and the pain in his forehead was not helping at all.

Groom: hum maryam se behead pyaar kartey hai. Lekin vo humhari taraf dekhti bhi nahi thi. Ek din humhara kaboo hum par se choot gaya aur unhe humhare pyaar ka ehsaas karvane ke liye humhe unke saath zabardasti karni padi. Aur aaj humhari kwaish puri hone wali this. Maryam humhari hone hi wali thi jab apne usse bhaga diya. Ab aap hi sochiye humhe kitna ghussa aya hoga aap par aur apki uss sheherni par.

The moment asad heard him mention sheherni he realised that that devil was talking about zoya. And soon he realised that zoya was not with him. this devil..wait did he just say that he had raped his would be wife. And he had flashbacks.

"aap jhante nahi ki maryam ke maa baap uss par zabrdasti kar rahe the."

"aap kabhi meri puri baat kyun nahi sunte hai mr. Khan"

Asad regretted all that he had said to zoya. But right now worry and concern overpowered his guilt and regret.

Asad: zoya kaha hai?

His voice was dry which made it sound like he was pleading. The groom laughed out loud.

Groom: batate hai...nahi nahi dikhate hai.

He signalled the men the pull asad up. As asad stood up he tried to see where zoya was and then his eyes fixed on the deep hole dug in the ground. His eyes opened wide in shock as he saw zoya lying in there unconscious. Anyone would think that she was sleeping. But he knew better. He tried to move forward but soon two swords came up to his neck making him halt and soon everyone caught him tightly.

Goon 1: ab aap hi soch lijiye ki apko iski jaan pyaari hai ya nahi.

To his horror asad saw two men pick up the shovel and start to put the soil over her face.

Asad: rukiye. Bas kijiye. Agar apne aisa kiya toh allah kasam main aapko...

Groom: bas humhe maryam ka pata bata dijiye aur hum apko chod denge.

Asad was struggling to break free not caring the pointed blades grazing the skin of his neck. His heart was jumping as he could see the mud fall on her face. Tears were threatening to spill out of his eyes. The knowledge that if this continued she would die was killing him every passing second. He had to make them stop but he was tied. He had never felt so helpless except for when ayaan was being beaten up by that firoz. But he really did not know where maryam was. How could he tell them. Ou of desperation asad came up with something.

Asad: rukiye. Main batata hoon ki maryam kaha hai.

All the men looked at him and stopped the burying. Asad sighed with relief inwardly.

Asad: main sirf itna janta hoon ki maryam Bhopal gayi hai. Kaha aur kiske saath vo mujhe pata nahi.

The groom looked at him and then told his men to come with him after instructing two of them to stay back and complete the burying job which made asad's temper rise. He also told them to keep an eye on asad and then kill him after they were done with burying the girl. Saying this they left.

Asad again saw the men resume their job. He saw the nearby sword lying there. He slowly moved towards the sword and after much difficulty opened his bonds. As soon as his hands were free asad got up and pounced on the men with shovels like a lion and knocked them out. And then he turned towards the grave to find that it was almost completely full. He quickly bent down and looked at the shovel but decided against using it because that could hurt zoya. He put his hands in the soil and the cuts on his left hand burned. But he ignored it and continued with his job. Soon zoya's face became visible and he dusted away all the mud that was on her face. He continued with his work and after a long time pulled zoya out of the grave. He placed his hand behind her head and inclined it at an angle and placed it on his lap. He started rubbing the palm of her hand.

Asad: zoya! Zoya!! Please zoya! Aakhe kholo. Meri taraf dekho. See i am sorry. Mujhe tumhari puri baat sunni chahiye thi. Dekho main qubool kar raha hoon ki main gakat that. ki tum right thi. Ab please zoya aakhe kholo.

But zoya didn't even flinch. Asad grew desperate and started to threaten her.

Asad: zoya agar tumne ab aakhe nahi kholi toh tum nahi janti main kya karunga.

Still her eyes did not move. At last asad picked her up trying to control his tears. He felt her numb body in his arms become colder. He ran towards the hotel where they had spent the night as the rays of light started to fall on them. Even the morning heat was not helping with her temperature and this was making asad panic. He could feel her breathing become shallow and his heartbeat started to race.

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The end to the episode...sorry but i think the episode tomorrow will have a similar ending where they will leave us on the verge of a heart attack.😛😆 Please tell me your views on this piece of my imagination.

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omg! i never thought i will get such drastic reactions for the cliffhanger.🤣

sorry guys but you see my imagination ended right there 🤢and that was the reason i had not posted this. ab kya karu? still i tried to give it a better ending so hope it is good.

Asad saw the cab he had called for standing at the gate. He dashed towards it and without even thinking opened the back door and put zoya in it. He came to the driver's side and asked the driver to hand over the keys. The driver was flabbergasted and asked for asad's name. Asad very irritably told him his name and as soon as the driver handed him the keys he got into the car with the driver in the side seat.

Asad was driving like his life depended on it. He was over taking trucks at inhumane speed and that earned him curses from the truck drivers. He had on his way asked the driver to direct him to the nearest hospital and as soon as he reached there he got out of the car and went behind. When he picked up zoya he was taken aback by how cold her body was. He gulped down the lump in his throat and quickly ran inside the hospital with zoya in his arms. He entered the doctors cabin with zoya still in his arms. The people who were sitting in already got up with shock.

The doctor: what is this? Aap aise andar kyun aaye?

Asad: doctor. Please aap inhe check kijiye. Inki body ka temperature gir raha hai.

The doctor looked at the pale face of the girl in asad's arm and shuted for a nurse. He told asad to put her down on a stretcher and in the cooridor itself he started to check her pulse. He mentioned to the nurse that zoya's pulse was getting weaker every moment and she had lost blood from the wound on her back. Soon they took her to the OT and asked asad to stay out.

After a little while the doctor came out and told asad that the wound on her back was stitched back but the wound on her head needed to be observed to see if there was any internal bleeding. Also unhone bohot sari mithi inhale kar lit hi so humne unhe oxygen pe rakha hai.

Asad: kya main unse mil sakta hoon?

Doctor: ji aap andar ja sakte hai par vo abhi bhi behosh hai. Do-tin ghanto mein unhe hosh aa jayega. Aur aap please apne zakham bhi treat karva lijiye.

Asad thanked the doctor and walked in to see zoya unconscious on the bed turned to her side. There were siringe stuck to her hands and arms and she had an oxygen mask on her face. Asad's heart twisted at the sight. This girl had risked everything just to save maryam and this is what she got. Asad stood at the door looking at zoya as the nurse checked all the machines. The nurse turned around and saw asad at the door and came to him.

Nurse: aap mere saath chaliye. Apke zakham bhi dekh lete hai.

Asad nodded and followed her out.

Zoya was still under the effect of tranquillizers when she woke up and the first thing she felt was the weight on her face and that made her panic. She remembered being in a muddy place. And she started flaying her hands as she felt herself choke. And then she felt a warm hand hold her. She looked down and then at the person holding her hand. She saw asad and in a moment she felt safe. She forgot all about mud and suffocation.

Asad saw her panic and held her hand to calm her before she hurt herself or opened up her stitches. He saw her try to say something. He quickly bent down and told her "hum safe hai. Aapko ab koi khatra nahi."

But zoya shook her head to deny and quickly regretted it as a pain shot up her spine and went to her head. She moaned and felt asad's grip tighten as if he wanted to absorb her pain for her. She opened her eyes again and this time tried to remove her mask. The nurse noticed this and she came and helped her with the mask. Asad was apprehensive about this but the nurse assured him that now the mask was no longer needed as zoya was awake. As soon as the nurse left asad turned his attention back to zoya.

Zoya gasped once and then looked at asad again.

Zoya: main puchna chahti thi ki kya aap thik hai?

Asad was dumbstruck. This girl had almost died back there. Just now she had panicked when she woke up yet she was asking him whether he was fine. Why?

And the questions came to his mind. Why had he reacted so dramtically when he thought she was dying? Why had it felt that his entire world had collapsed around him with her each shallowing breath?

And he got just one answer.

It was LOVE.

okay now i do hope that this is a better ending to this OS because i am at my limit now.😆 i can't seem to think of anything write now. hope all those who i ended up giving an almost heart attack have forgiven me. i am going to sleep now. so good night and sweet dreams.🥱

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-Shormi- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dis ws brilliant👏...bt y do u hv 2 end it in such a horrible cliffhanger...i dont know wat da cvs will do tomm. bt i surely dont want such an ending 2 da epi...i'll hv an hrtattack😆...tum cvs thodi na ho toh plz cont. karo 4 us i mean weak-hearted people😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ending is a real heart attack stunt. maaar dala yaaar .. superb.
this is the second best Os since yesterday. you made my sunday. but m still hanging in the air wondering k kal kia hoga. everybody are pouring over their thoughts, and its giving me jitters k atlast hoga kia...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved for a while will unres soon😊

Edited

Sorry for late unresing. Busy with studies.

Loved this OS. I could actually feel the pain and Asad's helplessness. Hope to see this happening in the show as well😳

Would love if you continue this. 😛

I love your work and the way you present it. Always stalked your FF 😆 when I wasn't a member on IF. Continue it soon. Lovely😳

Wow you continued it Amazing update.

-Diya😊


Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*Angry glares*
😡

Siddhi you stopped at such a cliffhanger.
Bachon ki jaan logi kya?😆
HMPH!!😡

Girl this OS is marvelous.
I can't believe that you had complex with me.You have got your own charm sweetheart.I just loved this OS.

PSHT*
I'm dying to know what will happen next.
Plz update soon.
I'll edit this reserve once you complete the part.
These are the side effects of tadpying me like this.

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It great!!! I love it!! And heck no! U haven't lost ur touch.. ! :) you've still got the skills darling! and just one complaint ... Why did u stop it there?!!! Don't do this to me! I'm gonna get a heart attack! Please yaar! Continue !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg! i never thought i will get such drastic reactions for the cliffhanger.🤣
sorry guys but you see my imagination ended right there 🤢and that was the reason i had not post this. ab kya karu? i will still try to think of something though. have some patience😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update!
I'm so anxious to know, what's gonna happen next!
Please continue soon!
If the show ends like this tomorrow, everyone is gonna have a heart-attack!
~Sophie :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow really xcited now i hope the show also ends the same way 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey, it was a great OS, i really liked it and thank you so much for th pm.

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