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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Oh lord, that's amazing!!!
I was dying when the pink writing came up after the first bit :P
Thank god I read this after you updated!!!
A great OS love, you should do more :) <3

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

This made me get teary eyed. :(

Just absolutely beautiful!

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RMamsa

@RMamsa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa
omg! i never thought i will get such drastic reactions for the cliffhanger.🤣
sorry guys but you see my imagination ended right there 🤢and that was the reason i had not post this. ab kya karu? i will still try to think of something though. have some patience😎

Siddy you are an awesome romance writer! Your imagination and creativity makes me hang onto every word! I simply love your writing babe!

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

You did an excellent job! I liked your different approach in showing how much Zoya cared for Asad that she stood in his way to protect him. You also had the truth (why Zoya helped the bride escape) revealed differently to Asad; a confession by the rapist himself and Asad's realization of the goodness of Zoya and her desire to help others so selflessly.

I thought our cliffhanger was brilliant; you had me at the edge of my seat wanting more. I am glad you gave us a second part. It was rushed and I know you felt pressured to deliver it but it was good.

I hope the PH does as a good a job. They definitely have some competition here and so they are really going to have to do a kick ass job to surpass some of the very talented fan fiction writers here.

Great work!

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Lovely. definitely something like this is going to happen today. waiting for the episode...

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

hey dear. u've written a beautiful OS but y did you not continue it. thank God i was saved of the heart attack cox i read dis just now wen u completed it warna i'm sure i wud hav got one. u put everything together v well. the fight gave the real inside of their feelings for each other, like how dey wud risk their lives for eachother. Asad's feelings were so natural, anybody wud feel the world crashing down on seeing their love in danger or worse dieing. chalo finally monday is here,lets c wat actually happens in QH. u write really well so do cont writing on AsYa.

Edited by Rarepearl - 12 years ago

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blueflames

@blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

your cliff hanger imagination has got real, i really came to strangle you and then saw the next part updated. so sorry for my initial intentions.😳

your OS kept me awakelast night thinking that it might come true in the show, and here i just saw the e24 segment and i was crying k you already have written the burying n digging part. hats off to your imagination. a pat to you on the shoulder. but stilll fingers crossed for tonight

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: delena90
This was amazing! But i agree with you the show is probably going to leave us with a cliffhanger like your original ending. LOL

thanks and well if they do leave us on that cliffhanger then they should be ready with fire brigade to put of the fire on their pages and on IF.😉😆

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sophie420

🤣 I totally agree! They wouldn't want any Angry Fans!
And thanks for updating the new lovely ending!

lol.😆

and the new ending was not so good though. i didn't have much time to write it properly. but still glad you liked it.😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: kandygrover
Amazing... This was just too good... Plz continue

thank you but i am sorry. this was just a one shot so i won't be continuing it. sorry. but i am already busy with one ff on asya. can't afford to start another.

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