Pyaar ka ikarar-actions speak louder than words OS - Page 4

Oh lord, that's amazing!!!
I was dying when the pink writing came up after the first bit :P
Thank god I read this after you updated!!!
A great OS love, you should do more :) <3

This made me get teary eyed. :(

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa

omg! i never thought i will get such drastic reactions for the cliffhanger.🤣

sorry guys but you see my imagination ended right there 🤢and that was the reason i had not post this. ab kya karu? i will still try to think of something though. have some patience😎

Siddy you are an awesome romance writer! Your imagination and creativity makes me hang onto every word! I simply love your writing babe!

You did an excellent job! I liked your different approach in showing how much Zoya cared for Asad that she stood in his way to protect him. You also had the truth (why Zoya helped the bride escape) revealed differently to Asad; a confession by the rapist himself and Asad's realization of the goodness of Zoya and her desire to help others so selflessly.

Lovely. definitely something like this is going to happen today. waiting for the episode...

hey dear. u've written a beautiful OS but y did you not continue it. thank God i was saved of the heart attack cox i read dis just now wen u completed it warna i'm sure i wud hav got one. u put everything together v well. the fight gave the real inside of their feelings for each other, like how dey wud risk their lives for eachother. Asad's feelings were so natural, anybody wud feel the world crashing down on seeing their love in danger or worse dieing. chalo finally monday is here,lets c wat actually happens in QH. u write really well so do cont writing on AsYa.

your cliff hanger imagination has got real, i really came to strangle you and then saw the next part updated. so sorry for my initial intentions.😳

Originally posted by: delena90

This was amazing! But i agree with you the show is probably going to leave us with a cliffhanger like your original ending. LOL

Originally posted by: sophie420

🤣 I totally agree! They wouldn't want any Angry Fans!

And thanks for updating the new lovely ending!

Originally posted by: kandygrover

Amazing... This was just too good... Plz continue