A JOURNEY TO REMEMBER FOREVER-ASYA OS - Page 8

I said itz bad! N u din even bother to ask me Y?? Not done... :/

Originally posted by: nits_viratholic

I said itz bad! N u din even bother to ask me Y?? Not done... :/

Oye main subah se thoda busy thi
ab aap zara batane ka kasht karengi ki why is this OS not done?
Was it really that bad?😭 😕 😲

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Didu OMG THIS is an awesome piece of writing... i loved each and every part...the eye locks, the hug... i really hope the PH put that lightning and Zoya hugging Asad wala sequence of yours.. 😳 its so romantic... i love how Asad reacted when the goon touched Zoya definitely LOVE... who told you this did not turn well... this is an absolute masterpiece didu... the lovey dovey AsYa are always a treat... ☺️ and i love when Asad said you are mine... those words said it all ☺️ ... i love you for writing this didu... i cant praise you enough because you are just the best 🤗

Beautiful...I've read the first part and I'm like " Allah Miyan what's wrong with me? " *blush* *blush* haven't read the rest yet I'm already 🤪 Asma you are simply the best 👏

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Oye main subah se thoda busy thi
ab aap zara batane ka kasht karengi ki why is this OS not done?
Was it really that bad?😲

hhehehe...awww u r sooo cuuttteee!! OS is not done cz of 3 reasons...
1. Armaan - ridhima ki jungle nyt yaad aa gayii...
2. Asya land pahucha diya...
3. Puri raat chen se so nai payyii..ksg ki hotness and bare chest imagine kar kar ke... 😉

ur OS was d best babe!! Lovvveddd it and luuv u for suchhhaa wonderful asya OS...! Muaahhhz4

Originally posted by: nits_viratholic

hhehehe...awww u r sooo cuuttteee!! OS is not done cz of 3 reasons...
1. Armaan - ridhima ki jungle nyt yaad aa gayii...
2. Asya land pahucha diya...
3. Puri raat chen se so nai payyii..ksg ki hotness and bare chest imagine kar kar ke... 😉

ur OS was d best babe!! Lovvveddd it and luuv u for suchhhaa wonderful asya OS...! Muaahhhz4

For a while I also imagined AR while writing yaar.
Thanks a lot for the sweet appreciation.
I'm glad that you loved the OS so much.
🤗
luv u

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

For a while I also imagined AR while writing yaar.
Thanks a lot for the sweet appreciation.
I'm glad that you loved the OS so much.
🤗
luv u

yaa datss cuz may be no 1 can take der place in DMGians heart...
And u wrote sooo welll i had to appreciate..
Luvv u tooo! Muuaahz! *bear-hugs*

Originally posted by: Rach.

WOWOWOWW sheer brilliance Asma ! Im so glad you finally decide to pen something on Asya and that too SO long. This really made my day at bed (owing to the fact that I just came back from my holidays and contracted a horrible fever and cold ) The length, the concept, the story, the emotion, the passion was shown really really well. Marvelous work, there. *Claps* 👏

My favourite part in the entire OS has to be when Zoya assumes that Asad kissed her collar bone at night. Hayee Im surprised that she didnt open her mouth on that and decided to be quiet. 😉

I loveddd the way you have used a balance of shades (conflicting emotions) across the picture. Everything was beautifully explained with nothing being over the top :D

Thaaanks a million lastly for taking time out to write on Asya owing your prior commitments to AR. (I know you love them a little more than Asya) *grins*

Keep them coming babe ! Love you sosososososo much for this :D

WOW!!
Racha I'm simply overwhelmed to receive such a heart-warming comment from your side girl.
Thanks a lot for such a lovely appreciation.
You were ill.How are you now darling?I hope you are fine now.Get well soon
I'm glad to know that you shared with me all what you liked the most in this OS.I'm really grateful to you for giving me such a detailed review jana.
Thanks again for making me feel so good about this OS.
I love you soo much...
🤗
Take care!

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hey asma

the story is really beautiful

wish something like this happens in tomorrows epi

loved asya's moments nd dialogues

also loved sweet yet romantic moment

u r an awesome writer

nd finally u wrote something on asya

beautifully described n written

do write more