AsYa OS - touch of love - Page 2

Originally posted by: sophie420

Really Nice update!

I loved the part, when she said " I want your six packs!" and also how Asad was silently watching everything!

Please continue and pm me if you do!

~Sophie :)

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

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Riddha do you know how much I love you for writing this OS?
You dedicated this beautiful piece of writing to me.That's soo sweet of you jana.
I'm happy to be the your inspiration jana.
Plz continue writing such beautiful OS.

Coming to the OS,I'm just speechless.👏
It was sooo cute just like you.❤️
Zoe won't change.She should make a permanent arrangement for herself in her jahanpanah's room.😆
I loved it how she admired the photograph and connected with her Zille ilahi's pain.That was written soo beautifully.
I was enjoying so much to see Zoe running here and there to arrange her jahanpanah's belongings.She was so panicked.Poor girl😆
I was smiling like a fool reading the part where Asad simply admired his Ms. New Yourk hoity toity.I can imagine his mischievous smile...
chahe kitni akad dikha de hamara Akdu Ahmed Khan,sach toh yeh hai ki he loves cornering Zoya.He deliberately pinned her to the wall and whispered his question to her making the poor girl loose all her thinking ability.
It's not her fault if her six packs comes soo close to her.I enjoyed her nevrousness and stammering a lot.She appeared flabbergasted.
I can view Asad's smirk in my mind enjoying his museebat getting all fidgety and afraid coz of him.


" because I because I want your 6 pack " told Zoya ' " excuse me??? " replied shocked Asad ' " no I mean my ear ring no nothing " and Zoya gave a small push to Asad and went running out side ' Asad smiled to himself at Zoya's cuteness '

This was so cute...Ahan!! So Akdu Ahmed Khan enjoyed troubling Miss Zoya.kuch toh hua hai kuch hogaya hai...

A marvelous piece of writing.I must say.
Bacha you are a very talented person.I would love to read more such OS and SS from ur side.
I still don't understand why Asad has not returned Zoe's earrings.He does not show any feelings towards Zoya apart from being amused by her.I guess he likes irritating his museebat and possessing the ear ring makes him feel that he has a part of her with him.No doubt he has developed some latent feelings for Zoe.
Anyways,thanks again for the dedication jana.
I loved this OS from the bottom of my heart.
this was one of the best surprises of my life.
Take care!
love you
Muah!

PS-I would love it if you can continue this OS and make it a SS/FF.

Originally posted by: AMMY12

nice

Originally posted by: hifzaa

wow ridz 👏
Loved it , zoya zoya u must shift to jahanpanah room 😆
I really enjoyed the part where asad was smiling n admiring his zoya cuteness
Keep writing more stuff