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_Ridz_

@_Ridz_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: taanuMohurPRIYA
oh ridz ! u rock man ! so nice !!!

thank u so much priya 😊

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

" because I because I want your 6 pack This line had me laughing,smiling and grinning just like a cheshire cat...trust Zoe to come out with something like that!She is just besotted with her Jahapanah's physique and everything about Mr six packs and who could blame her?I also really liked the fact that Asad is warming up to her nosey,child like,miss Hoity toity ways...Zoe is just too cute and Asad is just beginning to realise that too.Asad pinning Zoe to the wall and Zoe getting all afected by him...gosh... I could sense the tension from here..😆...oxygen is required for me too dear!☺️Super loved this piece of writing by you and hope you give us some more of this and like Asma suggested...would love it if you could turn this into an ff!Also thanks for the pm dear!🤗

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sparkle2985

@sparkle2985

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

superb superb superb
no words from me i hope so tat it may happen in show

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naina2010

@naina2010

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Well well well very well written. Lovely. you wrote it as per the real show stages the characters Asad and Zoya.

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_Ridz_

@_Ridz_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: shaz2009
" because I because I want your 6 pack This line had me laughing,smiling and grinning just like a cheshire cat...trust Zoe to come out with something like that!She is just besotted with her Jahapanah's physique and everything about Mr six packs and who could blame her?I also really liked the fact that Asad is warming up to her nosey,child like,miss Hoity toity ways...Zoe is just too cute and Asad is just beginning to realise that too.Asad pinning Zoe to the wall and Zoe getting all afected by him...gosh... I could sense the tension from here..😆...oxygen is required for me too dear!☺️Super loved this piece of writing by you and hope you give us some more of this and like Asma suggested...would love it if you could turn this into an ff!Also thanks for the pm dear!🤗

thank u so much for the lovely comments shaz... means a lot to me... yup Zoya is completely smitten by Asad ... 😳