AsYa OS - touch of love

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Hi guys as you all know I am a KSG addict so thought of writing an AsYa OS' this OS is dedicated to my didu Asma' your writings have been an inspiration for me and hence I am dedicating my 1st OS on AsYa to you' love you didu...

ll AsYa ' touch of LOVE ll

Zoya tip- toed to Asad's room after confirming from phupi that Mr.Khan has gone out for a meeting' she closed the door behind her and started searching for her ear ring' She racked through the whole room but in vain' Atlast she decided to search in the cup- board even if she knew her Jahapana will get furious if he comes to know about this short trip of Zoya into his well maintained cup-board' while searching through it Zoya came across a photo in one of the drawers' it was a very old picture of two small boys' standing happily together' one with a cute dimple and the other with curly hair' it didn't take much time for Zoya to guess the two boys' Zoya sat on the bed and and started analyzing the picture with a smile on her face completely forgetting the purpose of her being in the room and what will happen if Asad comes in between '



" They look so happy together' so innocent' no wonder Mr.Khan loves his brother so much' evident from the picture itself' Allah Miya Mr.Khan looked so cute when he was a child ' he looks good now too if only he comes out of his angry young man avatar ' " ' and Zoya went on a dream journey of the times she has drooled over her Jahapana and his six pack '



Suddenly the sound of the main door opening brought Zoya back to her senses giving a temporary break to her world of dreams where only one man rules ' Zoya immediately kept the photo back in the drawer ' and then she realized what she had done' she had actually messed up Asad's cup- board while searching for the ear ring' " Allah Miya what's wrong with me??? Jahapana bond will murder me if sees all these " at that very moment to her dismay she heard that voice ' the voice she is scared of at times and love at other times ' yes Mr.Khan is back from office' Zoya was petrified after hearing the voice and didn't know what to do.



In the mean time Asad came walking towards his bedroom after asking for a coffee from his Ammi' he was going to open the door when he heard some sound coming from inside ' so he just pushed the door open a little bit to see who has come into his room without his permission ' He was not quite surprised with the person he saw as by now he is quite used to Ms. Newyork's nosey ways '



Zoya was trying to keep all the things into its right place again in the cup- board and in doing so was running from here and there ' Asad was watching all these silently from the door and was smiling at her cuteness ' there has been times when he has been angry with her antics but today however he kept on looking at her and her deeds ' the way she ran like a kid to pick up all the things really amused Asad and his dimples came running on his face ' he was enjoying the fact that Zoya is getting scared from his arrival ' Zoya is the only person who can make him smile without any apparent reason he thought ' he called Ammi intentionally to irritate and scare Zoya more " Ammi I am going to my room ' bring the coffee there " ' Zoya heard that and thought she is dead now ' she was trying hard to find a place to hide when Asad butted in '


Zoya was shocked to see Asad coming in and stood still ' Asad came in with a stern face but in heart he was quite enjoying Zoya's helplessness now ' Zoya was going to explain her random visit to his bed room when Asad started walking towards her and Zoya started going backwards ' Zoya still wanted to say something but couldn't as Asad was looking straight into her eyes ' suddenly she realized there is no more space to go backwards as there is wall behind ' she was trying to run from the side but Asad put his hand on the wall ' she thought she will run from the other side but Asad sensed that and put his hand on the other side too' now Zoya has no way to escape ' the intensity in Asad's look making chills run down Zoya's spine ' atlast Asad broke the ice " what are you doing in my room ?? " ' Zoya was completely taken aback with so much closeness to his jahapana ' she can sense his breaths on her face ' they are just an inch or two away ' " umm I um actually you're my ' " fumbled Zoya ' she feared the effect she normally has when Asad is close to her ' " Yes I asked you something " said Asad again ' " I umm Asa I mean Mr.Khan just came to look for you " was the best sentence she could make at that time ' " why ? " questioned Asad again ' Zoya is normally very fast with her replies but all her vocabulary goes blank when Asad asks her like that ' " because I because I want your 6 pack " told Zoya ' " excuse me??? " replied shocked Asad ' " no I mean my ear ring no nothing " and Zoya gave a small push to Asad and went running out side ' Asad smiled to himself at Zoya's cuteness '


Zoya came running to her room and kept on thinking about the incident ... she remembered how close was Asad to her and blushed thinking about that ...


Hey guys feel free to like , comment , critisize.. frying pans are always welcome..


Love Ridz

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Riddha do you know how much I love you for writing this OS?
You dedicated this beautiful piece of writing to me.That's soo sweet of you jana.
I'm happy to be the your inspiration jana.
Plz continue writing such beautiful OS.

Coming to the OS,I'm just speechless.👏
It was sooo cute just like you.❤️
Zoe won't change.She should make a permanent arrangement for herself in her jahanpanah's room.😆
I loved it how she admired the photograph and connected with her Zille ilahi's pain.That was written soo beautifully.
I was enjoying so much to see Zoe running here and there to arrange her jahanpanah's belongings.She was so panicked.Poor girl😆
I was smiling like a fool reading the part where Asad simply admired his Ms. New Yourk hoity toity.I can imagine his mischievous smile...
chahe kitni akad dikha de hamara Akdu Ahmed Khan,sach toh yeh hai ki he loves cornering Zoya.He deliberately pinned her to the wall and whispered his question to her making the poor girl loose all her thinking ability.
It's not her fault if her six packs comes soo close to her.I enjoyed her nevrousness and stammering a lot.She appeared flabbergasted.
I can view Asad's smirk in my mind enjoying his museebat getting all fidgety and afraid coz of him.


" because I because I want your 6 pack " told Zoya ' " excuse me??? " replied shocked Asad ' " no I mean my ear ring no nothing " and Zoya gave a small push to Asad and went running out side ' Asad smiled to himself at Zoya's cuteness '

This was so cute...Ahan!! So Akdu Ahmed Khan enjoyed troubling Miss Zoya.kuch toh hua hai kuch hogaya hai...

A marvelous piece of writing.I must say.
Bacha you are a very talented person.I would love to read more such OS and SS from ur side.
I still don't understand why Asad has not returned Zoe's earrings.He does not show any feelings towards Zoya apart from being amused by her.I guess he likes irritating his museebat and possessing the ear ring makes him feel that he has a part of her with him.No doubt he has developed some latent feelings for Zoe.
Anyways,thanks again for the dedication jana.
I loved this OS from the bottom of my heart.
this was one of the best surprises of my life.
Take care!
love you
Muah!

PS-I would love it if you can continue this OS and make it a SS/FF.


Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww beautiful OS ridz
loved it
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This SO needs to happen on the show! 😆

'I want your six-packs..no, I mean my earring' 🤣 Loved it! Really cute! 😳
-Raina
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luk who wrote sumthing?😲...Riddha baby is it ur 1st attempt on writing?its really fab girl👏 bt y did it end so soon😭...oye ise cont kar yaar aur thoda romance ka tadka badha😉...bdw whn zo said-i want ur 6 pack i ws lyk🤣...& asad enjoying his hoity toity's cuteness?hayye ALLAH do i luv him or wat😳...PM ki kya zarurat thi main toh ainvi bhi comment karti😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amor.

wowww beautiful OS ridz
loved it
thnx for the pm



i am so glad u liked it khushi... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs

This SO needs to happen on the show! 😆


'I want your six-packs..no, I mean my earring' 🤣 Loved it! Really cute! 😳
-Raina



thank u so much Raina for ur lovely comments.. i am so happy u liked my work 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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'I want your six-packs'!!!!! 🤣 that is something zoya would definitely say!!!!! lovely os dear!! do pm me if u plan to continue... :)
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Originally posted by: ras224

luk who wrote sumthing?😲...Riddha baby is it ur 1st attempt on writing?its really fab girl👏 bt y did it end so soon😭...oye ise cont kar yaar aur thoda romance ka tadka badha😉...bdw whn zo said-i want ur 6 pack i ws lyk🤣...& asad enjoying his hoity toity's cuteness?hayye ALLAH do i luv him or wat😳...PM ki kya zarurat thi main toh ainvi bhi comment karti😆




hehehe 😆 lolz Rasu ur comments are always alag che... thank u so much for loving it... ok next time teko pm nehi karungi 😆 love you
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Originally posted by: darkangel93

'I want your six-packs'!!!!! 🤣 that is something zoya would definitely say!!!!! lovely os dear!! do pm me if u plan to continue... :)



thank u so much dear for liking it.. will surely pm you if i continue... 😊

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