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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AussieChick

'"Bhaijaan, stop blushing! We're not asking you to kiss her! Nuzhat's right! Be a man!" Ayaan added.'
Rofl!!
Yeah, be a man Asad 🤣
The last part.
EEEKS!!!!
Adorable hun, just adorable...
Who knew he could be so romantic :P
Thanks for the pm, and nope, I don't watch MB, but I am planning to...
VDs hot :P


thank you for being so encouraging and reading my SS!!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ! I've read all your parts but being a bit busy with my work, didnt get time to comment on them :)

Superb SS, really ! I loved reading all of them and the confession in the end was lovely !!

Thank you soo much for writing on Asya. You really write well darling. Keep them coming :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks honey.

the ending was perfect.
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaa i am in mb forum 2

awww well done .ending was mindblowing
Edited by afsuu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the ss :-) please pm me when you write something new

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Let me tell you one thing that you are an incredible and amazingly
descriptive writer!!! Every scene and every word that you have written
has been like a movie playing infront of my eyes.
To be honest i came to read this because a man just walked out of my
life like 10 minutes ago annd i really needed some cheering up. And
so i thought why not a romantic story? And when i read this i feel
amazed and i feel amazing so thank you. You unknowingly brought
me out of a very sad phase in my life
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sucker4arhiluv

Let me tell you one thing that you are an incredible and amazingly

descriptive writer!!! Every scene and every word that you have written
has been like a movie playing infront of my eyes.
To be honest i came to read this because a man just walked out of my
life like 10 minutes ago annd i really needed some cheering up. And
so i thought why not a romantic story? And when i read this i feel
amazed and i feel amazing so thank you. You unknowingly brought
me out of a very sad phase in my life

omg thank u so much!!! it means a lot to me!!! and im SO glad that my story helped u cheer up!!! 😊 n dnt worry, this is just a bad phase of ur life n it'll pass soon...😊 tc!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

EDITED**

I'm speechless.
This part was sooo beautiful.
The whole morning breakfast session with the surprise arrival of step-siblings was just amazing..
I loved the way everyone teased ASYA...
Dilshad is such a sweetheart and Asad was sooo cute.
The proposal was sooo beautiful.For a moment I felt as if is it really Asad Ahmed Khan speaking such beautiful lines...
Zoe is sooo lucky.
All in all the whole part was mindblowing.
I don't have enough words to appreciate this part yaar.
I loved the bonding between the siblings a lot.
ASYA were amazing..
I wish this ff didn't end here but anyways I'll be waiting eagerly for the next ff from your side.
You are a wonderful writer dear.
Take care!

THANK YOU SO MUCH, dear!!!!! 😃 thank you for reading and appreciating my story... if it hadn't been for readers like you, i wouldn't have been writing it in the first place!!! will definitely write more and let you know when i do... 😊 thank you once again!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice SS; really enjoyed reading!

-Sona

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