AsYa SS: Kyun?! *updated!* last part! pg18 - Page 17

Originally posted by: sparikh

Nice SS; really enjoyed reading!

-Sona

Originally posted by: mandy15

fabulous story dear:)😃

Originally posted by: darkangel93

omg thank u so much!!! it means a lot to me!!! and im SO glad that my story helped u cheer up!!! 😊 n dnt worry, this is just a bad phase of ur life n it'll pass soon...😊 tc!!!

Originally posted by: sucker4arhiluv

You dont need to thank me! As a reader it is our duty to appreciate the work that you have done for us, and all i did was appreciate! 😃 You spend all this time and energy to write something so beautiful for all of us to read and the least that we can do is compliment and appreciate you r efforts!

Arz Kiya Hai:

"Na chocolates na flowers, na Salman Ki Movie

Type karke humko khush kardiya Darkangel 93"

😉

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

hey dear, u've done an xtremely wonderful job wid dis ss. i hav loved it! keep it up!

the story was too gud. the fight where Asad's beaten blue black was sad but the confession dat came wid it from both ASYA was beautiful. the anger and fierceness in Asad's eyes conveyed it all, his love for Zoya and dat he wud kill anyone trying to hurt his love. Zoya was so adorable wen she kept muttering herself wen Asad regained concious. their passionate moment was beautiful and Asad's comment dat it was zoya's fault of being irrisistible dat he was losing himself was cute. Asad's change in character was the best. how he blushed infront of his family, when they teased him about Zoya. his proposal was heart touching, showing da depths of his love for her dat he wud cross all boundaries just to b wid her if she wud b waiting for him.

it was awesome! next time u write on AsYa, i want you to kindly pm me too.