AsYa OS : Ummeed

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

please please please continue. i loved your dialogues. so real. i love this. please make this an ff.

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This was beautiful... i loved loved loved the ending

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

The start bit was amazing.
This is why nikhat needs to do...
But I don't think she will :P
I LOVED the last part!!!
The way they sort off talked bout their feelings and stuff.
And how zoya fainted xD
An amazing OS, a bit refreshing, made me smile after crying for an hour over that last epi (Ayaan. Why does he have to be so gawjus?)
I sure chose the wrong time for watching QH.
Should've started in Feb or somfin.
Now I'm off to cry more :P
Thanks for the pm :)

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sparkle2985

@sparkle2985

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

u write v v beautifully waiting for ur next os and thanks for pm

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow loved it...

thanks for the pm

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awsm os.
Suberb one.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

very well written..😊

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purplepixie

@purplepixie

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

RADHA!!!

I cnt seem to close my mouth!!! KKGSR ke jaise big O ban gaya hai mere muh pe!!

N my friends are staring at me bcoz they got yet another proof dat i m crazy... bt i dnt care..

This was fantastic!! Simple sweet yet superb!!

Especially the last part!!! Lovely!

Love and Sleep!

Nyc!!

Keep writng and keep pming...Insha Allah aap par hazaaron lakhon likes n comments ki barsaat hoti rahe!!!

Love

Pal

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

HOW WOMAN?! How do you manage to blow me away every single time?

Your command over the language is absolutely amazing. :D And I loved how subtle this entire thing was. :D

Amazing job, you! :) Write more!

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tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

you my dear friend are an awesome writer ..what a beautiful emotional piece ,,,

bakhuda aap behad hi umda phankaara hai ... iss behatrin kissgoyi ke liye mubarakbaad,,,,

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